Hey arabela! Intriguing story. I like it, especially the moments of Draco-torture. heh heh. Like this one:
"You were?" Julie asked hopefully.
"You were?" Ginny said, frightened, at the same time.
"Yes, I was." Draco said defensively.
Not as powerful out of context, but still. It's always a delight to see Mr. Unflappable flapped.
Good story, Bela! I'm so glad FW told me about it! I look forward to reading more of your writing...where is it? he,he
Thanks!
Hey
i really liked this, cant wait to see more ^_^
keep up the kewl work :D
xx
Author's Response: hehe <33 thanks!
How sweet!! Only, it raises more questions than it answers. I think that by introducing these new characters, and a complicated situation, you created something that should be more than a one-shot.
But, hell. I still enjoyed it! It was interesting to feel, through Draco, that shock from the past that seeing Ginny must have been for him. Leaves us wondering if they ever will go back...
Author's Response: well thank you! I think you're right, in that there sort of needs to be more. Don't worry, it's coming, slowly but surely. thanks for reading =)
i know i know but this should really be a short story sorry but i just resally fell in love with your writing
Author's Response: hehe, thank you so much!
I really enjoyed this story, partly because it left me with more questions than it answered. Just why did Draco, and then Ginny, leave the wizarding world? What was their past relationship like? What's going to happen in the future? Now I get to imagine the answers to all of them. Thanks for posting!
Author's Response: wow, thanks! I really appreciate your thoughts ^_^
ohhh...that's so good. this is one of those stories you can read again and again, and not get sick of it. please keep writing, this is amazing!
Author's Response: hehe, thank you!!!
i like the story but what made them go there and what was ginny running away from
Author's Response: thanks...that was all just, sort of part of the mystery I guess. Like, it doesn't matter *what* brought them there, just *that* they were brought there. well, we'll see what happens. thanks for reading!
What a fabulous, fabulous one shot! I was glued to my seat, entwined in the tale and the slow unfolding of the characters. I am partial to pub scenes and a slightly drunk Draco so this was heaven! Not only was this well written but it was wholly believable. Good job!
"Here's to you, 'bela!"
Author's Response: aww, thanks so much!!! I'm so glad you read it *blushes* yeah...I always liked the idea of them living as Muggles for awhile during the war. ah, thank you!!
Sweetie, this is awesome. I wish you'd write it as a chaptered fanfic... but whatever. :) You write Draco perfectly, and poor Ginny... what happened to her? Why is she running away? Ugh, so many unanswered questions... Haha. Anywho, it's an amazing one-shot. :)
Author's Response: aw, thank you!!! I really appreciate it. We'll see what happens, though, yeah? *shifty* hehe <3
! -- Interesting idea. You've got a lot of mysteries popping up, and just enough intrigue to keep it interesting w/o being overly confusing. ^_^
Author's Response: thanks!! =)
Outstanding. I'm looking forward to reading more. The idea of Draco and Ginny leaving their previous lives is fantastic. That he has decided to help Ginny is priceless. Thanks.
Author's Response: well, right now this is just a oneshot, but we'll see where the muses lead me =) thanks so much!!
I loved it and I'm really sad that's the end of it. Have you considered going on with the story 'cause I could see this plot lasting awhile. I'd definitely read it. Great job!
Author's Response: I've considered it, but I'm not sure I have enough for a whole story...we'll see, though. Thanks! I really appreciate that ^_^
I like this. It had that Casablanca feel. What was that line? 'Of all the gin joints in the world, why did she have to walk into mine?'
Author's Response: haha, thanks!! what's even funnier...I've actually never seen Casablanca the whole way through. =P
you could definitely go on quite a bit with this fic. I enjoyed it. :) I'm really curious as to what happened to make Ginny leave though.
Author's Response: I'm...eh, considering it. We'll see. You really think so? Well, thanks for reading!!!
Hey, this is good. Did not go into much detail, but we still know what happened, how the characters are, etc. Very good job.
Author's Response: hehe, thanks so much!