Name: Corinne85 reviewed Take My Breath Away on May 07, 2007 10:54 am
Yay the orphanage! I loved the ch. cant wait to see more about the weasly family..maybe? Or getting ready for the babies.

Author's Response: Thanks Corinne! More coming soon! The orphanage will be up next!
Name: ForeverAnAngel reviewed Take My Breath Away on May 07, 2007 10:50 am
Still a great fic! Looking forward to the next update :D

Author's Response: Thanks ForeverAnAngel! Glad you're enjoying! More up soon!
Name: joey101 reviewed Take My Breath Away on May 07, 2007 10:06 am
update sooner!

Author's Response: LOL! I'll try joey! Thanks for reading!
Name: DracoGinnyLover reviewed Take My Breath Away on May 07, 2007 08:05 am
I loved this chapter. Ron and Luna that is great they are good together. I thought for a min. that Harry was really going to leave Pansy I am glad that he couldn't. Not much on Draco and Ginny this time but that is ok in some weird way...lol! I bet he is taking her to the orphanage though. I love Snape and Mionie in this story they are just so good together. Good Luck on the next and I am waiting! ;)

Author's Response: Thanks DracoGinnyLover! I like the idea of a RW/LL pairing! No, I had to have Harry be different! He is truly falling for Pansy, he wants her to be happy. I thought I had a good bit on D/G, or at least as much as the others... teehee! Glad you didn't mind! Glad you like my SS/HG! More up soon!
Name: kellbell930 reviewed Take My Breath Away on May 07, 2007 04:43 am
Heee! Very serious consideration that is. Haha I loved the view of all the couples. Ron's a little slow on the uptake sometimes but thats why I love him. I thought it was so cute that Luna wanted to cook for him. And poor Pansy. I definitely know where she's coming from but I'm glad Harry came back. More men need to take notes from him!! And we're moving right along with the pregnancy. 7 months, am I right? I wonder what's up next for our 2 main couples. And what's Draco up to on Saturday? It seems calm now but thats how it usually is before the storm. I cant wait to find out the babies sexes and what you are going to name them! Brilliant chapter! I love it and cant wait for the next update! =)

Author's Response: Thanks Kell! Yep have to consider all the possibilities! teehee! Yeah, I like Ron too! I can relate to Pansy too! Harry's falling for her, she just has to believe it! Yep this chapter was 7 months! More coming soon!
Name: Hajra reviewed Take My Breath Away on May 07, 2007 04:41 am
I'm glad everything is working out! It's wonderful! It's put a huge grin on my face and made me feel all fuzzy inside!

Author's Response: Thanks Hajra! Always glad to make someone smile and feel fuzzy! teehee!
Name: johnsgurl51506 reviewed Since You've Been Gone on May 05, 2007 10:32 am
ILOVE LOVE LOVE IT!!! Dont stop the story is getting really good!!!

Author's Response: Thanks! Don't worry, the next chapter is with my beta now!
Name: abby reviewed Since You've Been Gone on May 03, 2007 04:12 pm
I love it! Its really, really good!!!!!!!!!

Author's Response: Thanks so much abby! Glad you're enjoying it!
Name: Corinne85 reviewed Since You've Been Gone on May 01, 2007 06:27 pm
Wonderful chapter. A nice little destresser from the week before finals. Great wrap up of the lucius problem. I hope to see more with the adoptions of the orphanage and of harry and Pansy.

Author's Response: Thank you Corinne85! Glad I could help before your finals! Yep, more of all coming up soon!
Name: tracylynn29 reviewed Since You've Been Gone on May 01, 2007 04:54 pm
I just love this story, I can not wait until the next chapter to find out what happens next.

Author's Response: Thanks tracylynn! More is coming soon--my beta has the next chapter!
Name: Jordanza reviewed Since You've Been Gone on Apr 30, 2007 11:06 pm
aw great chapter! i can't wait till the next one!!

Author's Response: Thanks jordanza! More up soon! ;-)
Name: Hopeless reviewed Since You've Been Gone on Apr 30, 2007 02:37 pm
oh i really hadnt thought about harry and pansy together, but u putting them in this story is really great. love the couple and this story!

Author's Response: Thanks Hopeless! I have seen them together a couple times, but didn't intend it here. The idea just came to me while I was writing...
Name: adorame06 reviewed Since You've Been Gone on Apr 30, 2007 02:11 pm
Oh I am so glad that you made Lucius show some feelings! You did a fine job on this chapter. I really can't wait till you post another chapter, this is a wonderfuly written story!

Author's Response: Thank you adorame! I am so happy you liked it and my Lucius and my story! More coming soon, I just sent off the next chapter to my wonderful beta!
Name: Blueeyedbrunette reviewed Since You've Been Gone on Apr 30, 2007 12:37 pm
very nice!

Author's Response: Thank you!
Name: Dragonness186 reviewed Since You've Been Gone on Apr 30, 2007 12:24 pm
Things are really falling into place, aren't they? I just keep thinking about the birth and the potion and everything, though i think that it will be really fun if Snape passed out!! lol... This chapter did certainly take longer than usual, but it's a good chapter! Keep it up and keep updating sooner. Ps: I've begun working on the altar i promissed!

Author's Response: Thanks Dragonness! :D One thing to know about me is this--my fics will always have angst, and they will always fall into place! Birth won't be much longer! I've had some real life issues lately, but never fear, I've finished the next chapter and sent it off to my beta. ((Loving that alter--good work!))
Name: joey101 reviewed Since You've Been Gone on Apr 30, 2007 10:00 am
AWWWW I LOVE IT!!!!! pleaz update sooner....

Author's Response: Thanks joey! I'll have more up soon!
Name: Bitter_thymes reviewed Since You've Been Gone on Apr 30, 2007 06:34 am
Oooh, you got me. I got all bleary eyed at both your treatments of Lucius and Pansy. Well done.

Author's Response: Thanks bitter_thymes! Glad I could affect you! ;-)
Name: club24 reviewed Since You've Been Gone on Apr 30, 2007 06:10 am
I love this chapter! I think this is the first story where you see Lucius in his soft spot. Good job!

Author's Response: Thanks club24! So happy you're enjoying it!
Name: Cindah reviewed Since You've Been Gone on Apr 30, 2007 06:09 am
!!!!

Crying Lucius almost had me crying - AT WORK!

There was definite tearage.

This is such a good story; I *swear* I hang on your every word. There was much excitement this morning when the update email was in my inbox!

Author's Response: Thanks so much Cindah! I am glad, that's what I was going for! ;-) If I was going to try to redeem him, it had to be heart-wrenching! More coming soon, I've just sent the next chapter to my beta!
Name: Persephone33 reviewed Since You've Been Gone on Apr 30, 2007 05:02 am
I've been reading for a while, and I really enjoy this story. I was surprised and pleased at Lucius' emotional outburst, and he's redeemed enough for me. He apologised! I ADORE the Harry/Pansy subplot... so perfect, and best of all, perhaps, are the chapter titles. Your musical choices ROCK! Thanks for the update!

Author's Response: Thanks Persephone! So happy you like it! Glad I could redeem him, it was a hard thing to do with the way he's been acting! ;-) Glad you like my HP/PP! More coming soon!
Name: DracoGinnyLover reviewed Since You've Been Gone on Apr 30, 2007 03:25 am
as always I love this story. I am glad that Sev went and talked to Lucius. Got him thinking it is good for him...lol! Poor Pansy isn't knowing what is hitting her...lol! Can't wait to read more. Luck with it *like u need it .. not* TTFN! ;)
Name: Embellished reviewed Since You've Been Gone on Apr 30, 2007 02:43 am

I'm not sure Lucius's story quite redeems him, though it looks like he is on the right path, as long as he makes the changes he needs to. It does help to know why he acted that way, though.

 

The relative calm at the end of this chapter makes me nervous. What new challenge do you have in store for the characters? I guess I'll just have to wait and see. Thanks for the update!

Name: kellbell930 reviewed What's Love Got To Do With It? on Apr 29, 2007 11:37 pm
Actually I loved this chapter so much I thought I'd leave two reviews.

"After she was out of sight, Lucius turned to clear the air with his son, but as he looked at Draco, his heart shattered.'

I think that was my favorite line. I really liked that whole section and it was fabulously written. Full of raw emotion and feeling and wonderfully written. I loved that part!

Author's Response: Thanks Kell! ;-) I never mind reviews! LOL I am happy you liked that. I was going for his ache, his pain. It was emotional, and a little hard to write.
Name: kellbell930 reviewed Since You've Been Gone on Apr 29, 2007 11:34 pm
Aww! Lucius! That was very cute. And I love when things sort themselves out! Severus and Hermione are moving right along and I cant wait to see what comes up next for them. Draco and Ginny are still working on it which I'm glad, and now that the whole Lucius incident is settled I cant wait to see what happens next. Oh but crying!Lucius was just very well written. Some would consider it OOC but I really dont think it was. He had just held everything in and needed to purge. Everyone does. And Hrry and Pansy! Definitely cant wait to see where that goes! Love it still and I cant wait to read more! Update soon!!

Author's Response: Thanks kell! Yep, our main couples are sorted. (whew) I struggled with the crying part, even went so far as asking SW if I should take it out and she said definitely not. ;-) Glad you are liking my HP/PP! More coming soon!
Name: ForeverAnAngel reviewed Since You've Been Gone on Apr 29, 2007 09:32 pm
I thought it was good, what's been written about Lucius! Good chapter :D

Author's Response: Thanks so much ForeverAngel! Glad you liked my Lucius part!
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