awww. that was extreemly sweet, but it was ruined becuse of ginny drunk,,,,,damn drunkness. Great chapie.
I'm a sucker for the angty fluff. I can see where this is going, but can't wait to read more
He should hurt. Obviously she never moved on. But I like her assertive too.
Jerk! Now come back begging...
aww im loving this i hope ginny remembers in the morning that draco said he loves her i think they both deserve love from each other please please update soon keep up the good work
xx
Another awesome chapter! I love the ending, it was sweet and had just the right amount of a cliffhanger. Can't wait for more!
Wow, these first three chapters have all been amazing and so so sad. This is going to be so depressing and angsty, isn't it? I love this and I look forward to the next update!
"Oh, Ginny-girl," he whispered, holding her close to his breaking heart.
You made me cry. That was the line that did it. Normally I don't get so lost in a story that I can cry, but this chapter just did me in. Completely. *runs off to think happy thoughts*
Dear Draco,
If you exit that bed, the hammer that has currently been used to bludgeon my heart on numerable instances before this, shall be put to other (more creative and unpleasant) uses.
No Love
Azadi
As for you fallenwitch: your writing is yet again superb. This line made my heart clench with despair: “He was instantly transported back to a girl he once knew, to a boy who no longer existed, to a place long since destroyed. It was this lost world that he dreamed about and longed for.” Why does he long for it when it so very clearly there? Why is that place destroyed? Why? Why? WHY? I guess we shall just have to wait and see. Fantastic chapter, I look forward to your next update :D!
Oh my dear God, you're making me cry. Your Draco is so very similar to mine, and yet he does his thing so much better. Mine, of course, is a bumbling teenager, and yours is an adult. Although, he may still be bumbling. Hmm.
Oh, you're cruel and twisted. And this is certainly one of the better stories. I contually find myself amazed by the phrases you come up with. How lucky I am to learn from such a writer.
Lauren
Amazing... More of Draco's POV!! Very well written, amazing, and generally wonderful. Thank you so much!
I'm really enjoying this story, i love the way Draco checks to see where Ginny's wand is...he seems a little afraid of her! I hope he's still there when she wakes up! x
Damn it. So close.
fallenwitch, you know I adore you, but if he leaves before she wakes up, I shall be very, very cross.
Of course the last review was a compliment! Who else can twist up my insides til I'm miserable? Just you!
It's amazing how miserable Draco and Ginny have made each other, and themselves. It almost makes me wonder if they are capable of happiness anymore, despite having found each other again. Thanks for the update!
I´m kind of lost!!!! The prison cell?? He memorized her address? Why is she drinking??? I need some air here!!!! I really like your stories!!!
Aww, another lovely, heartwrenching chapter. I really do love this fic.
Thank you for the update! Nice to see that Draco isn't desperate enough to sleep with Ginny if she's drunk. Please update again soon!
That was a scene from the past, right? Kinda confused me.
Author's Response: Nope. It was a scene from the present. I think my writing style and the way I've constructed this fic may be a bit confusing. Don't hesitate to ask questions! - fallenwitch
*sigh*ohthankGod.
*whew*
haha, I love how she got exasperated. "Of course I'm drunk. ...duh." xP
Author's Response: Hi Bela, yes that infamous line is back! Glad you're still enjoying this one. Thanks for the review! -fallenwitch
Author's Response: Hi Bela, yes that infamous line is back! Glad you're still enjoying this one. Thanks for the review! -fallenwitch
O_O He better not leave her, the indecisive git. I'm excited for more back story as to why Draco felt he had to leave Ginny. Great chapter :).
Author's Response: Why does everyone call my Draco names? *laughs* Yes, more back story coming up. Thank you for the review. I loved it! -fallenwitch
Orphan?? This story looks amazing!!! I really love the way you portray Draco!!! Still I want to beat up the guy for going incendio on Ginny´s address!!! But I´ll know they´ll find each other, right? ;) I know I´m not the only one cheering for this story, PLEASE GO ON!!!!
Author's Response: Yes, orphan, isn't that awful? I would let you have at Draco and beat him up except that I need him for the rest of my fic. Good to hear that you're enjoying this bumpy ride so far. Yes, much more to come! Appreciate your review. - fallenwitch
I actually remember reading this fic, and I know it's a really good one! I always love reading your works because you write angst without trying so damn hard to make it look sappy! It's honest and warm -- just the way I love it!
Unless you change the course of this story, I know how the next chapters are going to be like -- and I pray that you will finish this journey because I didn't mind taking this trip the 2nd time around! Keep up the great work! :D
Author's Response: Thank you for the amazing review, VioletJersey. I hope you enjoy this journey the second time around, and I am thrilled that you like my particular brand of angst. It's a hard sell! - fallenwitch
Very well done so far. Would enjoy more...::wistful tone::
Author's Response: Thank you. More is coming. A lot more. - fallenwitch
I love that moment in the kitchen when she makes her presence known, the coughing and spluttering. So this is a fine little mystery we have set up, why Draco so obviously still wants her but doesn't dare go after her, even after the war is ended. Can't wait to read more.
Author's Response: Hi Phae, that was my favorite part as well. Thanks for encapsulating my plot so succinctly. Appreciate your thoughts, as always. - fallenwitch
is that it? i hope theres more...
have you posted this any were else because i think i've read it before
Author's Response: There's much more. This is just the beginning. Yes, you've probably read it over on Portkey. I've revised it and am reposting it - this time with an ending! Thanks for your review. - fallenwitch