I love your stories!
Why did the idiot incendio?
Looking forward to the next installment.
Author's Response: You do? Thanks, Judibry! The reasons for that will become clear, eventually. You know it takes awhile for that kind of thing in my fics. Glad you are enjoying this one & it's always great to hear from you! -fallenwitch
awesome =)
Author's Response: Thank you! - fallenwitch
! The intrigue, the mystery!!!
Wonderful, amazing, fabulous. There isn't really much I can comment on apart from the mystery, and the plot, both of which are very, very good... I can't wait for more...
Author's Response: Thank you. What is a fic without intrigue and mystery to keep the reader reading? *laughs* More is coming! -fallenwitch
Thank you for updating! Please update again soon!
Author's Response: You're welcome. I plan to update regularly all the way to the end. Thanks for your review! -fallenwitch
Oh, this is such an amazing beginning! So well written, and a really good description of their relationship.
Author's Response: Wow, I will suck up this praise like a shameless sponge because writing from Ginny's POV is not my forte - not even close. I'm always afraid reading it will make folks want to scratch their eyeballs out - so thank you very much, nun outfits are cool! -fallenwitch
This is an AWESOME story! You're an amazing writer! I can't wait for more!
Author's Response: Wow, thank you! More is coming. - fallenwitch
Nooooooooo!!!! Why would he do that? Loved it by the way!
Author's Response: Yeeeeeesssssss!!!! The explanation is coming... eventually. Thanks for the wonderful review! - fallenwitch
Ah! Awesome story! I anna know what happened between them though.
Author's Response: Thank you. It will all be revealed - eventually. Yep, it will. -fallenwitch
He burned the letter?! What is going on? Please update soon, because im quickly falling in love with this story. Well done!
Author's Response: Yep, he burned it! Falling in love with this story? Oh, that's music to my ears because it's been quite unloved over the years. Thanks for the awesome review! -fallenwitch
Maybe he struck a deal with someone for his freedom? The Ministry? I wonder why Ginny was so eager to be around him, when she promised to guard her heart better this time round. Why doesn't she have her guard up? She seemed too relaxed around Draco for me. So far, very interesting. -hops around- Cheerio!
Author's Response: Hello Moonyk! Good questions. Ginny let down her guard when she saw her picture by Draco's bedside, assuming that he must have some fairly deep feelings for her to keep it around and close despite kicking her out of his life earlier. However, I think your skepticism is well founded. Perhaps she was too relaxed around him. We'll see. Thanks for the review! -fallenwitch
Wow, this is great so far! I want to know Draco's motivations for being a total...well, you know :P.
Author's Response: Hello eliagem! Thank you. Draco's motivations will become clearer as we go on. I'm glad you're enjoying this tale so far & thanks for the wonderful review. -fallenwitch
The story is starting to come back to me now. :) I think what I like best about this chapter is Ginny's reactions to Draco. I love her confusion and ultimately her acceptance. Thanks for posting!
Author's Response: Thank you, Embellished. I love the way you follow by the emotional paths of my characters. It is what I focus on most when writing - and not the snark, contrary to popular opinion! - fallenwitch
awww, Draco =(
I hate that he's being such a jerk about this.
gah, you write things so well, I already know a little where we're headed and I'm not "WHAT?! WHY ARE YOU DOING THAT?!" =P
Author's Response: Yes, Bela, you do know where this is headed. Fasten your seatbelt. I think it may get a bit bumpy before it's all over. Thank you for your wonderful review and support! - fallenwitch
I get such a happy rush seeing this posted!!!!! You've done a great job. It's a wonderful story and all of your fans [me, me, me!] appreciate it. Smooches!
Author's Response: Thank you, Marcia. You are wonderful, wonderful, wonderful! - fallenwitch
I don't know where to start. Poor, poor Draco. I got so caught up in reading this chapter that I was thinking, "That poor boy. He needs a hug, some love, something." And then I came crashing back to reality--it's just a story. Oh, yeah. Well, my heart still aches for him.
Once again, fallenwitch, the following line sums up for me why I love your fics:
What if he, heaven forbid, uttered completely inappropriate comments of questionable emotional content?
I love the reasons 'your' Draco becomes horrified, it's hilariously entertaining.
I know this, I'm going to be beating down your (virtual) door for the next chapter!
Author's Response: You are such a good mother, mothering Draco like that. However, be careful about mothering my Draco. It could get a little bit... dangerous? Thank you for the wonderful review. I appreciate your support. - fallenwitch
Your particular brand of angst is perhaps the most painful I've ever felt. Gah. I'm actually in pain. Good work.
She left him her address! What? Is he crazy?
Okay, all done. Lovely story, good work, can't wait for the next installment of the knife to my stomach--er-- of the story.
Author's Response: Thank you, I think. I love the knife to the stomach analogy. Yes, I do. It is the ultimate compliment for my genre, don't you think? *laughs* - fallenwitch
Omg, awful cliffhanger! Whatever shall I do until the next installment?! Ah well, wonderful writing. Great job, and please continue the story :)
Author's Response: Thank you. Will do! -fallenwitch
ohhh mann!!! That part about her heart at the end...that was real sad but so... beautiful. This first chapter was written so well...your phrasing and descriptions are unique and i can't wait for the next chapter! I'm completely hooked.
Author's Response: Thank you! Ginny POV fics aren't my forte so I appreciate your kind words. I hope this one continues to hold your interest. -fallenwitch
Oh, fabulous start. All that torrid heat in the seduction scene and then, just switched off. Abrupt cold shower. Very real and poignant. Can't wait to read the next trick up your sleeve.
Author's Response: Thanks, Phae. I don't know about tricks, but the next one is coming up soon. Thanks so much for your review. You know how much I appreciate it! -fallenwitch
and then what? What's next???
Author's Response: I think you'll get a good idea of where this is going after the next chapter or two. If all goes as planned, I plan to post again later this week. Thank for your review! -fallenwitch
OH MY GOD OH MY GOD OH MY GOD!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
*breathes*
I've been debating in my head whether or not to PM you for the last few days to tell you that this is probably my favorite story of yours and to ask if you'd abandoned it.
I. LOVE YOU.
if you can't tell, i'm excited times a million. =D
Author's Response: Hello Bella! I had no idea you fancied this story so much. Speak up next time, girl. Don't be shy! You know where my lj is, BTW. Nah, not abandoned but it sure looked like it, didn't it? I am ashamed to say that it got lost in the roar of Along Came A Wizard. But it's back, and I'm thrilled that you love it so much. Thank you for your review. It made my whole week! How could it not? -fallenwitch
Wow, that was an amazing chapter. I hope to see more of this story soon!
Author's Response: Thank you! More is coming soon. -fallenwitch
great chapter. i hope that this is a story and that it will end with a happy ending, cuz what can i say? im a happy ending kind of person. update soon if it isnt a one shot!
Author's Response: Thank you! Nope, not a one shot. More is coming. - fallenwitch
Ooh! I'm thrilled to see that you are working on this again. I'm looking forward to seeing what changes you make (that is, if I can remember the original in enough detail), and how everything turns out.
As always, I love the way you manipulate words. You manage to convey character so well with so little. In this chapter, I particularly liked the passage, "The second time he wrestled her to the ground, a week later, she told him if he wanted to speak with her, don't, for Merlin's sake, throw her on the ground again, or he would meet with the business end of her wand in the most unpleasant way possible, no magic necessary." That one made me laugh out loud, and it says so much about both Ginny and Draco.
Thanks for posting!
Author's Response: It's always a good day when I can make you laugh, even if it involves shoving Ginny's wand someplace... well, you know! I hope you enjoy this the second time around. Since there's no prerequisite for reading this fic, no memory of the previous incantation is needed! *laughs* Thank you for the wonderful review. -fallenwitch
now i'm all excited for another one of your stories, i love it. why did that bastard dump her like that? One minute he whispers sweet nothings in her ear and the next he rips out her heart out. lying bastard.
Author's Response: I agree that Draco has quite a bit to answer for, doesn't he? Thanks for the wonderful review! -fallenwitch