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Cool story. Loved the perspective of Bella's insanity.
Dark, twisted, perfect, hopeful. I am very impressed by your writing and I think you´ve managed to show how difficult life must be for Draco.
Wow that was pretty wicked...I hope you one day play off this and write a longer fic.
That was an amazingly well writen story
I love dark fics like this. It's obvious you've never written dark before, not because its bad (it's not, its amazing!) it just has the virgin-esque quality to it, which actually works to make it a bit more disturbing. God poor Draco...that had to be the most scarring experience of his life, and I'm sure there's a lot to choose from. Great job! Love the bit at the end, it made my heart soar (im half fluff bunny half ....angst bunny? haha)
Wonderful story! This story took us places I didn't think it was possible to go and come back happily from. Thank you for the terrific read!
Author's Response: *hugs* Thanks, seegrim! I find it amusing that even when I go uber-dark, I just *have* to have that hopeful ending.
Wow, what a way/time to announce that she is pregnant with his child. That was really well written. I liked it, though it was dark, it was good.
Author's Response: Aw, thanks! Dark-fic and I are wobbly at best, but I'm pleased I posted this.
I know authors like comments to have something constructive in them...but I can't help it...*jumps up and down clapping*
Author's Response: Nah, speechlessness is just as complimentary in my book. :D I'm glad you enjoyed it so much.
I read this when you first posted it, meant to go back and review it, and ended up keeping the tab open for days so that I wouldn't forget.
I think what stuck with me about this fic is Draco's total willingness to do what needs to be done, even though it makes him feel awful. It plays right into my ideas about the inherent pragmatism of the Slytherin mindset - and it meshes well with the damn-the-consequences joy of Ginny's more Gryffindoric attitude, bringing new life into a difficult world.
Author's Response: Thanks for the review (and remembering to come back to do it!), Myn.
I completely agree about Slytherin pragmatism- when I wrote this, it felt like an interesting aspect of Draco's character to address, rather than go my normal route of his undying love for Ginny. I wanted to show that they're compatible on more than one level, and I'm so glad that came across. Thanks again! :)
I love it! update! please...
Author's Response: It's wonderful to hear that you liked it so much, but... it's a one-shot. Sorry!
Wow, I adored this. It's dark and angsty with such detailed quirks and turn-ons and just, the little things that let the reader know the author really thought this out. if that makes sense.
The ending was really well done with the unborn baby "saving" Draco and everything was written so beautifully.
Author's Response: Thank you! Dark is SO not my bag, but I figured, 'Hey, you wrote it- you mght as well post it.' Bella is such a sociopath in canon that I felt portraying her like this would tie in well.
As for the baby- I had to give Draco a reason to keep trying, didn't I? :)
haunting, and the rating's definately desreved, but fabulousy well written, well done...
Author's Response: Thank you very much! Glad to hear about the rating- it was kind of borderline between 'Definitely' and 'Extremely' Naughty, so I'm glad you mentioned that.
I love it. You thought I wouldn't but I do. LOVE it. Now I need more. It's like crack. It's not a one-shot is it? *cries* it IS a one-shot.
I loved it, Katie. You do dark well!
Author's Response: You, my dear, surprised the crap out of me. Some fluffy bunny YOU are! Kiddding, of course. Sorry, but no more- it's going to stay a one-shot. Thanks for the review, Jess!
This was an enjoyable read.
Author's Response: Glad you liked it
I really liked it, that was...wow, yeah. I really liked it. That was really, really good.
and it ended on a highnote =D wow. that was so well done.
Author's Response: I think 'oh' summed it up nicely- not the type of story you'd expect out of me, was it? Thanks so much for the review, and I'm happy that you liked it.
Great post. It was very interesting. Well I guess Death Eaters have their quirks and Lucius like blood and power. I loved the end with Ginny "saving" him with his unborn child. Great one shot.
Author's Response: 'Quirks' is a mighty gracious way of looking at Lucius and Bella's turn-ons, but I'm glad to hear that you loved the ending- personally, that's the only part I really liked. The rest is too dark and explicit for my (usual) tastes, but as the author, I can't whine, can I? :p
Whew, this was a compelling read, it was a little disturbing to read at times, but I couldn't stop! The ending makes up for the darkness of the rest. A thrilling read!
Author's Response: I'm glad it was compelling, at least- I'm not a dark!fic person usually, but I figured that I should go ahead and post this for others to see and stop being a chicken. The contrast between the majority of the story and the ending was really what inspired me to write something like this in the first place; you know the saying: The true brightness of a light can only be appreciated in the dark. Thanks for the review!
This is really quite disturbing, but that is tempered by being able to see how profoundly disturbed Draco and Ginny are as well. And without the sheer magnitude of disturbingness, the ending would not be nearly as hopeful. Thanks for posting.
Author's Response: If you were disturbed reading it, believe me when I tell you that I was dumbfounded that I could have written something like this- you know me; I'm usually about the fluff. That said, thanks for the review. I wasn't sure how a fic like this would be received, but I figured I'd give it a go.