Name: hawaiian techno reviewed Valleys of Green and Grey 02 on Jun 09, 2007 05:46 am

Ok, I love it!, I'm using my brothers account, but I've reviewed this story before and I love it! please update!

Author's Response: Thanks! Next update coming soon!

Name: SRivera reviewed Valleys of Green and Grey 02 on Jun 08, 2007 09:27 pm

I can't help but think this is going to end up badly. I've read most of your stories and they were all wonderfully done. I was trying so hard to restrain my laughter at your description of constipated-looking Harry as it is midnight and the whole house is asleep. This is the only time i can read stories in peace and it's worth staying up for. So thanks for this wonderful story!

Author's Response: Thank you for the lovely review. I will say that things will not be easy and leave it at that.

Name: Persephone33 reviewed Valleys of Green and Grey 02 on Jun 08, 2007 03:46 am

Guh. The amount of which I hate Harry is eclipsed only by how much I love Draco. How awfully evil that he has to go to Azkaban right when she's fallen for him. It has me thinking of all the ways she can keep him for herself...

I'm loving it! Thanks.

Author's Response: Harry is a total prat isn't he? *smiles*

Name: Judibry reviewed Valleys of Green and Grey 02 on Jun 07, 2007 01:36 pm

must. have. more.

Excellent beginning. Everything is very well written. Ginny's feeling & emotions, and their transition is realistic.
Thank you for an enjoyable read. I'm looking forward to an update.

Author's Response: More is on the way I promise! Thank you! I'm so glad you like it!

Name: Hajra reviewed Valleys of Green and Grey 02 on Jun 07, 2007 06:57 am

This is brilliant! I love the way you built up the relationship between Draco and Ginny, and the way the anticipation was building up at the end...whoa! I found myself leaning in towards the screen, just as Ginny was shifting closer towards Draco...Wonderful!

Author's Response: Thank you! *happy grin*

Name: Embellished reviewed Valleys of Green and Grey 02 on Jun 07, 2007 02:16 am

Oh, the torture of doomed love! At least I have the comfort of knowing that you are writing this, so it can't end up too badly. On the other hand, you said it was different from everything else you've written, so maybe I should worry! Anyway, Harry is still really annoying in this chapter, but Draco makes up for that. I'll be interested to see what happens next. Thanks for the update!

Author's Response: Just remember my reputation...

Name: Jordanza reviewed Valleys of Green and Grey 02 on Jun 07, 2007 12:11 am

ohhh damn u had to stop it THERE!!! urhhhhhhhh i want more!!!+pout+

Author's Response: *pats* I'm ebil like that *wink*

Name: Nokomis reviewed Valleys of Green and Grey 02 on Jun 06, 2007 05:09 pm

*smooshes Draco and Ginny together*

You write those kids together like nobody's business. I like the easy comraderie between them, the way they've grown used to the company of the other with minimal drama. Understandable, given that Draco's been ill and Ginny's been the caretaker.

Harry, on the other hand, just needs to... go elsewhere. *shoos him away from Ginny* His paranoia read as true, though.

I feel bad for Ginny, because she's clearly lonely there in the house. The part that made that most clear was when she thought her cooking might be scaring others off - totally sad! And the moment with the tailoring spells - I do adore your characterization of her. She needs a good hug.

And Draco's just the one to give it to her! Those moments of passion - though sadly filled with inaction - between them, with the tension palpable, were very well done. I was yelling for them to go ahead with it, but alas!

I adore this story wholeheartedly. Thank you for writing!

Author's Response: Ginny would like Harry to just "go elsewhere" too! Gin-Gin is lonely, but so is Draco. They both need good hugs! And *squee* Thank you for the lovely review!!

Name: MK Richie reviewed Valleys of Green and Grey 02 on Jun 06, 2007 04:11 pm

Hey this is wonderful! I noticed a few typo errors, a little bit rushed scenes, particularly at the end, but other than that, I really love this story. I can't wait to see what happens, and even though it is only the second chapter, I feel invested in the characters. And I like seeing a different kind of Draco and whats more--a different Ginny, which seems to be more rare these days. Thanks for writing, and I can't wait for your next update.

Author's Response: Thank you. I was going for something a little different. I'm glad you like it so far!

Name: oxymoron8 reviewed Valleys of Green and Grey 02 on Jun 06, 2007 03:29 pm

Great chapter. I really don't want him to go or make her pregnant with his child. Harry should break both of his legs and be left in some awful persons care. I really liked this chapter. Enough angst and fluff to balance out. She want be going back to Harry right??? I cannot wait for Ron to come he seems like an alright person. Will we ever see any of the others like Luna, Neville or Blaise? I hope to see more soon. Great chapter again...

Author's Response: Thank you. You'll just have to stay tuned to see what happens with Draco, Ginny and Harry. Ron will be back in the next chapter I promise. As for other characters, I can't make any promises.