Name: raistlin89 reviewed
Special Hugs on Oct 29, 2006 03:14 pm
i luv it! it was too good and hilarious
Author's Response: Thanks :)
Name: WolfStar reviewed
Help on Oct 24, 2006 08:41 am
"May your love be modern enough to survive the times and old fashioned enough to last forever." I've just re-read the chapter (I wanted to see what Greg's speech that everyone's raving about) and I must say I absolutely love that phrase! *formerly danlover*
Author's Response: Thank you. Everyone's raving about Greg's speech? Can I ask where?
Name: Mysty reviewed
An Old Friend on Oct 04, 2006 06:06 am
Lol....“Well, no. I want to see my Angel too – I love her, you know.” His eyes had darkened, and his face had taken on a dreamy look."
Author's Response: Ah yes, but he may have confused things just a bit ;)
Name: Mysty reviewed
The Couch on Oct 04, 2006 06:03 am
OOOoooOOO who is it?!?!?! Who is it?!?! :D
Author's Response: It could be... anyone ;)
Name: Mysty reviewed
Telling Draco on Oct 04, 2006 05:59 am
It seems fishy to me that Lucious is so interested in Drake...considering he is a child of a Weasley, I don't think that Drake being Draco's son woud be enough for the calus old man.....hmmm I wonder what he is up to.
Author's Response: You never quite know with Lucius ;)
Name: Mysty reviewed
Malfoy Manor on Oct 04, 2006 05:45 am
Ok...ok I feel quite silly now. I was under the assumption that Draco & Ginny were married...thus sharing the same name. :) Good twist. Definatly cought me off gaurd. Kudos!
Author's Response: Thanks :)
Name: Mysty reviewed
Diagon Alley on Oct 04, 2006 05:36 am
*typo "Maybe just **Drake Arthur Malfoy
Author's Response: Typos happen ;)
Name: Mysty reviewed
Diagon Alley on Oct 04, 2006 05:36 am
Drake Arthur Weasley Malfoy?? Hmm...I dunno. Seems a little too much. Not to be rude or anything, but maybe just Draco Arthur Malfoy??
Author's Response: He only gets his "full" name when he's in really big trouble ;)
Name: dragoncharmer79 reviewed
Help on Sep 26, 2006 08:33 am
I can never seem to get enough of this story. I think I have read it at least 3 times. The plot, characters and events are briliiant.
Author's Response: Thank you so much :)
Name: moon demon reviewed
Diagon Alley on Sep 18, 2006 04:03 pm
I love this story soooooooooooooooooooooo much it is awesome
Author's Response: Thank you :)
Name: razzle_be_dazzled reviewed
Help on Sep 18, 2006 12:24 pm
This whole fic was amazing! I had read some of it before, but I just finished it all. Fantastic!
Author's Response: Thank you so much :)
Name: Elizabeth Malfoy reviewed
Malfoy Holdings on Aug 27, 2006 10:08 am
I just love this story this is the second time im reading it. its simply wonderful
Author's Response: Thank you :)
Name: CourtneyFaith reviewed
Help on Aug 22, 2006 05:42 pm
~I love the orchid thing. So sweet. I am glad that this story is finally finished.~
Author's Response: Thank you for all your lovely reviews :)
Name: CourtneyFaith reviewed
Welcome to the Family on Aug 22, 2006 05:27 pm
~So perfect. I just love the family interaction.~
Author's Response: Thanks :)
Name: CourtneyFaith reviewed
A Night to Remember or Not on Aug 22, 2006 05:16 pm
~HEHE..Man of the house. a well known false statment.~
Author's Response: Only when they have permission to be ruler ;)
Name: CourtneyFaith reviewed
Hogsmeade on Aug 22, 2006 05:12 pm
~Boys will be boys i suppose. Wonderful Chapter.!!~
Author's Response: Yes, they will ;)
Name: CourtneyFaith reviewed
A Real Family on Aug 22, 2006 03:03 pm
~I would be so scared if i had lost someone like that.~
Author's Response: It's a terrifying experience!
Name: CourtneyFaith reviewed
Charms and Tempers on Aug 22, 2006 02:25 pm
~I cant even imagin anyone behaving like Angel~
Author's Response: Believe me, little girls can be evil little trolls when things aren't going their way ;)
Name: CourtneyFaith reviewed
Dinner for Two on Aug 22, 2006 10:15 am
~WOW. A really really wonderful chapter.~
Author's Response: Thank you :)
Name: Martini Olive reviewed
Malfoy Manor on Aug 21, 2006 05:11 pm
this fic would be so much better with a beta reader. You've misspelled important words like "Weasley" which would garner immediate rejection at any other site. The grammar is also incorrect as is your dialogue structure.
Also, the characters POV jumps back and forth all over the place. This is incorrect story telling. When writing from multiple perspectives you need to keep to one POV at a time... when you move on to the next part then the POV can change.
It's a good concept... just needs a lot of work. Again, it could be remedied with a good beta reader.
Author's Response: Thank you for pointing out the two errors in spelling. They have been corrected. Even the best beta reader can miss two absent letters, most especially when the word formed is not spelled wrong. I do have a beta reader, and she has a Masters in English.
As for the POV jumping all over the place: A good story teller can tell the POV from many perspectives with a simple change of a paragraph. It is not incorrect, it's simply more involved. If this is confusing, I'm sorry, but it simply takes a little more effort on the readers part to concentrate on what they're reading.
Name: CourtneyFaith reviewed
Grandfather's Chair on Aug 21, 2006 04:02 pm
~My internet has been down, but I am ready to finish this epic tale~
Author's Response: *smites your internet* Good to see you back!
Name: CourtneyFaith reviewed
Sparklies and Tiaras on Aug 20, 2006 11:10 am
~A really long chapter full of wonderful plot.~
Author's Response: Thanks :)
Name: CourtneyFaith reviewed
Daddy's Naughty on Aug 19, 2006 05:05 pm
~Another wonderful chapter.~
Author's Response: Thank you :)
Name: CourtneyFaith reviewed
I Did It on Aug 19, 2006 04:48 pm
~I need to read more. I love this story~
Author's Response: Thanks :)
Name: CourtneyFaith reviewed
Morning Showers on Aug 19, 2006 04:33 pm
~Hehehe...Very cute and funny.~
Author's Response: Thanks! I don't know who was more offended, Draco or Ron ;P