Reviews For Dragon and Angel
Name: someone reviewed Angel Tells a Secret on Oct 12, 2004 02:15 pm
OMG, i love this story, its really good some parts r....... surprising, and others are like WOW. but over all it was really good. please write the more ch. really soooon!!!!!!!

Author's Response: Thanks, next chapter is still in the writing but shouldn't take too much longer *I hope* :/
Name: marahlynn reviewed Angel Tells a Secret on Oct 12, 2004 05:32 am
wow, i check this site literally everyday, jsut to see if uve updated this story, i love it i tell ya! i really like this chapter though, i cant wait for another event at the burrow, all these newly pregnant people...hey heres an idea what if pansy and ginny went into labor at the same time!! woa, scared myself abit wih that one-well i guess ill just have to wait and read what comes next

Author's Response: Thanks, next event at the Burrow is a family lunch and you know what Draco has to announce to all six of her brothers at once!! The babies will all be born close together but not quiet that close. :D
Name: medea reviewed Angel Tells a Secret on Oct 12, 2004 04:49 am
Aww... (on the baby) and Wow (on that shower scene). Umm... Of course I read it first on your lj. Good writing as always! Are we gonna see Draco ask Ginny to marry him?

Author's Response: Thanks :D As for Draco popping the question... well he has to clear it with Arthur first, doesn't he???
Name: Myanceris reviewed Angel Tells a Secret on Oct 12, 2004 01:58 am
Awww that was so beautiful! Another Chapter beautifully written. Great work.

Author's Response: Thanks :D
Name: RavenclawChrissie reviewed Angel Tells a Secret on Oct 11, 2004 07:25 pm
She IS preggie *glomps Ginny* I like how Angel told. That is so something a little kid would do and she even rationalized it to. They really have their handsful with the twins, but now they are going to have another baby! *sighs* I'm so happy with Draco's reaction. It seems he learned a little from Ron's situation. *nudges Draco* Now you know what you have to do.

Author's Response: Angel isn't very good at keeping secrets but she didn't really do anything wrong, I mean it was only Grandma who she was told not to tell (hehehe). As for Draco, he knows exactly what he has to do but does he have the courage???
Name: RavenclawChrissie reviewed The Birthday Party on Sep 27, 2004 03:19 am
Woohoo! That was a great birthday party. I wasn't expecting the annoucment of Pansy being preggers. . Now I am really looking forward to seeing Ron ask for Pansy's hand in marriage. *snickers* That should really be fun!I think Draco did a really good job talking to Ron. The kids were so cute a real racing broom! and a pony! I want the Malfoys for my family!! Great job! I'm sure with the moods Ginny has been in discussing the broom can go anyway. Looking forward to more! :D

Author's Response: Ron and Pansy's proposal will be done but as a cookie on lj as consensus requested but it will be mentioned within a chapter briefly. The Malfoys are very generous and Drake will get to keep his broom but Draco is going to have to fight for him :D
Name: Rainpuddle reviewed The Birthday Party on Sep 26, 2004 03:50 am
Well, why doesn't Lucius just spoil his grandchildren rotten? My goodness! He bought Angel a pony - every little girl's wildest dream come true. I don't think he likes her at all, nuh huh. I bet if Angel said jump, Lucius would ask how high. He's completely snowed. Draco doesn't fare any better with Drake though - buying him that racing broom against Gin's will and his better judgement. Those Malfoy men are entertaining to say the least. Narcissa was adorable putting her request for more grandchildren. :P And speaking of grandchildren - I see an epidemic of a epic propotions starting to gather strength...an epidemic I'm sure Draco wants not part of right now. I think Ron and Pansy should be a lesson....Can't wait until the next installment!

Author's Response: Lucius is a push over for Angel at least, he's a little tougher on Drake! We may just have to have a special tea party :P Draco will get what is coming to him for the racing broom from a certain red-headed witch. There's going to be quite a few children at Hogwarts together - won't that be fun!! I think Draco will take note of Ron and Pansy's situation and learn a very valuable lesson from it, unfortunately...
Name: lauradcliffe reviewed The Birthday Party on Sep 25, 2004 03:55 pm
brilliant chapter! I am so happy about Harry and Hermione! Yay! I can't wait to find out what is going to happen next! I wish Ron would stop being so stupid about the Death Eater thing, he can be so immature about that! Hopefully becoming a dad will mature him a bit! Once again, it was brilliant!

Author's Response: Thanks, poor Ron is just really bad at expressing himself - he is an Auror and does work with nasty people all day so perhaps he's entitled to a little bit of prejudice, then again maybe he should just learn to keep his mouth shut! :D
Name: Dracosbaby reviewed The Birthday Party on Sep 25, 2004 12:11 pm
Thank you for posting!!! I love this story and I loved this chapter!!! Great job and please post soon!!!!!!

Author's Response: Thanks :D
Name: medea reviewed The Birthday Party on Sep 25, 2004 03:35 am
Beautiful, and it was worth the wait. Wonderfully written like the other chapters. Keep it up! I hope the next few ones are just as great.

Author's Response: Thanks, the next few chapters are going to be quite special :D
Name: watermelongurl reviewed First Date on Sep 19, 2004 08:46 am
That is totally awsome. The only thing is, after reading this a couple of times I realised that the french isnt really flowing for me and i think there need to be some slight modifications. I really dont think filet mignon is mignon de filet. And the chocolate liqueur sauce i think it flows better if you say sauce de liqueur au chocolat or somthing like that. I just found that the french didnt flow for me. But that could just be me. I dont know. My mum would kill me right now if she knew i was saying this. Oh well, if anythning is that what mothers are for? Grape

Author's Response: Thanks, I used an online translator for the French (never again) but I do have the proper translations and will be fixing it when that chapter has come back from final beta :D
Name: lauradcliffe reviewed Happy Birthday on Sep 18, 2004 06:58 pm
Great chapter! The story is going along great. I get the feeling that Ginny might be pregnant. Am I completly wrong on that? I feel like they have had sex, but I might be thinking of a different fic. Also, just thought you might want to know that Ginny's name is Ginevra, not Virginia. (source: www.jkrowling.com) Please update soon! I can't wait for the party on Sunday! Please update soon!

Author's Response: Thanks :D I actually chose Virginia over Ginevra deliberately but thanks anyway. Ginny's condition (or not) will remain a secret for the time being :D
Name: ~*~Dru~*~ reviewed Happy Birthday on Sep 16, 2004 11:21 pm
*Hugs* Very well written...very fast though. (Things happen to fast....it takes away from it...but VERY GOOD!) WOAH! Birthday present!

Author's Response: Thanks, I'm trying to pace it out but it does get difficult, approximately 6 weeks has passed from chapter 1 to 37. Anyway glad you enjoyed it :D
Name: Nakita reviewed Happy Birthday on Sep 16, 2004 08:15 am
You have me coming back to this story! I loved the cakes! So great, you have a wonderful skill for writing! Pleas keep this story up!

Author's Response: Thanks - it's now where near over yet!!
Name: medea reviewed Happy Birthday on Sep 16, 2004 03:03 am
It really lives upto the chapters before. I am looking forward to many more chappies. I can't wait for the next one. Hope you have it posted real soon!!

Author's Response: Thank you, it's no where near over so there will be loads more chapters... :D
Name: RavenclawChrissie reviewed Happy Birthday on Sep 16, 2004 02:50 am
*claps* Good job!! I knew Ginny's initial reaction was too calm. It seems that Ginny and Draco's 'special hugs' have had a 'special end result' :) Angel was so cute! I cracked up when Ginny took Draco to the front room and he muttered "I don't know why everyone will hear us anyway" It reminded me of the way Drake mutters sometimes. Good job!

Author's Response: Thanks :D As for 'special end results' my lips are sealed! Drake has inherited quite a few of Draco's habits - he's like a mini-me Draco ;)
Name: medea reviewed Malfoy Holdings on Sep 10, 2004 09:52 am
Wow. I have spent at least 4 hours reading through the whole thing. It was a good read. I can't wait to read the upcoming chapters. The story is wonderful, shed a few niceness on Lucius and his family. Good one on you!

Author's Response: WOW! Thanks - all of it in one sitting, your poor eyes! Glad you enjoyed it :D
Name: ~*~Paris Hilton~*~ reviewed Malfoy Holdings on Sep 10, 2004 02:45 am
I Love how you did Lucius. You showed his 'book' self. (Mean nasty, a regular Malfoy) I love how the whole Ron and Draco thing happened. But there was one part that i really thought was mean, At the end about the bracelet, I think it was more on the side of teasing Ginny of his Rich-ness. With Much Love~Paris

Author's Response: It wasn't meant to be teasing - he's just very nonchalant about the cost of things, having grown up wealthy has given him this attitude. Glad you liked it :D
Name: RavenclawChrissie reviewed Malfoy Holdings on Sep 07, 2004 06:46 am
OMG! Draco almost killed Ron. I didn't think he would go that far. Although Ronald Bilius Weasley did push poor Drake. I'm also glad that Draco told Ginny that he almost killed Ron. I think it shows he has grown a lot. *hugs Draco* Lucius was scaring me! I think it was the room. *shivers* Angel is so adorable. Good Job! ~Chrissie

Author's Response: Draco is still in trouble over the whole 'almost killing Ron' thing - Ginny's not likely to let him off that easily. Lucius is still capable of some very nasty stuff but will be brought to task for his actions in the future. :D
Name: Rainpuddle reviewed Malfoy Holdings on Sep 06, 2004 05:41 am
Well...I must say that neither Lucius or Draco did anything to endear either of them to Ginny. One step forward and eighteen steps back with those two stupid moves. *shakes head* When Ginny gets a hint of what Lucius did to her baby boy, she might ever want him to be around her child again. Drake isn't Draco and Ginny won't overlook the incident. She's going to be livid!!!!! And Draco...granted Ron was wrong, but he went too far. That makes him look unpredictible and dangerous and that isn't a good combination around two small children. *sigh* There will be a lots of amends making going in the next chapter....

Author's Response: Oh Ginny has her say on Draco - you can be sure. While she will find out about Lucius and she will definitely react the way you would expect (Draco will be dragged in for his part), it won't be soon - he has Drake convinced not to say a word for the time being but you know what kids are like ;)
Name: Diana reviewed Malfoy Holdings on Sep 05, 2004 08:50 pm
I want to start off by telling you you are a truly wonderful writer. You're wonderful at bringing your characters to life. But I was a bit disturbed by this last chapter. Essentially what Lucius inflicts upon Drake is emotional and mental abuse and should Drake misbehave again he seems to be willing to inflict physical abuse on the boy. I just finished my volunteer training to work with women and children who are victims of domestic violence so this might be why this last chaper affected me so strongly. Although my reaction is also related to your skills as a talented writer. I do hope you'll have Ginny find out about the incident and that there will be some consequences for Lucius' actions. But overall I must say I truly enjoy your story. Keep up the good work.

Author's Response: This last chapter was extremely difficult to write - I knew it would provoke some reaction. I was extremely careful to steer clear of physical punishment - believe me it would have been a lot easier to write had Lucius put Drake over his knee. I was also wanting to keep Lucius in character - while I have him painted as the doting grandfather he is also a ruthless ex Death Eater who does not tolerate those who cross him. The threat to actually whip Drake is exactly that - a threat and will never be written as a scene in this story (personally I couldn't do it). Ginny will find out about the incident and Lucius will be brought to task for his actions - I'm unsure when this will be at this stage but it will happen because writing the scene has me intrigued. I'm glad you're still enjoying my story :D
Name: tkmoore reviewed Malfoy Holdings on Sep 05, 2004 06:38 pm
Wow.................aren't grandpas supposed to be all kind and spoil you rotten. Defintely wouldn't want Lucius for my grandfather. I almost feel sorry for Lucius if Ginny finds out what happen. The stock and whips will seem like a Sunday picnic after she's done with him. Ron doesn't know when to quit........he just can't accept that it was not his place to intervene. And I hope Ginny ripped him a new asshole for injuring Drake when he was serving his own self interests. And it is his own ideas and interests he is attending to by dueling Drakes daddy in front of him........Ginny better straighten him out quickly. Great chapter and I was glad to see it. Hope to see and update soon and thanks for your hard work and sharing with us. TTFN Kelly

Author's Response: Lucius is a bit of both - he'll spoil you rotten but he's also more than capable of cracking the whip when needed to. While I will only show Ginny/Draco discussion on the duel I can assure you in my mind Ron is now walking around with two asshole's for his interference. Next one is nearly finished so hopefully it won't be a long wait :D
Name: marahlynn reviewed Malfoy Holdings on Sep 05, 2004 06:25 pm
wow, like i said before, ur so great. this story keeps getting better and better. i really cant wait for the next one

Author's Response: Thanks, next one's almost finished :D
Name: Quidditch3 reviewed Malfoy Holdings on Sep 05, 2004 05:44 pm
I've been reading your story for some time and I think it's good. I have a hard time dealing with your version of the Ron character. Since he is an Auror, he should be better than Draco in defense. It's just my opinion, and the way you depict him in your story bothers me somewhat. I know this is your story and it's great in how you bring out the best in the Malfoy's family circle but I would hope you would be somewhat fair with Ron's character. Harry and Ron are best friends and I have a hard time with the way he's portray with the bad temper or somewhere in that direction. Harry should be closer to Ron in friendship than he is with Draco. I really like reading your story but that's my only thorn in your story. Please don't take it in a bad way.

Author's Response: Draco defeating Ron in that duel wasn't meant to be a reflection of Ron's skills as an Auror - more on how Draco is still able to ruffle Ron's feather's, so to speak. Harry and Ron are best friends but Draco will go to Harry for advice on the kids because he was the one who virtually took on the role of father. Ron does have a bad temper and is very quick to react particularly when Draco is involved - 'Eat slugs' CoS. Hopefully in the next few chapters you will see a different side of Ron as he has developed a few problems of his own that he now has to deal with - of course Draco will needle him every so often but given the circumstances his reaction is going to be slightly different. :D
Name: tkmoore reviewed Pepperup Potion on Aug 26, 2004 05:48 pm
It's been brought to my attention that not enough people are reviewing on this site.....and I am ashamed to admit that I am one of those people. I intend to correct that mistake now and to continue to review all chapters I read in the future. I believe I have reviewed a couple chapters of this story before but I will go on as if I have not. This is one of my favorite stories and I check each morning to see if you have updated.....I understand that real life does get in the way. It is very well written and a brilliant plot...the characters are well developed and Lucius is belivable. I have truly enjoyed the chapters with the children and especially Drake and his witch germs and special hugs. Loved when he walked in on Ron and Pansy and then them sitting down to talk about it.....too funny. I'm glad to see D/G moving forward and am curious to see if they will move in with Draco.....I do wonder how long it will take for them to move there relationship to the next level....engagement. I believe that is what they both want....if Draco can get Ginny past her fears. Anxiously awaiting your next chapter and thank you for sharing your wonderful work with us. TTFN Kelly

Author's Response: Thank you so much for your terrific review - I secretly love getting long reviews!! They will move in together but it will happen for a reason and that will lead their relationship to a different level, while I have all of this planned I want it to seem realistic so it can't be rushed but it will happen soon. Next chapter is about half written so it will be a few more days at least :D
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