Name: crazykay254 reviewed Chapter 13 on Jul 14, 2008 04:32 pm

woot! i'm super excited to see how this story pans out. i love that they finally met i was dying for this chapter. fantastic. just fantastic. i can't wait for the next chapter!

Name: deadsnowwhite reviewed Chapter 13 on Jul 13, 2008 04:25 pm

i loved how you did the dialoge between the two of them and how you focsed on thier facial expression's was really nicly done and the ending was a perfect closeing to that scene i can't wait for the next chapter(^_^)!!