Name: Tesseract reviewed
Chapter 20 on Jun 14, 2008 04:11 pm
Well, just to start, I would like to note how GLAD I am that that two chapter plan went completely out the window. This is just getting better and better!! Unless poor Draco really does end up in eternal damnation. :( But you wouldn't do that, would you? Would you??
Name: tinamarie reviewed
Chapter 20 on Jun 14, 2008 03:53 pm
Ok now I am thoroughly confused. I know the answers are coming but I just have to be patient. I look forward to the upcoming chapters!
Name: Almicene reviewed
Chapter 20 on Jun 14, 2008 03:50 pm
Okay, up until this chapter or the last one I really really liked the twists you put into this story. I have to admit that I don't really like Draco as a demon nor do I see it feasible with the books (just a matter of opinion).
However, the one thing I do take issue with is the fact that Ginny and Draco have been married a *really* long time. Demon or no demon, she would still love him. And she would also tell him she loved him especially if he was going to be eternally damned if she didn't tell him so. I feel like your Ginny would say 'I do love you but I don't trust you.' Or something along those lines...and then perhaps save him from eternal damnation and leave him. That seems a lot more realistic to me, than becoming absolutely repulsed by the man she's been married to for so long and intimately involved with. I mean she didn't fall for Fleur's veela looks as that little experiment showed. I would have thought this story might have gone in the direction of Ginny earning the respect of Draco by standing up to him, demanding equal partnership, and him eventually winning her back after she leaves him.
You are the storyteller after all so this will go where you want it to. But ya I have to say that I don't really buy this chapter nor the last one as part of their characters.
I do love your writing, it's intricate, superb, and your talent as a writer shows.
Name: black_adder24 reviewed
Chapter 20 on Jun 14, 2008 03:24 pm
Damn it! Is there some loophole, is there some other way?? You said the story was over so how the heck will Draco return!!
Name: Briar Rose reviewed
Chapter 20 on Jun 14, 2008 02:59 pm
GAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAH!!!! Noooo!!! Bring Draco back, please.
That being said, I really did like this chapter... very good.
Name: afici0nada reviewed
Chapter 20 on Jun 14, 2008 01:28 pm
I don't really have a habit of reviewing (hehe, yeah, shame on me), but I couldn't not say anything about your last chapter. I was in tears as I was reading. That was so very very cruel! My heart bleeds for Draco :( Ginny is a fool, and a big one at that. I do hope the other demons were able to save Draco from eternal damnation. Your stories are always so mean to poor Draco :P I do hope this one will end happily! :)
Aside from that, great writing, as always! Keep up the awesome work!
Name: enoimreh reviewed
Chapter 20 on Jun 14, 2008 12:36 pm
But she does love him! She has to love him! Argh! But you said this definitely wasn't the end...you said there were still about five chapters left...so I'm clinging to my hope of a happy ending! You better come through for me (please?!)!!
Name: cocacolanicky reviewed
Chapter 20 on Jun 14, 2008 11:21 am
This chapter hurt a little, but I waiting for you to make it better =) I do so hope things turn out okayish in the end and that Ginny finally gets to understand everything that's happened (and me along with her!) You're wonderful and you brighten my days, so keep writing, lol.
Name: SpiffyDee reviewed
Chapter 20 on Jun 14, 2008 10:58 am
Well, that was unexpected. Have to say I didn't see that coming. And you're certainly not alone in disliking Molly Weasley, she's annoying as hell, and narrow minded to boot.
Name: D_Rad_88 reviewed
Chapter 20 on Jun 14, 2008 10:54 am
Oh my Jesus. That chapter was just insane! Draco can't be gone! Ginny can't have betrayed him and leave him. I can't wait for the next chapter
Name: mahek210 reviewed
Chapter 19 on Jun 14, 2008 05:26 am
OMG didnt c tat one cumin!!!ahhh u r a genius at leavin cliffies!!!nd ya i think i ll definitely b wid d ones who ll love d next 2 chaps!!:)
Name: cocacolanicky reviewed
Chapter 19 on Jun 14, 2008 03:26 am
Oh my gosh. That was just a tiny weeny bit stunning. Utterly magical, can't wait til the next enlightenment!
Name: Valesca reviewed
Chapter 19 on Jun 14, 2008 01:10 am
Wow! At first I was just mad at Ginny for being so cold towards Draco, but now...
Well I really don't know what to think right now. This is all so confusing. So, please update soon!
But nevertheless I still love your story! I'm looking forward to the new chapter! :D
Name: turkish reviewed
Chapter 19 on Jun 13, 2008 10:53 pm
Holy crap. That was the best last line to anything that I've ever seen anywhere. I love this story, and can't wait until the next chapter. :)
Name: Tessie Tura reviewed
Chapter 1 on Jun 13, 2008 08:51 pm
I adore how intricate your work is, everything is so meticulously placed into each chapter that the reader doesn't even realise that the answers were there the whole time until the very end. Great job.
What scares me about this fic is how Ginny, the strong tomboy we all adore can be so easily manipulated by the men in her life and how is so closely parallels real life for most women. Draco didn't directly force Ginny into doing anything and yet little by little she gave up a piece of herself for him and we already know that she would've given up everything for Harry had Draco not come along. Was this an intentional character fault or something that happened as the story progressed? I find it fascinating because I think we all know a friend who we always saw as strong and confident who ends up losing herself in a relationship. Can someone come out of a relationship unscathed?
Name: black_adder24 reviewed
Chapter 19 on Jun 13, 2008 08:30 pm
Oh, my...you blew me over with this one. I can't believe that just happened. Amazing, simply amazing. And, as mind-blowing as that is, everything fits now, doesn't it? I can't wait to see the chapter after this. Highly anticipated.
Name: tinamarie reviewed
Chapter 19 on Jun 13, 2008 08:22 pm
Oh you can't leave us hanging like this! I never saw this one coming, he's a demon too? The web you weave is intricate and quite uncanny! I don't know what to expect anymore, including the unexpected! I just hope this has a happy ending, but I am enjoying the ride.
Name: Akt5us reviewed
Chapter 19 on Jun 13, 2008 07:47 pm
So, i really can't find it in myself to like the story right now because of the cliffhanger! I mean, I LOVe all the twists and turns you've created, but I REALLY want to know what happens next!!!!!!
Name: VioletJersey reviewed
Chapter 1 on Jun 13, 2008 06:51 pm
WOW! Draco as a demon -- who knew!??! Amazing... truly amazing!!! It saddens me though that Ginny can't say the words "I love you" to him... or will she?
This fic truly is one of the most unique D/G pieces ever... I applaud your talent, my dear!
Name: CCC reviewed
Chapter 19 on Jun 13, 2008 06:49 pm
what have you been smoking? This plot is so intricate and far out that the only explanation possible is illicit substances.
Name: silentq reviewed
Chapter 1 on Jun 13, 2008 06:04 pm
I like your twist on the epilogue cause I've never liked Harry cause he is a pompous jerk. You have a great writing style!
Name: ExquisiteBeauty reviewed
Chapter 19 on Jun 13, 2008 05:50 pm
Oh my goodness, oh my goodness, oh my goodness........ I think my head (or heart) might explode from all the ansgt and love lost, and I CAN'T BELIEVE DRACO USED GINNY LIKE THAT AND HE DESERVES WHATEVERS COMING! ...... But Ginny doesn't deserve any of that, and I love Draco too much! He's so dreamy.....
But, dayyyyum. This was such a heartwrenching chapter. I think this is my favorite angst of all time.
WONDERFUL!
Name: dgloves70 reviewed
Chapter 19 on Jun 13, 2008 05:37 pm
Nice..
I am so glad and hope she kills Draco by rejecting him. He deserves it. Poor Ginny driven mad by two men who claimed to have "loved" Ginny.
Good for Mrs. Weasley.
Name: Nakita reviewed
Chapter 19 on Jun 13, 2008 05:23 pm
DAMNNNN!! That is heavy! Wow, you have taken this to places I would have never seen from chapter one. This is such a great story, and I hope more is up soon, so I can try and pull all this together on my own little blackboard.
Name: enoimreh reviewed
Chapter 19 on Jun 13, 2008 05:10 pm
Well, shit. Haha. Excellent chapter! This plot is so intricate and wonderful. You're doing an absolutely amazing job. Is it false hope to believe there will be a happy ending?? Please say no!