Name: shaded reviewed
Chapter 16 on Jun 10, 2008 02:49 pm
Aw, I'm very flattered that you gave me a best review award. Thanks for writing a story with such a cool, involved plot. This is one of my faves. :)
Heh, it was kinda surreal having things I put in my last review coming true; I'm usually not that good at predicting such things. Ron accusing Draco for cheating on Ginny being one. Ooh, I'd suspected that the kids were half succubi, so I guess I wasn't too far off that mark. It definitely explains their rather odd thirst for revenge in the last chapter.
The references were interesting; I'd never heard of Lilith or the other demons, so it was good to get a bit of background to them all.
I thought that the appalling treatment I received in the Hebrew Bible was an abomination against my vision and my wisdom, but nothing, nothing compares to having to listen to your idea of a bedtime story.”
LOL! I *totally* was not expecting that; I burst into uncontrollable giggles. What's funnier is that she's saying it so seriously.
James shrugged and kept right on shrugging until his outer skin fell through the floor with a whooshing sound.
Brilliant imagery.
I like the little quips that the demon 'children' make, such as Freddy’s very fond of you, you know. He told me so.; They break up what would have otherwise been a monotonous section of who's who.
What did Draco whisper to Harry?? You just *can't* leave us in suspense like that. And will Ginny ever find out what was said? Also, it's just typical of Hermione to say "oh, it's so *obvious*, why didn't I see it before!" without explaining a thing to anyone. Hehe. As frustrating as it is not to know what was in that H:aH book, I like that you've got Hermione's character down a pat.
Wow, that last thought of Ginny's sounded so hollow and lacking in emotion. I don't quite know how I can 'know' how she sounds, but I guess that just came across in your writing.
As always, I can't wait for the next chapter. :)
Name: Bronte44 reviewed
Chapter 16 on Jun 10, 2008 02:33 pm
I wish I had Hogwarts: A History! Evil Cliffhanger! I throw sticks at you.
PLEASE update soon!
Name: darkloveangel reviewed
Chapter 16 on Jun 10, 2008 02:22 pm
nooo!!! please give me answers more answers....hahaha
i love this story and its just getting even more crazier, thats a good thing.
cool cant wait for more!
Name: CCC reviewed
Chapter 16 on Jun 10, 2008 02:18 pm
I am cursing your name at the moment. That is one monster of a cliff hanger. Is Scorpion Ginny's son? Did Draco make her forget for a little while? You had better be typing.
Name: D_Rad_88 reviewed
Chapter 16 on Jun 10, 2008 02:15 pm
WHAT?! You can't just leave the chapter like that! Well, obviously you can, but you can't just leave it like that! That's so cruel!
Name: tinamarie reviewed
Chapter 16 on Jun 10, 2008 02:14 pm
Nooooooooooooooooooo!!!!!! You are going to leave us at the edges of our seats again!?!?!?!?! Thank you for the thank you, it is my pleasure to give you my two cents (sometimes a little more) with your stories. You truly deserve some accolades now with this beautiful manipulation of that awful epilogue. Bwuahahahahaha!
Name: Lauriac reviewed
Chapter 15 on Jun 10, 2008 02:56 am
My brain is completely boggled. Just so everyone knows.
Name: princessswan reviewed
Chapter 15 on Jun 09, 2008 09:08 pm
WHOAAAAA totally did not expect any of that.. (even though I kind of suspected that Scorpius would be Draco's real son.. as in the book) Anyway uhh I wonder who Scorpius' mother is.. is it Astoria????? Anyway, I can't wait for the next chapter.. please update again soon!! :) This story is soo interesting!
Name: readhead1755 reviewed
Chapter 15 on Jun 09, 2008 05:10 pm
so what? draco? son? what? ahhhhhhh!
Name: dgloves70 reviewed
Chapter 15 on Jun 09, 2008 03:19 pm
Hmm, interesting. I wonder why it is that Ginny being in a a nutty way is an angle you like writing about. Can we ever stop using Ginny. I like her and I hate to see her like this. Please tell me that it is going to get better before it worsens.
Is Scorpius Ginny's son with Draco? It would explain her feeling like her body had changed and had to take on some bed rest.
looking forward to the next chapter to know how it all ties in.
Name: Akt5us reviewed
Chapter 15 on Jun 09, 2008 03:18 pm
Dude, that's like the most amazing cliff-hanger ever. Probably the most hated too. I seriously can't wait for tomorrow to read the rest.
Name: Pipperstorms reviewed
Chapter 15 on Jun 09, 2008 02:13 pm
Holy crap. I had had to compleatly reread the fic,and I must say i am compleatly confused! It was amazing, but pease don't leave me hanging so long to understand! thank you for writing!!
Name: Slytherin Wolf reviewed
Chapter 15 on Jun 09, 2008 02:12 pm
I'm completely and utterly confused as to what the heck is going on. I get that Harry married the succubus and Scorpius is his son. But I don't really understand the rest.
Name: darkloveangel reviewed
Chapter 15 on Jun 09, 2008 01:43 pm
OMG!!! give me the next chapter now. please!!!
this is soo good!
Name: yomoedmb reviewed
Chapter 15 on Jun 09, 2008 01:07 pm
What?! He's really Draco's son? And the succubus has been married to Harry for so long? Oh why do you tease so?
Name: D_Rad_88 reviewed
Chapter 15 on Jun 09, 2008 12:18 pm
OMG, I'm soo confused. What just happened? But I definitely can't wait for the next chapter. Please post it soon!
Name: tinamarie reviewed
Chapter 15 on Jun 09, 2008 12:03 pm
I loved how you totally manipulated the train station scene to fit your own evil devices! Everything made sense until the whole "father" part...back to square one for me.
Name: shaded reviewed
Chapter 15 on Jun 09, 2008 11:42 am
Wow. Absolutely amazing. This has got to be THE most original alternate or canon DH story I've ever read. It's absolutely mesmerising.
From the beginning, I liked Ginny's blackboard of things that just didn't seem right; they were pretty much everything that was going through my head at the end of the last chapter, so it was quite an interesting method of refreshing everyone's memories about what had previously happened.
I like how Ginny couldn't see the face of Harry's 'wife'. How the succubus used its power to be hidden from Ginny's view. How Draco used Harry's own sons to plan this entire senario. I wonder, as Scorpius is 11 years old, surely he had been conceived whilst Draco was married to Ginny. How's he going to explain that to her? I like the fog of illusion that Ron and Hermione were under; it was an ingenious way of making them play along with the thought of Ginny being Harry's wife and not Draco's.
Anyway, I could probably go on and on about the subtle little things that I liked. I love this chapter. I like how often you're updating and hope that the next part will be up soon.
Oh, by the way, I love how Ginny, whilst holding onto Scorpius' hand on the platform, wished for a child of her own with Draco. That was one of my fave parts.
Name: Saaraneth reviewed
Chapter 15 on Jun 09, 2008 11:41 am
Oh this story is so interesting. :)
And hope you had a happy birthday!
Name: Valesca reviewed
Chapter 15 on Jun 09, 2008 11:21 am
ARGH!! How can you stop here?!? *not believing it* This is more than evil!! ;)
You HAVE to update as soon as possible!!
But I loved the new chapter! It seems like everybody knows about what's going on, except for Ginny and well, us ;) But at least some of the secrets are out in the open now!! But Scorpius is really Draco's son? Well, then, who's the mother? And what begins? Questions over questions! Please, answer them soon.
Name: tinamarie reviewed
Chapter 13 on Jun 09, 2008 10:50 am
Interesting...just when I thought I had a handle on everything. Oh and I recommend that Gin and Draco watch Zoolander, very good muggle comedy.
Name: cocacolanicky reviewed
Chapter 15 on Jun 09, 2008 10:18 am
Oh I'm so excited! Literally cannot wait for the next chapter, am twitching irritably in need of my next dose =) Fantastic story this whole time =)
Name: SpiffyDee reviewed
Chapter 14 on Jun 09, 2008 09:59 am
Loved 'The Last Unicorn' shout out.
Name: LilyLove reviewed
Chapter 15 on Jun 09, 2008 09:41 am
wtf?
Name: shans12342002 reviewed
Chapter 15 on Jun 09, 2008 09:14 am
What! Oh my gosh i'm so confused! Continue soon! I can't wait to read what happens next!