Name: kittenbooks reviewed
oops on Sep 07, 2012 04:46 pm
Ooh, I really liked this. I'd love to see how Draco handles that slip...
Name: Gin Malfoy reviewed
oops on Nov 24, 2010 04:01 pm
so how many reviews have you got yet? 'cause if you write a whole story, I wanna read it. :D I loved this.
Name: lily_malfoy reviewed
oops on Jul 16, 2009 06:57 am
great fic!
would love to see more
added to my fav just in case you decide to had more!
thank you
Name: ajc18 reviewed
oops on May 01, 2009 10:34 pm
OMG love it!!!!!!
plz do a story!!
Name: Lynth reviewed
oops on Sep 27, 2008 07:11 pm
A- Freaking- mazing....
More! More!
Author's Response: yay...rnmore??? lets see..i don't have time these days to even complete newlyweds...so I'm not sure if this will be continued in the recent future at least.
Name: Princess Neesa reviewed
oops on Mar 16, 2008 01:21 am
You did a fantastic job, love! Please make an epilogue so I can find out what happens next.
Author's Response: well..I have a confession to make now. I was not at all planning to write an Epilogue or a sequel to this fic... but since I have recieved SSoooo many reviews asking for same. I'm thinking of writing a sort of a continuing one-shot for this story.. and for that..I ned to re-read the 7th part again..which will be messy for me. So keep tuned in..Who knows I might actually write a sequel!!
Name: cindy reviewed
oops on Jan 11, 2008 03:05 am
cute
Author's Response: thank you :D
Name: wowkelseyisgreat reviewed
oops on Nov 01, 2007 03:08 pm
I loved this. I want more!!!! How many reviews do you need???? MORE MORE MORE!!!!!!!
Author's Response: I am so sorry..but I don't think I'll be continuing this story firther..especially after HP-DH....it will be sticky if I try to.
Name: gypsybaby21 reviewed
oops on Aug 13, 2007 11:11 am
YES PLEASE!! For more of the story! It was awesome. I loved the sex scene...and of course the rest of the story will have sex in it too right? Another encounter, and another, and another and then they fall in love! How cute! Well lets see it then!! Great job. I had absolutely no problem understanding the story either! Loved it!
Author's Response: Well...sorry to say, but I have not yet decided if I'm going to continue this. But if I will, it will be in my other story Newlweds..already there at D&G. Do read it...I promise it to be wonderful like this.
Name: hedwig reviewed
oops on Aug 07, 2007 04:44 am
Hey!!!
this was great! please elaborate!!! ;)
Author's Response: Uh..thanks for the great part...but what about elaborate??:P I'm not sure if I got the right meaning of "elaborate" here **wink wink**
Name: white_and_red_love reviewed
oops on Aug 06, 2007 11:38 am
i love the pirates quote. the whole honesty bit.
Author's Response: I'm glad you loved it.rnrnI was so .... week-kneed when johnny Depp said that in the movie that I vowed to use that somewhere in my story..and I'm happy that it was indeed liked :D
Name: amor_quies reviewed
oops on Aug 06, 2007 11:29 am
I don't want to come off as harsh, but I feel as if there should be some constructive criticism here. There is potential, but I feel like you threw together a bunch of big words without fully comprehending their definitions. This, in turn, made the story feel choppy and there was more than one spot in the one-shot at which I had to reread certain phrases to understand what you were trying to relay. In short, I felt your phrasing was awkward.
Again, I'm sorry if I sound harsh. I really don't mean to be, but the internet tends to make most things sound negative, etc.
Author's Response: Really...thanks so much, I still feel that my word phrasing part is still very weak..I can speak english well -but lack the flow in written english (I am an Indian..so my mother tongue is Hindi) So don't worry -I'm not offended (even if you tried so :D).rnrnI'll surely keep this mind while writing my next story (NewlyWeds), hoping it will be the one which really impresses you....rnBut I'm glad you think that there is indeed a potential over here. I'll try to improve my standards..thanks a ton!!
Name: oxymoron8 reviewed
oops on Aug 06, 2007 05:49 am
Loved that picture and this was an amazing counterpiece to it. Great writing. I really enjoyed seeing the art come to life so to speak...
Author's Response: Oh...I think you are the only one who compilimented me so nicely. It is indeed my best review that this story for a nice counter-piece for that masterpiece of Raine's....rnThat was an awesome line-art of hers, and I had an urge to write a story on it. hence the result -"Oops!!"rnrnI am overjoyed that you felt that the art came to life!!!
Name: missY reviewed
oops on Aug 06, 2007 04:56 am
NOT! Sequel will be nice. Anyway, who can resist Draco?
Author's Response: I don't think a sequel will come, sorry!!rnrnBUT... as I mentioned, maybe I can try and fit this in my next story -NEWLYWEDS as a past scene(memory).rnLet's see if I can. Do you really want me to??
Name: AZIAF reviewed
oops on Aug 06, 2007 04:52 am
I think you should continue this story instead of making it a one-shot.
Author's Response: As I just said in the above review, I don't think a sequel will come, sorry!! BUT... as I mentioned, maybe I can try and fit this in my next story -NEWLYWEDS as a past scene(memory). Let's see if I can. Do you really want me to??rn
Name: wizilover reviewed
oops on Aug 06, 2007 01:33 am
oooh that was hot. seemed a little implausible though that she would just shorten her skirt like that
Author's Response: Nec to know that you found it hot :D. Well, to me it sounds perfectly plausible to bunch up your skirt at the waistband. I do that whenever I feel icky and my skirt feels too long for me (though not in public...which Ginny unwittingly did :P)...
Name: Hopeless reviewed
oops on Aug 05, 2007 07:53 pm
wow that was so steamy!! i'm still trying to catch up with myself!
loved this story
Author's Response: Oh god...I actually got ssooo many reviews....thanks so much -I am really so overjoyed..I can't even express.rnrnI'm glad you liked it!!!