Name: noona1 reviewed
Somebody to Love on Feb 07, 2010 09:20 pm
i loved this chapter .. the ending of it was funny .. to the next chapter!
Name: luvtheweasleys reviewed
Somebody to Love on Jun 22, 2008 06:08 am
Love the plot idea, however I think it is moving too fast. Everyone is emotionless and the dialogue is predictable. You need to be new and inventive...give some background, some emotion and throw in some character depth..I will see where this is headed.
Name: dristi reviewed
Somebody to Love on Jun 02, 2008 04:50 am
hi, i just wanted to tell you that your story is fabulous! i loved it! specially hg/ss, i'm totally into their ship since i read "one vital incredient"! i loved all the other pairings as well. dm/gw are as fantastic as ever and rw/pp work well togeter! pls update soon
Name: smarties101 reviewed
Somebody to Love on Feb 18, 2008 11:24 pm
LOVE IT! great plot too!
Name: wiccawitch reviewed
Somebody to Love on Dec 18, 2007 06:59 pm
YAY! Congratulations on having your chapter accepted! I liked it a lot. It seemed a little odd at the end with how easily Draco and Ginny hit it off. I loved her sarcasm about working at Burger King it made me laugh. Good show though please continue.
Name: tinamarie reviewed
Somebody to Love on Dec 17, 2007 12:04 pm
Bwuahahahahahaha I love that Hermoine and Snape are together! I always knew Ron and Pansy were meant for each other as well.
Name: detlefren reviewed
Somebody to Love on Aug 13, 2007 11:02 am
Okay, this is basically really disturbing, but it is well-written, and I'm enjoying it tons.
Author's Response: Disturbing? How so?
Name: ExquisiteBeauty reviewed
Somebody to Love on Aug 12, 2007 09:23 pm
I like this story so far!
.... But, I cant help noticing that the characters are a bit OOC. I dont want to dictate how you write your story, because it is yours, but the characters seem too conventional and none are taking the situation seriously. I mean, wont any of the characters feel awkward when theyre around their ex-lover with a new lover? Especially when theyre new lover is their soul mate? I cant imagine Hermione being so calm around Ron and Pansy, because Ron was ultimately her first love. And the fact that Ron is so calm is just... odd. He doesnt seem to care that Snape is Hermiones fiance, even though hes hated Snape since the age of 11. Also, the Slytherins are so open and friendly, calling each other by their first names. I would have thought that Draco would have put up more of a fight then just surrendering, and calling Ron 'Ron.'
I hope you dont take this as mean or rude, because Im not trying to be. Please just think of this as constructive criticism, or helpful advice.
Name: CCC reviewed
Somebody to Love on Aug 10, 2007 12:07 pm
Cute start, but what a tease. I mean Draco and the Next button which took me to an empty page. How dissapointing. Write more soon.
Name: wishbear reviewed
Somebody to Love on Aug 10, 2007 10:14 am
I lovvvve it! !Keep writing!
Name: snowfelon reviewed
Somebody to Love on Aug 10, 2007 09:45 am
hmm I like it! like the concept of it all really... loved Draco's reaction after he saw Ginny and made the about-turn.. looking forward to more =)
Name: Flipinpenname reviewed
Somebody to Love on Aug 10, 2007 01:48 am
great chapter! update soon!
Name: iverseng reviewed
Somebody to Love on Aug 10, 2007 12:54 am
It's very...fast. Not that that's a bad thing, but you'll want to make sure that you keep up the tempo.
I liked it though. Seems like something that's almost taking the mick out of all those arranged marriages fics.
Name: TheRedFerret reviewed
Somebody to Love on Aug 10, 2007 12:51 am
very nice. hope there is more soon.
Name: MaryJane Weasley reviewed
Somebody to Love on Aug 10, 2007 12:01 am
Love the idea of the story! The first chapter was great but there were a few times where it felt a little rushed. But like I said, the idea is great and I can't wait for the next update!
Name: xNymphadoraX reviewed
Somebody to Love on Aug 09, 2007 08:09 pm
I don't think I've ever laughed so hard. Very interesting the way you paired the couples. This would be fine as a oneshot and I'm curious to see what more chapters will bring. Excellent work!
Name: Grneyedminx reviewed
Somebody to Love on Aug 09, 2007 07:48 pm
Good start. I can't wait for a more detailed depth involving our favorite characters!
Name: rainlover reviewed
Somebody to Love on Aug 09, 2007 07:38 pm
hm... I like the switching of b/f's and g/f's for the weasley boys... and I think it would be great to see a mean but softened Draco, but I really like this so far and I can't wait for the next chapter!
Name: ExquisiteBeauty reviewed
Somebody to Love on Aug 09, 2007 07:37 pm
I love it!
This is a great chapter so far! Oh, at first, I thought it was going to be one of those cliche arranged marriages that have been popping up all over fandom, but this is so wonderful! I just wish you didnt break up Ron and Hermione. *sigh* Oh, well. I still got my DG fix.
I loved the part between Charlie and Fred and Katie and Alicia. It was priceless. "Oh, look. We've switched fiances. Cool, dude." I am so glad that Luna is with Blaise! Yes! Percy and Daphne was really unexpected, but I think they'll be a great couple!
Wonderful!
Name: DracoGinnyLover reviewed
Somebody to Love on Aug 09, 2007 06:24 pm
It is very good!!! Love it! :)
Name: jandjsalmon reviewed
Somebody to Love on Aug 09, 2007 06:01 pm
I adore it. I hope to read lots and lots of it! ;)
Name: janelle reviewed
Somebody to Love on Aug 09, 2007 05:44 pm
I love the pairings! I always love the fics where they have to be married. I love you idea though, with the minimum of 3 children and no contaceptives.
Name: i_heart_penguins reviewed
Somebody to Love on Aug 09, 2007 05:12 pm
Love the idea, couples, and the entire story in general, but I thought it was a little too rushed.
Name: PrincessWhizbee reviewed
Somebody to Love on Aug 09, 2007 05:04 pm
This is a goofy story so far. If it's meant to be humorous/light, I think that's fine. I really don't want to see any more Hermione/Snape (yick), and I'm not sure what your motivation was for giving Harry an underage soul mate (maybe we'll see?)
I think Ginny's line about Burger King was the best part of the story so far. More details like that would be excellent. I also thought this first part was rather rushed. It would have been good to hear the characters' reactions to the new law before they arrived at the Ministry to be matched up.
Author's Response: You think the Burger King part was the best? The nun part always made me laugh more. Interesting. Thanks for the comments!