Name: msm_2011simonebb reviewed
Separate Ways on Jun 12, 2011 11:07 am
love the pairing!!! great plot!!
Name: luvtheweasleys reviewed
Separate Ways on Jun 22, 2008 06:12 am
The dialogue isn't working for me...Regarless of the situation, Hermione would not talk to Prof Snape like that. I like the plot line, so I am sticking with it....I just need to see some meat of the story!
Name: dracosbabymama reviewed
Separate Ways on Apr 08, 2008 05:19 pm
hermione and snape!? that is just GROSS
Author's Response: Thank you for your opinion.
Name: snowfelon reviewed
Separate Ways on Aug 16, 2007 10:22 am
hmm... i prefered the first chapter actually... this one was a bit too rushed for me, I couldn't quite get into the story if you know what I mean. for example, the end of the previous chapter i thought was setting up something interesting, but I felt it got glossed over really quick at the start of this chapter. Still, I'm looking forward to reading what comes next =)
Name: Suzyfloozy reviewed
Separate Ways on Aug 13, 2007 01:39 am
Oh god I'm loving this, even the Hermion/snape pairing which I always found icky.
Name: sweet gurl reviewed
Separate Ways on Aug 11, 2007 04:14 pm
mm i love this story!!
Name: princessswan reviewed
Separate Ways on Aug 11, 2007 08:42 am
HAHAHAHA.. wow. That's a LOT of Slytherins at the Burrow.. crazy. But yes, the pairings are pretty amazing.. some more common than others, but I love them all just the same. :) Anyway, please update again soon!! :D
Name: Hopeless reviewed
Separate Ways on Aug 11, 2007 07:47 am
oh really cute.
Name: amor_quies reviewed
Separate Ways on Aug 11, 2007 07:25 am
I agree with CourtneyFaith. I recognize some of the suggestions I made that you've begun to incorporate into this fic, like Mrs. Weasley's begrudging acceptance of the law. Whereas in the first chapter I felt she was all "Oh, there's nothing we can do about it," I was pleased to see that there is some concern in her about the law. I like that Mr. Weasley had a stronger reaction, which of course we've seen in CoS.
I still think that you could incorporate some more character development. I believe that would make the story seem less fast-paced (unless that's what you're going for) and more realistic. Also, while it was noble of Draco to ask Ginny's father for permission, I don't think he would have done it quite so suddenly. Again, this is probably a result of the fic's fast pace.
As a side note, Snape/Hermione still makes me squicky, but if that's what you want...go for it? Heh.
Name: CourtneyFaith reviewed
Separate Ways on Aug 11, 2007 04:44 am
~I will admit you have done a fair job of including every pair in second chapter. The converstations seem to less forced also. I am pleased with the progress.~
Name: magnolia_rain reviewed
Separate Ways on Aug 10, 2007 09:32 pm
This is wonderful. I can't wait for more.
Name: jandjsalmon reviewed
Separate Ways on Aug 10, 2007 05:31 pm
I like it. The pairings are all very convenient... but I like it. ;)
Name: myyellowrainboots reviewed
Separate Ways on Aug 10, 2007 04:43 pm
ok. so let me start by saying this is a really cute and good idea for a story. but the way you have written it so far needs some work; its very choppy and they characters haven't really had any time to develop. Try adding in more details and strive to make it flow a bit better.
But its really nice so far! good luck!
Name: Flipinpenname reviewed
Separate Ways on Aug 10, 2007 03:51 pm
good chapter. update soon!
Name: Airmid reviewed
Separate Ways on Aug 10, 2007 03:01 pm
Nice, I loved how Hermione stole Sev's wand! Ginny sticking up for Draco with Molly was a nice touch. Arthur's threat had me rolling- he always seems so calm. Poor Pansy! Good for Ron, sticking up for her and worrying over her. I really, really liked this chapter.