Name: luvtheweasleys reviewed
Loco-motion on Jun 22, 2008 06:16 am
This chapter flowed a bit better, but was still a tad rushed.
Name: tinamarie reviewed
Loco-motion on Dec 17, 2007 12:18 pm
In all honesty, I love the story but I'm thinking that the whole concept of force marriage would invoke much more heated misunderstandings, denial, and complications. Perhaps in the up coming chapters?
Name: indigoeeyes reviewed
Loco-motion on Oct 10, 2007 01:00 pm
i have nothing to say except this is going really good!!
Name: DracoGinnyLover reviewed
Loco-motion on Aug 23, 2007 01:26 pm
This is such a cute story! Good Luck with it! :)
Name: Dex reviewed
Loco-motion on Aug 21, 2007 12:27 pm
This is so ridiculously mary-jane that it's... well... ridiculous. But *squee* I love it! Seriously, had me laughing outrageously. You just need to work on character development. Also, relationship wise, it's going to fast. But I still love it, I see good things in your future. You have good ideas. (Although in real life they just would have given monetary rewards for having children, or a Fornicate Under Command of the King. Good thing this isn't real life eh? ;P )
Name: Flipinpenname reviewed
Loco-motion on Aug 20, 2007 01:25 pm
awe i really like this story! update soon!
Name: darkloveangel reviewed
Loco-motion on Aug 19, 2007 09:16 pm
i love this story!
theresa*
Name: jandjsalmon reviewed
Loco-motion on Aug 19, 2007 08:25 pm
A girls’ day out sounds fun... ;)
Name: joey101 reviewed
Loco-motion on Aug 19, 2007 05:18 pm
lovely chapter...update soon!
Name: Blueeyedbrunette reviewed
Loco-motion on Aug 19, 2007 04:48 pm
this is going to be way fun!
Name: ContessaNatasha reviewed
Loco-motion on Aug 19, 2007 03:14 pm
Eh. An ok start, but very typical. There are a million "arranged marriage" or "marriage law" fics out there, and unless this turns into a parody, nothing really stands out about it, and it is rather cliched.
Also, many people seem [i]very[/i] out of character, so you might want to work on that.
Cute fic, though, and some funny moments.
Oh, and you might want to watch the muggle references. The Burger King one in particular. I doubt Draco and Ginny would know what Burger King was, much less joke about it.
Name: abby reviewed
Loco-motion on Aug 19, 2007 02:56 pm
YAY! one big happy...err, family! please update!
Name: princessswan reviewed
Loco-motion on Aug 19, 2007 02:51 pm
HAHAHA poor Draco.. stealing Ginny's breakfast and getting attacked. :P Anyway, cute chapter, can't wait to see the girl's day out next chapter! :D
Name: detlefren reviewed
Loco-motion on Aug 19, 2007 02:24 pm
Ohhhh... I loved the chapter. This story is unfolding really well. P.S. This story is disturbing because A) Hermione/Snape-- ewwww B) The idea of forcing barely grown young adults into marriage is a little medieval.
That's just my thoughts; no offense intended. I truly adore the fic.