Name: ElspethBates reviewed
Fire and Ice on Feb 21, 2008 04:32 am
Your story idea is great, lots of fun and lots you could do with the pairings you have. On a bit of a down-note... it seems a little rushed and a bit frantic with all the yelling and throwing things and everyone losing their tempers. If things could slow down a bit, and perhaps if people "snapped" instead of "yelled" it might help slow the pace for your readers.
Name: Bill_is_my_boi reviewed
Fire and Ice on Feb 20, 2008 05:35 am
i like!
Name: wiccawitch reviewed
Fire and Ice on Feb 19, 2008 07:30 am
Bravo once again good show. Keep it up!
Name: smarties101 reviewed
Somebody to Love on Feb 18, 2008 11:24 pm
LOVE IT! great plot too!
Name: ronlover reviewed
Fire and Ice on Feb 18, 2008 03:15 pm
lol. Great update. Update as soon as you can! :D
Name: Mollie reviewed
Fire and Ice on Feb 18, 2008 01:28 pm
That was good. Please update soon!!!
Name: oxymoron8 reviewed
Fire and Ice on Feb 18, 2008 11:44 am
Great chapter. Happy writing. I cannot wait to see them fight for names.
Name: Flipinpenname reviewed
Fire and Ice on Feb 18, 2008 08:33 am
great chapter update soon!
Name: wiccawitch reviewed
Girls Just Wanna Have Fun on Jan 27, 2008 08:51 am
Are you going to continue this story? It is really good and I am interested in hearing more!
Author's Response: Of course I'm continuing! I want to know how it ends as well.
Name: Dark__Angel reviewed
Girls Just Wanna Have Fun on Dec 25, 2007 08:36 pm
Please finish!!!
Name: wiccawitch reviewed
Girls Just Wanna Have Fun on Dec 18, 2007 07:20 pm
Bravo! More please. The pairings are intriguing.
Name: wiccawitch reviewed
Somebody to Love on Dec 18, 2007 06:59 pm
YAY! Congratulations on having your chapter accepted! I liked it a lot. It seemed a little odd at the end with how easily Draco and Ginny hit it off. I loved her sarcasm about working at Burger King it made me laugh. Good show though please continue.
Name: tinamarie reviewed
Girls Just Wanna Have Fun on Dec 17, 2007 01:11 pm
Just when I was really getting into it! Your killing me! :( Don't mind me I'm just being pouty because I don't have another chapter to go to. Please update soon!
Name: Blueeyedbrunette reviewed
Girls Just Wanna Have Fun on Dec 17, 2007 01:04 pm
loooove it!
Name: tinamarie reviewed
Loco-motion on Dec 17, 2007 12:18 pm
In all honesty, I love the story but I'm thinking that the whole concept of force marriage would invoke much more heated misunderstandings, denial, and complications. Perhaps in the up coming chapters?
Name: tinamarie reviewed
Somebody to Love on Dec 17, 2007 12:04 pm
Bwuahahahahahaha I love that Hermoine and Snape are together! I always knew Ron and Pansy were meant for each other as well.
Name: strawberry_shortcake reviewed
Girls Just Wanna Have Fun on Dec 17, 2007 09:15 am
This is really good. I enjoy it a lot. I don't mean to nit pick but you should use Qu'est-ce que instead of Est-ce que in the first line. Overall great story!
Name: twistedgracie reviewed
Girls Just Wanna Have Fun on Dec 17, 2007 08:12 am
Just a correction to your French: "A toi parle..." The verb parler doesn't have an o in it. Don't mean to be picky...I'm a French Major.
Nice story otherwise - I eagerly await the next installment.
~Grace
Author's Response: It isn't supposed to be parle. It's an idiomatic phrase.
Name: ginnyd reviewed
Girls Just Wanna Have Fun on Dec 17, 2007 03:45 am
i like it cant wait to read more
Name: joliefille reviewed
Girls Just Wanna Have Fun on Dec 17, 2007 02:17 am
It seems a bit contrived, to some extent--girls getting the wrong Weasley brother, Hermione & Snape together, and so on--but I really like the potential this has. If you develop the characters more, and steer them away from the stereotypes that are so easy to fall into, it'll be great. You're already heading that direction with Ron standing up for Pansy, even though they don't like each other, and with Daphne starting to like Luna, so just add on!
And now I have "Somebody to Love" stuck in my head...
Name: Hopeless reviewed
Girls Just Wanna Have Fun on Dec 16, 2007 06:01 pm
oh that was such a cute chapter! I like that the characters relationships are falling into place!
Name: Jordanza reviewed
Girls Just Wanna Have Fun on Dec 16, 2007 04:23 pm
this story is good! can't wait for a bit more!
Name: CCC reviewed
Girls Just Wanna Have Fun on Dec 16, 2007 02:41 pm
Geez, makes "Can I buy you a drink?" seem like a bad idea.
Author's Response: I really tried not to be so melodramatic, but it just came out that way.
Name: 0630938 reviewed
Girls Just Wanna Have Fun on Dec 16, 2007 02:25 pm
It's
Que pensez vous de votre fiancé
the
A toi (la) parole ma soeur
Good job on the frech seriously
Name: Kalira reviewed
Girls Just Wanna Have Fun on Dec 16, 2007 12:21 pm
Pretty good, I'm gonna keep reading it!