Name: lavenderab reviewed
Chapter 4 on Oct 16, 2008 10:34 am
Nice chapter
Author's Response: Glad you liked it
Name: bee245 reviewed
Chapter 4 on Oct 07, 2008 05:59 pm
this story needs a lot of work. you really need to check your grammar, and there are countless continuity errors. you spelled nicole two different ways. and there's no flow.
do you read the chapters before giving them in?
you should get a beta.
sorry if that was too brutal.
but other than that the ideas are there and you have some of the wit that's needed for their characters. you just need to find a way to make everything work and make it good and interesting because it took effort not to move on to something else.
bee245
Name: Flipinpenname reviewed
Chapter 4 on Oct 07, 2008 04:03 pm
so wait... blaise is married to daphne? woah. didn't see that one. and how disappointing! it was blaise kissing her not draco!? haha. update soon!
Author's Response: answered in next chapter...which SHOULD be posted soon enough
Name: Extreme Dancer reviewed
Chapter 4 on Oct 07, 2008 01:54 pm
Good chapter! I want to slap Blaise upside the face... I was falling in love with him and his magnificent obsession with Ginny until we found out he's married. Jerk-face. His one chance for redemption will be if they're married to provide some sort of cover for them for something, but otherwise he's crap.
Sorry, I get a little too into things sometimes :) Great chapter, though; I loved it!
Author's Response: Blaise is a character I'm loving...... I so wanted his character to be just like this...He's coming out perfectly till now. That's all I'm going to say right now...
Name: 0630938 reviewed
Chapter 4 on Oct 07, 2008 08:04 am
LOL, is Blaies married?
hahah what a little rascal.
Author's Response: but a very sweet rascal
Name: Shwadi reviewed
Chapter 4 on Oct 07, 2008 05:45 am
heyy, good chappy :) where did u find that dress?? who made it?
Author's Response: i found the dress though random searching on altavista... n thus i don't know who made it. at least not me
Name: wandap1016 reviewed
Chapter 4 on Oct 07, 2008 04:57 am
Nice to see an update! Ahh Man I was really hoping it was Ash that was kissing Ginny. Blaise is such a snake, I never got a good feeling about him. I was also hoping that Draco would catch him and Ginny. That wuld've been priceless!
Author's Response: Draco kissing Ginny no doubt would've been priceless, but also predictable. also, in the initial stages of the chapter -that was the very case, but it was playing havoc with my plot line, so I cut it down mercilessly :D And come on, we need the tension between draco and Ginny...don't we?? **wink wink**