Name: LovingBlackParadise reviewed
Chapter 1 on Apr 29, 2009 01:25 pm
i like it its hot but kinda dark you should continue.
Author's Response: I'm glad you like it! I wouldn't know where to continue if I wanted to haha
Name: jezebel87 reviewed
Chapter 1 on Sep 19, 2007 06:24 pm
i love that! you should definitely continue the story
Author's Response: So far, a continuation isn't written in the stars, but if inspiration [in the form of a plot] hit's I will. Thank you for reading!
Name: BlackSnowflakes reviewed
Chapter 1 on Sep 18, 2007 06:42 pm
Really good...and it's your only fic posted! (Yes i checked :D ) so thats increddible
I especially likes the "facade of maturity" bit, because its so true, and the story is so heart-wrenching..I loved it. And the gloomy/melancholy mood fit so well
...sequel?? ...although I do like it as a loner too..
Author's Response: Thank you so much for your extremely kind words. I'm glad you appreciate it alone because, as of now, I don't plan on a sequel. There's only so far you can take non-happily-ever-afters before plot steps in and they're married, which doesn't suit Draco and Ginny in this case.
Name: arabela reviewed
Chapter 1 on Sep 17, 2007 04:35 pm
oh wow, this was fantastic! This was your first fic? Please PLEASE at least CONSIDER doing a sequel OS or fic or something where they either break up or get together...somewhere where things get really complicated. I like your D/G, they're really different from most.
VERY good job and I hope to see more from you soon!!!
Author's Response: I'm glad you're open to the non-maternal Ginny. Thank you for your review and your read, especially, and I will consider a sequel but nothing's going to happen until inspiration hits. I'm already working on another story!
Name: Pipperstorms reviewed
Chapter 1 on Sep 16, 2007 05:04 am
This was very well written. I loved the story, but I would haved liked to feel something a little bit more at the end. I look forward to reading more from you!
Author's Response: Thank you so much for the review. I'm glad to hear that you liked it!
Name: spazzingqueen reviewed
Chapter 1 on Sep 15, 2007 01:50 pm
Omg that was wonderful. Hope to see more of your writing :)
Author's Response: I'm glad to hear it! You have no idea how good it feels to have people enjoy your work.
Name: Ananyamous reviewed
Chapter 1 on Sep 15, 2007 12:40 pm
Lovely fic. I love how you referred to them as frozen and used the snow and cigarrettes to visually show that.
Author's Response: I'm glad to see that you liked it, and that you can appreciate the fact that Ginny isn't always a warm, maternal-esque character.
Name: pattygirl reviewed
Chapter 1 on Sep 15, 2007 10:12 am
luv it! please continue!
Author's Response: I'll definately continue writing, but I don't know if I'll continue this particular story. It doesn't have any foundation for a plot, and I hate stories that drag on without a direction. I'm thrilled that you like it though!
Name: lilydarliing reviewed
Chapter 1 on Sep 14, 2007 07:56 pm
I liked it.
An interesting read.
Parts were a bit confusing/the language didn't flow as nicely, but it was a really interesting read. However, I feel the "cold" characterization of Ginny is a bit off. Nevertheless, I'm a fan of it. It's really very nice.
Absolutely the best 1st fic I've ever read. Without a doubt.
Author's Response: That's one flattering review. Are you familiar with the 'sandwich' technique in editing (i.e. beginning with a compliment, throwing in a question, critique, or other statment that would put the reciever on the defensive, then ending with another compliment)? If not, I suppose you are now. It's common to use that format when editing so that people are receptive to your suggestions. It works too--I plan on keeping flow in mind next time I write.
Name: princessswan reviewed
Chapter 1 on Sep 14, 2007 03:59 pm
Niiiice! Hahah they should really do it though.. that'd be even better. ;) Haha anyway, who needs homework when you're clearly this talented at writing Draco & Ginny fics! Please do continue.. perhaps have multiple chapter fic next! :D I look forward to your next fic.. thanks for sharing such a cute one-shot!
Author's Response: Thanks for the review, and I'll definately continue. What's college really going to get me in the future, right?
Name: reenie reviewed
Chapter 1 on Sep 14, 2007 02:43 pm
Ugh. Very, very hot in an angsty way. Will there be more chapters?
Author's Response: Unfortunately no, not for this fic. It never had much of a plot to begin with, I was just walking down the street and some kid blew a smoke ring in my face. I'll definately write more though, and if I find a way to create a sequel/prequel without ruining the integrity of this piece, I will write it.
Name: CCC reviewed
Chapter 1 on Sep 14, 2007 02:34 pm
Homework is overrated. Wait, I'm supposed to say, "Do your homework, and write fanfic on your study breaks." There that was the mature thing to say. I feel sorry for them in this fic. Maybe there could be a sequel where they save each other, and let go of the pain. hint hint
Author's Response: I'm flattered that you've not only read my piece but reviewed (I'm a huge fan of your work!). Right now I have no intentions of a sequel for fear of ruining the integrity of this piece with badly designed plot, but I'll consider it if the inspiration strikes.
Name: yomoedmb reviewed
Chapter 1 on Sep 14, 2007 10:26 am
Um I vote on not doing homework because right now I should be finishing reading this book and starting to write an essay, but I'm reading your splendid story. And I mean splendid. So keep writing and don't do homework, k?
Author's Response: My mother says I have to do homework since that's why I'm at college. But maybe I'll just pretend to do my homework until exams and keep writing instead. We can not do homework together.
Name: Blair Witch reviewed
Chapter 1 on Sep 13, 2007 06:43 pm
"Even Crabbe and Goyle could be reduced to flecks of dead skin floating on the stale air of the castle with that particular combination."
I love that line. Really, very descriptive. The characterization was a bit off, but I'll chock that up to not having the back story of their togetherness.
A bit off back story would be really cool.
Author's Response: Thanks for such a specific compliment. If I ever write more on this piece, I'll be sure to include back story.
Name: RitaSeona reviewed
Chapter 1 on Sep 13, 2007 06:30 pm
it is WONDERFUL. i'm so glad that you trusted me to beta this. i LOVE it and i really cant wait for more. really. who does their homework anyway? i just hope that you'll be returning the favor sometime soon. I LOVE YOU.
Author's Response: I LOVE YOU TOO. I'm not doing my homework hahhaa.