Name: goldmamaphoenix reviewed
for Sarea on Jul 05, 2004 10:19 am
very simple and straightforward tone. Started reminding me of my crushes in school. Its a universal theme...what if the person you have a crush on very publicly shows affection for you too? The family reactions were great. Don't often see that in D/G fan fiction. The ending made me grin. The name calling is so much fun.
Name: cjmisszuluknots reviewed
for Sarea on Jul 05, 2004 07:45 am
Wonderful!! This is why I love D/G just cause I don't know it relates to my life in some twisted kind of way. Your story really made me smile though. The writing was brillant and I loved the last lines. What a clencher! I added it to my fav fic just so I could read it again when I needed a pick me up. Thanks for writing it!
Name: Erised reviewed
for Sarea on Jul 04, 2004 05:52 am
This was very suspenseful and emotional and I thoroughly enjoyed every word. Wonderful ficlet.
Name: booster reviewed
for Sarea on Jul 04, 2004 12:09 am
Wow... lovely stuff here, Myn. I particularly liked the way that it was the upcoming absence of each other that finally pushed Draco over the edge and into something public. And what a kiss that was! Shame she's going to have to wait till the next school year for a repeat.
And very nice to see him slowly change his ways, dependent on her smiles, all the while never saying a word to each other. Very nice indeed - Thanks.
Name: minkey reviewed
for Sarea on Jul 03, 2004 03:07 pm
Awww that was lovely! Great story, i loved it!
Name: StrangerWithMyFace reviewed
for Sarea on Jul 02, 2004 05:08 pm
Aww. Just awww. Lovely, Sharlene, as always. :)
Name: Marilyn reviewed
for Sarea on Jul 02, 2004 04:26 pm
Oh my God! Oh my God! I loved this story! Thanks and keep up the great work!
Name: Nicole Lynn reviewed
for Sarea on Jul 02, 2004 02:41 pm
I adored it. You have such a pleasant writing style and I enjoy reading your fiction more than I care to admit.
Name: Sarea Okelani reviewed
for Sarea on Jul 02, 2004 09:51 am
Dude,
Author's Response: Dude.
Name: Fern reviewed
for Sarea on Jul 02, 2004 08:00 am
OH MY GOODNESS! *dies of totaly joy and bliss* I really do wish you'd continue with this and make it a multi-chaptered fic! Wow. Just....wow. I like a lot. Although it seems as though it should be OOC, it comes across beautifully. Well done!
Name: KLime reviewed
for Sarea on Jul 02, 2004 05:09 am
Excellent!!! (Didn't find any other word Sorry)
Name: anneli reviewed
for Sarea on Jul 02, 2004 04:05 am
that was brilliant - the ending was completely unexpected. you're so good at writing fics!