Name: Phoenix Malfoy reviewed
Chapter 17 on May 26, 2010 04:50 pm
Severus and Hermione should hook up! (:
The zoo stuff was cute(:
Name: luvtheweasleys reviewed
Chapter 17 on Jun 21, 2008 05:13 am
Disturbing, yet I like the thought of Snape taking care of Hermione.
Name: CourtneyFaith reviewed
Chapter 17 on Jun 13, 2008 11:42 am
I thought I got a message saying chapter 18 was up??
Name: LovelyLytton reviewed
Chapter 17 on Jun 13, 2008 06:26 am
I am so happy about the update. I really like your story, especially Draco in his dual role of father and murderer. Him showing his darker and more powerful side is extremely interesting, I´d love to see more of this. Another thing I´d like to see is how he interacts with deatheaters or Lord Voldemort, when Ginny is not present. But seeing how your fic is mostly from Ginny´s POV, I can understand perfectly if this won´t come to be.
Let me stress again how much I am enjoying your work before I get to the teeny tiny criticism I have.
“That would be quite a site.” -> It should be "sight".
And after reading all 17 chapters, it does get slighty annoying to have either Ginny or Draco say "Libby, we would like something to eat." or "Libby, we would like a bath." and so on more or less once a chapter. Don´t get me wrong, I do not complain about the rights of house-elves, I´d just like another way of expressing their use. Something among the lines of "Ginny called Libby and asked her to draw a bath, which was promtly done." or "Draco demanded dinner, which he elf was happy to supply.".
Name: aizak reviewed
Chapter 17 on Jun 12, 2008 09:39 am
I'd love too please see some action between those two. Im begging you here, please!!!
Name: Padfootedmoony reviewed
Chapter 17 on Jun 12, 2008 06:10 am
wow. this is great. please update again soon.
Name: Jordanza reviewed
Chapter 17 on Jun 12, 2008 12:36 am
oh how sad. I'm looking forward to more!
Name: GoldenFawkes reviewed
Chapter 17 on Jun 11, 2008 11:56 pm
Smut scene! Smut scene!
Name: Mistress of Potions reviewed
Chapter 17 on Jun 11, 2008 07:32 am
You do know that If only purebloods are allowed to have children there will be an ever decreasing gene pool, thereby insuring the inbreeding that will eventually produce only morons and/or squibs.
Human and animal breeding have both (minus the magical reference) been documented to prove this. Magic may provide ways to deal with the results but cannot prevent them from happening.
Laws of physics and genetics are immutable.
Author's Response: I'm aware of the laws of genetics. Did you forget the Voldemort is insane?
Name: tinamarie reviewed
Chapter 17 on Jun 11, 2008 06:29 am
So I read this chapter yesterday and didn't get the chance to review so here it is...I honestly love how you are portraying the "new" Hermione. I have to admit that in OG books, I was turned off ever so slightly because of her "good two shoe" demeanor. But this, this is a Mione I like! I mean I feel bad that her memory was erased and she stated out as a blank slate, but I do enjoy the personality she is exhibiting now. I've always wished she used her smarts to be more of a smart "you know what" and this fullfills my dream. Overall your story is developing well, Gin's sugar coated life so to speak is breaking down and I find it interesting to see how she progresses to coming to terms with her life with Draco and the Malfoy's as well as the grim reality that the life she knew is gone forever and we can't move forward if we keep looking back. Looking forward to the next chapter!
Author's Response: Thank you. I'm trying to show that Ginny is starting to face realities. Plus I've always wanted Hermione to have more of an attitude.
Name: Caroline reviewed
Chapter 17 on Jun 11, 2008 02:22 am
How aweful! And off course I love it. You have a made a very interesting world and I enjoy every new tid bit. The part with Hermione was very sweet. Especially the part were she said she liked to piss him off=) I really love this story=)
Author's Response: Thank you. I like Hermione with an attitude.
Name: peppermint reviewed
Chapter 17 on Jun 11, 2008 01:27 am
YAY, a longer chapter.
In the words of Draco “Thank you for introducing that disturbing thought.” ....so, eemmm, are the involved, please say no!
I really love your characterisation of Hermione....I so want her to pass a comment on Ginny's hair and have a vague recollection of Ron, that would SO break my heart...but I'd love it! Please update soon!
Author's Response: Thank you. I think Hermione will have characteristics of her former personality, but she won't remember anything.
Name: wandap1016 reviewed
Chapter 17 on Jun 11, 2008 12:31 am
Great chapter..thank you. Draco and Ginny's little family outing was so cute. I just love how Ginny is falling for him knowing exactly who he is and what he does.
You can tell that our boy Draco has already fallen for Ginny and is trying his hardest to make her feel like they are a true family. I can't wait for them to get closer.
I'm also interested to find out how Hermione's transformation turns out. I have a feeling she'll eventually remember more than she's suppose to. I really like the way you portray Hermione in your story, she seems very sassy. I'm glad Ginny will at least get to be a part of her life. Voldemort is one sick puppy, the plans he has for the muggleborn and half blood children is just insane.
As always, I can't wait to read more!
Author's Response: Thank you. Voldemort is insane. Eventually that will be his downfall.
Name: babigurlchels reviewed
Chapter 17 on Jun 10, 2008 08:55 pm
I adored the petting zoo with Draco, Ginny and Leo.
I loved the way Draco got hurt by Ginny's words. Well done.
I LOVE how Hermione bugs Snape.
err.. are they ..involved? And thanks for the D/G fuzzy parts.
til next time(hopefully soon!)
Author's Response: Thank you. I was trying to show that he was emotionally invested too.
Name: sweetevil reviewed
Chapter 17 on Jun 10, 2008 07:16 pm
incredible chapter. i love how you managed to cover every emotion and i love how hermione has still retained her spirit. it's amusing to see her interact with snape. i also am loving the amount of detail you are putting into this. you have every aspect of voldemort's new regime covered. its amazing. oh and i just adored this line:
“Are they involved?” Ginny asked. Her voice squeaked a bit on the last word.
Draco winced. “Thank you for introducing that disturbing thought.”
Author's Response: Thank you. I'm trying to show that they are both unsure.
Name: DracoGinnyLover reviewed
Chapter 17 on Jun 10, 2008 06:10 pm
Ginny is not going to take that little bit of info lightly I am affraid. I can't wait to read more. Good Luck! :)
Author's Response: I believe she will pitch a fit.
Name: slygal reviewed
Chapter 17 on Jun 10, 2008 06:00 pm
HOly cow... you cover all the bases don't you! This is so meticulous on facts and so involved I find myself rereading chapters for reflection. You are an outstanding author! I love seeing that you have updated!
Author's Response: Thank you so much. I've actually had to go back and check a couple of things myself.
Name: malvia reviewed
Chapter 17 on Jun 10, 2008 03:20 pm
I'm glad to read that Hermione's still the same as can be.
Author's Response: I'm glad you liked her.
Name: Grneyedminx reviewed
Chapter 17 on Jun 10, 2008 02:02 pm
Glorious chapter!
Author's Response: thank you : )
Name: darkloveangel reviewed
Chapter 17 on Jun 10, 2008 12:44 pm
this has to be my favourtie story. and this chapter proves why. Please update soon!!!
Author's Response: Thank you. I'm glad you liked it.
Name: CourtneyFaith reviewed
Chapter 17 on Jun 10, 2008 11:49 am
Amazing chapter. I love this story.
Author's Response: Thank you : )
Name: bee245 reviewed
Chapter 17 on Jun 10, 2008 11:19 am
:O
effective last sentence. it kind of reminds me of WWII.
update soon please! its really good :D
bee245
Author's Response: Thank you.
Name: erinem reviewed
Chapter 17 on Jun 10, 2008 10:45 am
muggleborns are born spontaneously though, with no or little history of magic in their families. sooo it would really just be the muggleborns that are already living in the wizarding world that would be unallowed to have children, then? and then there will just be some rampant muggleborns in the world who don't know they're magic?
:) good chapter! I love this story.
Author's Response: I used Muggleborn to mean halfblood and muggleborn. My bad. Thanks for catching that. I hope you like the revision.
Name: Flipinpenname reviewed
Chapter 17 on Jun 10, 2008 10:44 am
voldy's evil. i don't like him. draco, on the other hand, i adore. :D loved hermoine too!
Author's Response: I wanted Hermione to be happy in the beginning. Things will get tough later.