Name: TwistedPixie reviewed
The Forgotten Line on Jul 21, 2008 08:44 am
I've missed you too! It's been ages!
What a sad lovely chapter. i love it that Draco let Ginny take his hand right at the end, and how upset he was. It was really sad but also very good because it shows us why Draco had been acting the way he's been acting lately. Loved it.
It's nice to have you back, good luck with the next chapters
xx
Author's Response: Ah, it's good to see a review from you again! I'm working on the next chapter, so the wait won't be too too long. :)
Name: DracoGinnyLover reviewed
The Forgotten Line on Jul 21, 2008 05:29 am
Well, at least now Ginny understands. So glad that you finally got the chance to update. Can't wait to read more. Good Luck! :)
Author's Response: Thanks for the kind words, as always. I'm working on the update.
Name: wandap1016 reviewed
The Forgotten Line on Jul 21, 2008 03:51 am
Hi there, I was so happy to see you've updated the story! Wow this chapter was very intense. I was holding my breath the whole time I was reading it. I'm so glad Draco is finally sharing his demons with Ginny. God poor Draco, his childhood was a complete nightmare! After watching all those horrible memoires she will definitely understand why he has been acting so withdrawn. I'm hoping this will bring them closer and that Ginny will finally tell Draco she's pregnant!
As always, I'm looking forward to the next chapter.
Author's Response: It was a very intense chapter, and I'm glad you enjoyed it. Keep your eyes out for the next chapter, it should be up shortly with some of the things you are looking forward to! :)
Name: Flipinpenname reviewed
The Forgotten Line on Jul 21, 2008 03:46 am
wow. draco's life sucked. no wonder he's having troubles. lovely story! update soon!
Author's Response: Yeah, it really did. Thanks!
Name: babyangel reviewed
The Forgotten Line on Jul 21, 2008 02:58 am
Brilliant!! please continue!!!
Author's Response: Thanks so much! I'm working on it!
Name: Mars reviewed
The Forgotten Line on Jul 21, 2008 01:22 am
Yay! I'm so glad you updated and that you're continuing this story.
This chapter is amazing; the effect of losing the war on the Malfoy family dynamic- and especially on Lucius- is portrayed so convincingly and the characters perfectly. Love it :)
Author's Response: Oh, thanks for the review. I have missed hearing from you. Next chapter is on it's way!
Name: pens82 reviewed
The Forgotten Line on Jul 20, 2008 07:08 pm
great story so far update soon
Author's Response: Thanks! I'm definitely working on the update.
Name: Iliana_r reviewed
The Forgotten Line on Jul 20, 2008 05:08 pm
It was sad. Sad to see how the lack of communication can break two people apart. Sad to see how hatred can model young minds and kill someone who is looking for the welfare of her beloved ones. And sad how two lovers can forget that they have to give each other some berth to figure out how to keep loving each other. It was a great chapter and is turning to be an excellent piece of writing.
Iliana
Author's Response: This is such a thoughtful review. I'm so glad you're enjoying it. Writing this chapter was hard for me, but I'm glad I finally made it through.
Name: hillie121 reviewed
The Forgotten Line on Jul 20, 2008 03:26 pm
so glad u updated this story its wonderful
!!!!!!!!!
Author's Response: Ah!! Thanks!
Name: LilyLove reviewed
A Cluttered Mind on Jul 20, 2008 03:18 pm
absolutely heart-wrenching chapter. i could feel the blood pounding in my ears, only to feel it come crashing to a thud with that cliffie. well done. it's been awhile since a story grabbed me like that.
Author's Response: That is such a great compliment, and I really appreciate it. Stick around!
Name: Julia Evans reviewed
The Forgotten Line on Jul 20, 2008 01:02 pm
Wow. The details in this chapter really made it enjoyable to read. Good work!
Author's Response: Aw, thanks! I really appreciate the review.
Name: shaded reviewed
The Forgotten Line on Jul 20, 2008 10:58 am
Ah, what a cliffie! Poor Narcissa, poor Draco; what a horrendous chain of events. I hope that there'll be a new chapter up soon. This revelation must change Draco's relationship with Ginny and I can't wait to see in what ways that will be.
Author's Response: I know! It's a big chapter. Thanks, as always, for the review, and stick around. More to come. :)
Name: aizak reviewed
The Forgotten Line on Jul 20, 2008 10:45 am
oh goodness. I feel like crying! Poor Draco! What he had to gio through! I hate that piece of s---, lucious! ugh! but this was a great chapter and most definitely worth the wait!!!
Author's Response: Thanks so much! I'm glad you liked it, although it was definitely heart wrenching.
Name: arabella reviewed
The Forgotten Line on Jul 20, 2008 08:49 am
this was a great chapter! i'm so glad that you finally updated. the ending was great, and you built it up to the climax extremely well, and i love the way you express the emotions of the characters.
hope to read another update soon!
Author's Response: Aw, thanks! I'm so glad you guys are still interested in reading after my extended break. I'm working on the update!
Name: rebel_angel reviewed
Holiday From Reality on Jul 20, 2008 06:24 am
Oh, I didn't realize, just assumed. Sorry.
Author's Response: No problem. :) Thanks!
Name: luvtheweasleys reviewed
A Cluttered Mind on Apr 25, 2008 12:43 pm
WOW...I need an update, please. I love your story. Your ability to draw your readers into the story is amazing. Everything flows so well. A fantastic read. Thank you so much.
Author's Response: Aw, that's so sweet! You're welcome!
Name: luvtheweasleys reviewed
Going Unsaid on Apr 25, 2008 12:42 pm
AHHHHH, I want everyone to be happy for once!!!
Author's Response: I know, it's hard!
Name: luvtheweasleys reviewed
Visions of Red on Apr 25, 2008 12:38 pm
Damn those Potter brats, just like their git of a father!! I think I may see a baby in the future? Great job.
Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing as always!
Name: luvtheweasleys reviewed
In the Distance on Apr 25, 2008 12:31 pm
Oh man!!! That was a cliffhanger!!! Nice job again!
Author's Response: Thanks!
Name: luvtheweasleys reviewed
The Space Between on Apr 25, 2008 12:27 pm
Oh, they need another baby!!!!
Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing!
Name: luvtheweasleys reviewed
This Heartbreak World on Apr 25, 2008 12:24 pm
Screw her family...let her find happiness with her husband, lol. Another great chapter.
Author's Response: I would generally agree. Haha, thanks!
Name: luvtheweasleys reviewed
On Parade on Apr 25, 2008 12:19 pm
Oh, such torment. A well written chapter.
Author's Response: Thanks!
Name: luvtheweasleys reviewed
The Real Goodbye on Apr 25, 2008 12:06 pm
Ahh, I hate it that he can't find true happiness and doubts himself in his new roles. Poor Draco.
Author's Response: It is very hard for Draco. Thanks for the review!
Name: luvtheweasleys reviewed
Written in the Stars on Apr 25, 2008 11:55 am
Wow, great chapter, full of emotion, I loved it.
Author's Response: Thanks so much.
Name: luvtheweasleys reviewed
Whisper It on Apr 25, 2008 11:52 am
Almost made me cry with that one!
Author's Response: Oh! I'm always glad when my writing touches someone's emotions. Thanks.