OMG! What a wonderful story! I love the enotiom you wrote into this chapter. The emotions were so raw!
Lovely! I can't wait to read the next chapter.
I really really like this. It moved a little fast though. But it's still amazing!
Good! I liked it. Can't wait to read more. Good luck! :)
oh this is def. good!
i loves it!
can't wait for more!
Pretty darn good =) Keep up the good work!
totally awesome
I love your imagery and how you balance emotions and internal thoughts with actual dialogue and physical actions
update soon...very nicely written till now!