Name: sweetpop reviewed In Repair on Dec 12, 2007 10:49 pm
eeeeeeee!!! I sense drama...
Name: Flipinpenname reviewed In Repair on Dec 12, 2007 09:15 am
haha. great job! update soon!
Name: Amanda Mancini reviewed In Repair on Dec 12, 2007 05:53 am
This fic is interesting and I look forward to it moving towards D/G, but there are some parts I don't understand. For example, why is everyone so anti-muggle? I understand Malfoy, but Harr and Hermione joining the gang saying you can never trust muggles seems out of character.

Ted Tonks was a muggle and accepted Andromeda. Seamus' father was a muggle and left his wife after she told him. The reactions vary, but the fact is that most people tell their serious romantic partners about it. (unless you're implying Ginny told Devon on a whim? That they weren't in a serious, trusting relationship?)

Also, why does Devon repeatedly use the term "Jerk-Off". Why that insult? It makes him sound like a 14 year old, not a man :)
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