Name: CCC reviewed Critical Move on Feb 07, 2008 03:21 pm
I'm calling you foul names at the moment for this evil cliffhanger. You had better be typing.

Author's Response: That was the end :c
Name: Flipinpenname reviewed Critical Move on Feb 07, 2008 08:59 am
great job! dude, this is intense. update mad soon!
Name: oxymoron8 reviewed Critical Move on Feb 07, 2008 07:49 am
OK...So Blaise wasn't really crazy just dumb to follow a crazy man. Great chapter...but who was shot. Happy writing and I cannot wait to see what happens next.
Name: Jordanza reviewed Critical Move on Feb 07, 2008 12:32 am
no. this isn't happening!!! please more!!
Name: black_adder24 reviewed Critical Move on Feb 06, 2008 05:31 pm
*blinks* And???
Oooh! I need to find out what happened! Update!
Name: stargirl27 reviewed Critical Move on Feb 06, 2008 10:33 am
noooo...who got shot?!

update soon! please
Name: sweetpop reviewed Critical Move on Feb 05, 2008 11:13 pm
o_o!!!! *Worries*
Name: Bronte44 reviewed Critical Move on Feb 05, 2008 07:40 pm
OH NO! Cliffies are an evil, evil thing. Very well written though.
Name: sweetevil reviewed Critical Move on Feb 05, 2008 06:39 pm
thats just cruel.

i loved it. you had me hanging on to every word. update soon!
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