Name: CourtneyFaith reviewed
December 17: Part Two on Dec 19, 2007 05:32 am
~The story has potential, but I think that you should compose your thoughts and write a normal sized chapter rather than a bunch of little ones. It just makes the story flow better and creates a better fan base if the reader doesn't have to read 1 paragraph at a time.~
Name: Mollie reviewed
December 17: Part Two on Dec 18, 2007 09:50 pm
OMG, that rings sounds perfect. I want it!!! Draco, forget Ginny, come to me!!! lol, jk, but seriously, gorgeous ring. And good work!!!
Name: Jordanza reviewed
December 17: Part Two on Dec 18, 2007 09:24 pm
yay! another chapter! can't wait for a bit more