Name: Cassiopeia reviewed
Setting the Scene on Jan 22, 2008 08:30 am
very clever. i look forward to reading more.
Name: fairydust123 reviewed
Setting the Scene on Jan 22, 2008 07:27 am
Haha, I love Ocean's Eleven! Can't wait to see how you do it Harry Potter style! Looks good so far, though.
Hope you update soon =)
Name: Mell8 reviewed
Setting the Scene on Jan 22, 2008 07:21 am
Hmmm, this is a very good recreation of Oceans 11. The only important plot point you left out of this chapter is the ring. When Ocean gets out of prison he is holding a wedding ring and is bouncing it in his hand on purpose. I'm sure you know why the ring's important so maybe you should consider adding it in?
Anyway, great chapter. Update soon!
Author's Response: I've decided not to have Draco and Ginny divorced or married at all. I don't know, I may change it later. If I do, I'll add in the ring part before he meets up with her or something.
Name: LovesFantasy reviewed
Setting the Scene on Jan 22, 2008 07:12 am
I enjoy well put together movie fics! What a great group of characters for this particular movie too!
If I may make one suggestion though... I would flesh it out a bit. It's kind of hard to follow if you've not seen the movie. Since the dialog flits back and forth between characters (beautifully but) very quickly, you can easily lose track of who’s saying what. Also, if you’ve not seen the movie, it’s hard to tell what roles your HP characters are playing. You might want to add some details that may not be in the movie.
It takes more time and can be difficult, but it's well worth it in the end when you have a story that reflects a great movie but can stand alone as well. :o) Just a friendly thought.
Name: Flipinpenname reviewed
Setting the Scene on Jan 22, 2008 06:54 am
well this should be interesting. at least i know he gets ginny in the end right. haha. update soon!
Name: dgloves70 reviewed
Setting the Scene on Jan 22, 2008 05:21 am
I loved it. I am also laughing at all the character you have associated with the movie. The CHo Chang reference was hysterical. I cant wait to see the next chapter. I love how you have Harry Potter's vault and using the Ginny Weasley love interst to your advantage. Brilliant. can't wait to read the next chapter.