Name: luvtheweasleys reviewed
Trust Me on Apr 13, 2008 03:22 pm
interesting...but work on the flow betweeen scenes a bit more. You are really going to have to give your characters some depth and emotion. I see the direction you are moving with this,and it is a good one...just remember to "breathe" along the way.
Name: luvtheweasleys reviewed
The Black Eyes of the Night on Apr 13, 2008 03:18 pm
hmm, kinda moved pretty fast, with no back story...the characters were kinda flat as well....but I have hope for it yet...let's proceed, lol
Name: abby reviewed
Trust Me on Mar 31, 2008 05:02 pm
Come on--update!!! :)
Name: hotpinker23 reviewed
Trust Me on Feb 24, 2008 12:03 pm
this is good so far, but it's moving kinda slow. but worth continuing
Name: abby reviewed
Trust Me on Feb 16, 2008 12:07 pm
Uh Oh... :)I wonder how they're going to explain this one? muahahaha..sorry anyway ...I LOVE IT!!! please update!
Name: stargirl27 reviewed
The Black Eyes of the Night on Feb 09, 2008 06:56 pm
interesting story. keep it up. can't wait to read more!
Name: elay_daily reviewed
Trust Me on Feb 09, 2008 04:47 am
I love this story! Please update soon!
Name: Kalira reviewed
Trust Me on Feb 08, 2008 07:31 pm
Interesting. It's good that you explained her wandless magic early on, I was wondering about it at the end of last chapter. Good chapter!! I'll definitely be waiting to read the next one!
Name: Kalira reviewed
The Black Eyes of the Night on Feb 08, 2008 07:26 pm
I have to say that my favorite part was when you said felon-tastic father. It definitely hooked me into the chapter out of pure hilarity. The rest of the chapter was good as well. Though if they were paralyzed, wouldn't they not be able to talk? Hmmm, I guess it could have been neck down or w/e. Were you just making a variation on Petrificus Totalus?