Name: wcoast_girl reviewed
A Beginning on Mar 17, 2008 01:37 pm
Brilliant! Youv'e set up a completely plausible, believale scenario for the two of them to come together. I totally love how Ginny is characterized because I think she would be very feisty and see this as a way to get back at Draco. I also think she realizes that her beauty/attractiveness is something that she can use to draw him in. Absolutely love it!
Name: Material Girl reviewed
A Beginning on Mar 16, 2008 05:56 pm
This story is great! I like how it's not the standard Malfoy trying to seduce Ginny story, but the other way around. Please have another chapter up, like, now! :)
Name: abby reviewed
A Beginning on Mar 16, 2008 04:16 pm
mua-ha-ha-ha-ha-ha...hem-hem, sorry...I loved it! please update!!!
Name: Flipinpenname reviewed
A Beginning on Mar 16, 2008 02:35 pm
haha. this is interesting. usually its draco using her to get back or win a bet, but now its ginny, i'm intrigued. (yes i probably just butchered the spelling, but that's okay!) can't wait for more! update soon!
Name: shaded reviewed
A Beginning on Mar 16, 2008 01:24 pm
What a great chapter. To be honest, I didn't much enjoy the first chapter as much as this one. Your descriptions here are captivating; " No, she thought. This wasn’t right. It was too soon, it was too revealing, it was – A beginning. " This was when I was truly hooked into this story.
I like how Ginny's frustration builds up as the days go past, annoyance at how her plan is stalling. But the next 'moment' that Ginny has with Draco is initiated by him. "-- she sat in electrified silence" these moments are very well written and draw the reader into feeling what Ginny's feeling.
I like the way Draco communicated to Ginny about meeting outside the Three Broomsticks; the subtlety of his character is something which I am very glad you've kept in this story; he's clearly not going to suddenly announce to the whole of Hogwarts that he wants to see more of Ginny. I'm looking forward to seeing more of this Draco in future chapters.
Name: citrusabby reviewed
A Beginning on Mar 15, 2008 11:45 pm
Nice one here. Update soon!
Name: Rashonda reviewed
A Beginning on Mar 15, 2008 11:23 pm
Ooh. I like this story. This is a very dangerous game she's playing at. Would he bve perceptive enough to catch on though?
Name: Julia Evans reviewed
A Beginning on Mar 15, 2008 08:21 pm
Soo good! Uh oh, looks like Ginny doesn't hate him as much anymore!
Name: gemini reviewed
A Beginning on Mar 15, 2008 07:25 pm
this is actually a vey interesting story and i hope further chapters are just as much. anywya, i hope that you upadate soon, i want to se what happens next! silverdragon20021@yahoo.com let me know please!!
Name: dristi reviewed
A Beginning on Mar 15, 2008 04:56 pm
devious, but goooood! pls update soon
Name: Hopeless reviewed
A Beginning on Mar 15, 2008 03:50 pm
ah I love the beginning to this story! I can't wait to see more of it!
Name: elay_daily reviewed
A Beginning on Mar 15, 2008 02:37 pm
I really like this story. It seems really interesting. Update soon.
Name: Ananyamous reviewed
A Beginning on Mar 15, 2008 01:33 pm
Nice message. Great chapter. Definitely flowing well.