hi there! you have been doing an excellent job so far.Can't wait for more. :)
ok, i know that you must have started work on the next i.e sixth chapter but i had this little idea in my head, you could call it a suggestion...
I was thinking of the next encounter of Ginny and Draco(the next day after the suicide attempt) to be fun.i suppose that after the suicide attempt,ginny would want to distract herself with other things and who better than her adorable nieces to do the job.
I can imagine Ginny in a tank top and shorts and a high ponytail,looking every bit like a 16 year old having a blast with Victoire,Dominique & Ted in the children's play area on the ship and somehow Draco joins the fray.
You think you could incorporate this situation in your next chapter? i mean ocourse its your story and you know the best but i couldn't resist sharing this with you :)

Author's Response: Thanks for the suggestion! I like it! I'll def. keep in mind as I write the next chapter!

Maybe Ginny hadn’t actually jumped, but that didn’t mean she wasn’t drowning.
I like this last line.
Although Ginny's thoughts on feeling trapped and suffocated are well expressed, the lines where she looks across the deck and sees she's alone and then feels trapped and suicidal seems a very sharp jump in tone and feeling. It seems very implausible. If that part was expanded a bit, then Ginny's aborted suicide attempt would not seem so out of place.

I quite enjoyed Draco calmly talking to Ginny about how he'd be forced to risk certain death to save her. That was one of my favourite parts of Titanic; I can't help but grin when I think about it. I mean, could you imagine what Harry's reaction to seeing Ginny in that situation would have been? Probably run to save the day and then cause her to fall overboard. Anyhoo, it shall be fun to see the dinner scene. Looking forward to it. :)

Author's Response: Thanks for the feedback! It was difficult to get from "hey, I'm sad and alone" to "I think I should kill myself now". I think I may try to brush up the scene, actually.

oh boy. well i can honestly say i didn't see that coming. very interesting plot point. where is draco going to get clothes?! hopefully he will be the same ol' malfoy, and saunter in as if he were wearing the finest dress robes while he's wearing his poor muggle things. i really hope you don't have him borrowing dress robes from pansy O.O anyway, great job, can't wait until the next chapter!