Name: luvtheweasleys reviewed
The Game on Jun 17, 2010 05:31 pm
Enjoying this story...I just hate a gay Blaise....lol.
Name: lavenderab reviewed
The Game on Sep 24, 2008 03:57 am
Ok I remember this chapter I like this story
Name: bee245 reviewed
The Game on Apr 17, 2008 11:40 am
short!
but good :)
keep going please! :)
bee245
Author's Response: Thanks! I hope you like the next chapter. Sorry it took so long.
Name: lavenderab reviewed
The Game on Apr 09, 2008 11:22 am
wow what he is planning to make there lives bad i hope not
Author's Response: Blaise, never. Well, maybe. ;) Thanks for the review. Chapter Three up soon.
Name: Jordanza reviewed
The Game on Apr 07, 2008 12:06 am
hey this is good. can't wait for more!
Author's Response: Thanks. I'm always waiting for good reviews, so keep 'em coming.
Name: shaded reviewed
The Game on Apr 06, 2008 12:58 am
Yay, a fast update! :) The Blaise/Ginny dynamic is interesting. It's been set up very well. I look forward to seeing what Draco and Blaise's plans are and how Ginny will react to them both.
Author's Response: I'm trying something new, since most authors write Blaise and Draco as friends instead. I love Blaise, but I wanted to give readers a new perspective. I'm glad you enjoy it. Thanks!
Name: Grneyedminx reviewed
The Game on Apr 06, 2008 12:11 am
Hmmm, I wonder what will happen next? Can't wait!
Author's Response: Chapter Three is coming soon, I promise. Thanks for reviewing!
Name: Kalira reviewed
The Game on Apr 05, 2008 07:34 pm
hahaha. Draco plotting. Always a good sign.
Author's Response: I know, isn't he excellent? I'm in love. Thanks for the review!
Name: slitherhither reviewed
The Game on Apr 05, 2008 05:14 pm
Off to a great start! (just read chaps 1&2 together) You have a very engaging writing style.
Author's Response: I'm glad you like it. Please keep the reviews coming.
Name: linz7886 reviewed
The Game on Apr 05, 2008 03:13 pm
I like where this is going. Hope that you keep the updates coming, but I understand that creativity must not be rushed :)
Author's Response: I'm glad you get it, but for some reason, the juices are seriously flowing on this one. I hope you enjoy the next chapter, coming soon.
Name: suki_sam reviewed
The Game on Apr 05, 2008 03:07 pm
Your writing is amazing, and I am absolutely in love with the fic. Updates would be loved. =D
Author's Response: You're great, and thanks. I'm glad you like it, and I'm going to try not to be one of those authors who gets readers interested and then drops off of the face of the earth. Thanks for the review.
Name: aizak reviewed
The Game on Apr 05, 2008 02:41 pm
Great!!! I love how you updated soooo quickly!!!!! Im loving this story but I think the chapters should be a little bit longer!!!!
Author's Response: The next chapter is a lot longer, I promise. Also, I'll try to update as quickly as possible, but I am a full-time student and I work a lot so I can't promise they'll always be this fast. Thanks for the review. Hope you like Chapter Three.
Name: Almicene reviewed
The Game on Apr 05, 2008 02:34 pm
Very very promising and intriguing. I do hope you won't make us wait too long for the next few chapters. I've haven't been this excited about a new fic in a while! I'm glad you didn't go into significant detail about Ginny's looks - I admit I am curious, but when the author writes something like:
With her rich copper-red hair, form fitting clothes, long legs, Ginny had a body to die for, etc. It goes so much better and more natural when it comes out from other character's perspectives. Probably one of the best pieces of advice I've heard was a paraphrase from the Irish writer James Joyce - that you write things from the perspective of the character. That is things that are 'new,' that catch their attention should be written down, while everyday things should be ignored - the character is not going to notice the same old tables, hallways they pass through every day. When I see great writing it tends to follow this pattern - poor writing on the other hand writes down all the things the author 'sees' but the character would never notice.
Anyways, great work so far.
Author's Response: I hope it doesn't change your opinion of the story, but there is a tiny bit of explanation of Ginny's looks in Chapter Three. It is necessary, and doesn't go into extreme detail though. Anyway, I'm glad you liked the first two chapters.