Name: luvtheweasleys reviewed
Daylight on Nov 16, 2008 05:23 am
Kind of a fast paced chapter, so that kind of threw me, but I liked the scenes.
Name: lavenderab reviewed
Daylight on Sep 27, 2008 05:08 am
Another very great chapter
Name: Flipinpenname reviewed
Daylight on Jul 27, 2008 10:54 am
great chapter update soon!
Name: smarties101 reviewed
Daylight on Jul 24, 2008 12:17 am
Hate to be annoying but i cant help myself. In this chapter Arthur inrtoduces himself to Draco at Ginnys hospital bed and Draco says “Nice to meet you, sir" . But later you say they have already met.
Name: Dracogirl reviewed
Daylight on Jul 23, 2008 04:03 pm
This was so cute.
Name: hpfreaklk reviewed
Daylight on Jul 23, 2008 02:57 pm
hahaha.
Draco is so cute. He's such a softy.
=]
Name: bee245 reviewed
Daylight on Jul 23, 2008 02:11 pm
erm.....a few too many 'i love you's'....it loses it's power if you say it too much. and i'm sorry but i kind of laughed out loud when you said that lucius malfoy was sperm doner......
its a good chapter though. you just might want to revise it to get rid of some of the continuity flaws (i thought ginny already told him she loved him?) and just simple stuff like that.
good chapter though :)
bee245
Name: Grneyedminx reviewed
Daylight on Jul 23, 2008 02:01 pm
Great chapter!