Name: Flipinpenname reviewed
*** fifth wish *** on Jul 05, 2008 05:42 pm
hahaha. it wasn't oliver it was him. hahaha. great chapter!!!
Name: phizzy reviewed
*** fifth wish *** on Jul 05, 2008 05:41 pm
That is so heart-breaking for Draco. I can't believe there are only two parts left! AHH please update soon! I can't take the delay!
Name: doc_3 reviewed
*** fifth wish *** on Jul 05, 2008 05:13 pm
Poor Draco! This chapter broke my heart for him a little bit :)
Name: Embellished reviewed
*** fourth wish *** on Jun 30, 2008 04:49 am
I've been out of town, so I have just had the opportunity to read what you've posted of this story so far. It is a lot of fun! I really like the way you are giving us new glimpses of Draco's personality with every wish, while still keeping him from being too soft. I'm very much looking forward to the rest of the story!
Name: Maelyn reviewed
*** fourth wish *** on Jun 29, 2008 07:58 am
I really like this. DYING for an update! ;)
Name: doc_3 reviewed
*** fourth wish *** on Jun 27, 2008 04:46 pm
I fell in love with this story immediately. Your Malfoy is perfect and so are all your other characters. I can't wait to read more!
Doc
Name: dristi reviewed
*** fourth wish *** on Jun 27, 2008 09:39 am
hi, i absolutely love your story!!! amazing plot, funny and witty banter! pls update soon
Name: ExquisiteBeauty reviewed
*** fourth wish *** on Jun 27, 2008 08:35 am
Yay! That was wonderful!
Name: Kizei reviewed
*** fourth wish *** on Jun 27, 2008 07:32 am
Aww, Luna and Blaise is my favorite alongside Ginny and Draco!
Speaking of Ginny and Draco, yay! They're finally having dinner! I love that Draco made her stay, hehehe he likes her!
Good chapter!
Name: Truthiness reviewed
*** fourth wish *** on Jun 27, 2008 06:39 am
Enjoying the story thus far. Dialogue is fun as are the characterizations.
One slight thing in this chapter...a red in the fridge? Maybe Draco was referring to one of those wine cabinetsyou keep in your kitchen. Because reds aren't chilled, unless it's some Wizard wine maybe?
I think that Draco might have a slight issue with Ginny's virginity being needed for his ambitions and his desire for her. Which sounds like it will be an interesting scenario to read about as the story progresses.
Thanks again for another great chapter.
Author's Response: All right, you're the second person to mention wine and now I just feel bad about it. *goes to edit*
Name: Mistress of Potions reviewed
*** fourth wish *** on Jun 27, 2008 06:24 am
I realize this is a bit picky, but red wine in the refrigerator? Eew.
Author's Response: My Uncle is a wine freak and he always drinks his wine cold. I wouldn't know since I prefer other alcohol, but I always assumed everyone drink it cold. I should've researched, I guess =\
Name: Flipinpenname reviewed
*** fourth wish *** on Jun 27, 2008 04:36 am
great chapter! i love this story. i can't believe its only been four chapters, i thought it had been forever, and i was excited cuz i love it. great job! brilliance!
Name: jandjsalmon reviewed
*** fourth wish *** on Jun 27, 2008 04:21 am
LUNA AND BLAISE!!! *coughs* I loved this one a lot. :D
Name: ExquisiteBeauty reviewed
*** third wish *** on Jun 25, 2008 05:47 pm
:)
I love this story! Ginny and Draco are so much in character, and its amazinggggggggggg.
I love you. Please keep writing.
:)
Name: ExquisiteBeauty reviewed
*** second wish *** on Jun 25, 2008 05:31 pm
Wonderful! I love it so far, and Draco is totally, amazingly snarky, but sweet too.
Name: soundspretty reviewed
*** third wish *** on Jun 24, 2008 03:58 am
The last bit about the muffin made me smile :) Can't wait for more!
Name: chiara13 reviewed
*** third wish *** on Jun 23, 2008 05:32 pm
Awesome story and I'm getting really into it. Liking the easy camaradery they seem to be starting to enjoy, the way that they both seem to be helping the other to change, to grow, to become more open and I'm especially loving the humorous tidbits that being said as nice as all of that sounds I'm totally freaked out and sooo sooo afraid of all these joyous little moments because even though it's nothing too obvious or overwhelming the undertones and the plot of the fic itself just keep me on my toes waiting for the other shoe to drop!! Please update soon
Name: Kizei reviewed
*** third wish *** on Jun 23, 2008 10:33 am
This is so cute! Draco, actually caring enough to help Hermione get pregnant. Awesome story!
Even better, Ginny deciding to get Draco a blueberry muffin :D so cute!
Name: Katmillia reviewed
*** third wish *** on Jun 23, 2008 08:53 am
I LOVE this fic, and loved this installment of it. It was just perfect, what Ginny is wishing for, and oh you've captured everything perfectly here. I can't wait for you to continue with this. :)
Name: Flipinpenname reviewed
*** third wish *** on Jun 22, 2008 05:45 pm
aw cute! i absolutely love this story!!!!! like lovelovelovelove!!!!!
Name: thenilaughed reviewed
*** third wish *** on Jun 22, 2008 04:58 pm
Interesting take on artificial insemination, although I don't agree with Ginny's viewpoint. It seemed a bit irrational of her to me to be so upset at a doctor who advised adoption.
Name: GoldenFawkes reviewed
*** third wish *** on Jun 21, 2008 09:41 pm
Wow, good for Draco.
Name: Cheezie_Biscuit reviewed
*** third wish *** on Jun 21, 2008 09:02 pm
His story was so sweet until he ruined it with the end...
Name: deadsnowwhite reviewed
*** third wish *** on Jun 21, 2008 05:03 pm
lol the buleberry muffun thing is a bit ...well just there in the story but i liked the ending line which sorta tied it in a bit and the conversation between draco and ginny about her wish was funny but really "how many accidental Malfoy bastards are there?” lol
Name: TwilightsDawn reviewed
*** third wish *** on Jun 21, 2008 06:55 am
I LOVE the variation on JKR's world that you've created here. Though I can't quite figure out why Draco offered seven wishes in exchange for Ginny's soul, I'm sure the reasoning will come clear in future chapters. Draco's desire to have Ginny wish things for herself fits perfectly with his 'me first' world view, and Ginny's stalling with wishes for other people makes a lot of sense because she doesn't seem like she knows what she wants!
I love how you're building up a relationship and attraction between the two of them so slowly and subtly, especially in the flashback. This is one of my favourite lines:
"She looked good, more refined and delicate, yet somehow she appeared stronger than before. It was a paradox, but then, so was she, and he assumed it was all right. The auburn however looked better than the singed orange she carried back in school, but, oh, it all didn’t seem to matter in the least because she was stealing his muffin!"
The last bit where Draco gets distracted from his contemplations by his original goal (the muffin!) is just perfect.
Another thing I love: your portrayal of Ron and Hermione. Their relationship was my path into the HP fandom and way too many D/G stories either have H/H and/or make Ron into an evil, incompetent oaf. I hope to see more of your lovable Ron in future chapters! Hermione's characterization in this chapter is wonderful. I like how yelling is her response to someone else figuring out an answer, and how she is 'prissy' in describing what happened after the unicorn milk, and her tragic yearning for a child, though I don't understand what she has against adoption.
I can't wait to see how you build D/G's relationship in future chapters, and I hope to see more R/H too! :)