Name: Lynnamae reviewed
Chapter 4 - Settling In on Sep 22, 2008 10:46 am
I you handled the conversation between Ginny and Draco wonderfully. :) Can't wait for your next update :)
Author's Response: Thanks so much for letting me know. I love it when I hear that I got it right.
Name: fairydust123 reviewed
Chapter 1 - Facing the Consequences on Sep 22, 2008 10:41 am
Interesting, and may I admit, fairly disturbing, but I guess that's the idea. Urgh, my dislike for Lucius has increased ten fold, but I totally see him as in-character.
Hope to see more, and I impatiently await Draco's confession that he was the man in the pub... because he was, right? :)
Author's Response: Yes, we are not done with dear Lucius yet. He has more evilness to come. Yes, disturbing was the idea... and for all the flak I'm getting, I am so amused that this story is getting close to ten times the readers than my sweet little "Faerie Tales" story did. It cracks me up... folks say they hate it, but they are reading like crazy. Go figure. :) :) :) rn
Thanks so very much for the review. rn
Name: vilgsacolin reviewed
Chapter 4 - Settling In on Sep 22, 2008 09:06 am
Draco is the Muggle in the pub, right? ;) Nice chapter. I like the ideals you brought up here. I am waiting for the next chapter.
Author's Response: Heh, heh, heh (laughs evilly) no comment about the Muggle. :) But, you have to admit, he's really lovable. Thanks very much for the feedback.
-G
Name: shalita reviewed
Chapter 4 - Settling In on Sep 22, 2008 06:42 am
This story is quickly becoming a staple to D/G - I can just FEEL it! :) There is soooooo much that I feel you could include in the plot, seems like the story could become quite epic. :) I don't mind the Ginny/Lucius stuff, adds another unique dimension to the story. Happy writing!
Author's Response: Wow! Thanks for the praise and yes, there's hopefully a lot of dimension to the story as it unfolds. Thank you for reviewing.
Name: LovesFantasy reviewed
Chapter 4 - Settling In on Sep 22, 2008 06:04 am
I'm glad you're not transitioning into a love-relationship with Ginny and Draco too fast. As much as I'm dying to see them together and planning a way out of this predicament, dragging it out a little increases the enjoyment! Like eating M&M's one piece at a time...
I’m interested in the few galleons that were missing in the ledger… I wonder what that foreshadows…
Can’t wait for the next installment!!
Author's Response: Good catch! I'm frequently amazed that the little things I drop in are actually *noticed*. You folks are sharp. I agree with you about the "m&m" analogy. It's quite the writing challenge to do that yet still keep the story interesting. I'm sure y'all will let me know if I stray.
Thanks so much for the feedback!
Name: Licentia poetica reviewed
Chapter 1 - Facing the Consequences on Sep 22, 2008 06:01 am
Though I find the interaction between Lucius and Ginny disturbing (rape, especially spousal rape, is horrifying and disgusting) I'm sure you've just been setting the stage. I assume the unknown gentleman that Ginny gave her virginity to was Draco out on a "get away from Lucius" jaunt. Interesting premise!
Author's Response: It is just setting the stage. This is an AU, where Voldemort is in control, so laws and freedoms are very affected. It definitely increases the intensity of the story. Thank you for reading and sending feedback!
Name: Ananyamous reviewed
Chapter 3 - Newlywed on Sep 21, 2008 05:17 pm
Arg...that's was pretty unpleasant, but I guess it sets the tone for the relationship between Ginny and Lucius. Can't wait for Draco-goodness, though!
Author's Response: Just put it in...so it should be up soon! Thanks!
Name: Flipinpenname reviewed
Chapter 3 - Newlywed on Sep 19, 2008 05:32 pm
well i hate lucious malfoy, but update soon!
Name: silver rose reviewed
Chapter 3 - Newlywed on Sep 19, 2008 04:54 am
omg..I'm strangely entertained b the ginny/lucius interaction...I want more Draco though..haha..I love it
Author's Response: Yes, there is something intriguing about Lucius. He makes for such a strong character. It was surprisingly easy to write, even though I'm a die hard d/g shipper.
Name: BIQxoxBOHICA reviewed
Chapter 1 - Facing the Consequences on Sep 17, 2008 03:21 pm
Very yummy Draco. ^-^
Name: Pipperstorms reviewed
Chapter 3 - Newlywed on Sep 17, 2008 09:40 am
I am looking forward to the next chapter. While I didn't like the content of this one, I understood the "why" behind it, and still thought that it was well written. Nice work :-)
Author's Response: Thanks so much. I'm soooo close to posting the next one, but am having one area that just doesn't seem right yet.
Name: GoldenFawkes reviewed
Chapter 3 - Newlywed on Sep 16, 2008 08:43 pm
Awww... Draco's insulted that she married his daddy!
Author's Response: He is in a bit of a snit, isn't he? He's not done yet.
Name: vilgsacolin reviewed
Chapter 3 - Newlywed on Sep 16, 2008 08:39 pm
Very interesting! I look forward to the next chapter and to Draco. :)
Name: vilgsacolin reviewed
Chapter 2 - Anything but a White Wedding on Sep 16, 2008 07:46 pm
Nooooo! She married the wrong Malfoy! How could you? :( Well I will trust you when you say that it is D/G all the way!
Author's Response: I was saying the same thing as I was writing it! :) I totally felt awful for her as I wrote about her looking around the Burrow. It must get worse before it gets better for her, though.
Name: vilgsacolin reviewed
Chapter 1 - Facing the Consequences on Sep 16, 2008 06:07 pm
Very interesting! Ginny is very brave to be offering herself up. I'm off to read the next chapter!
Name: panda_toots reviewed
Chapter 3 - Newlywed on Sep 16, 2008 05:44 pm
wow this is such a good story! its different...! poor ginny:(
Name: ninemuses0 reviewed
Chapter 3 - Newlywed on Sep 16, 2008 04:46 pm
ah, this is incredible, im so excited to see her relations with draco. please update soon!
Author's Response: coming soon! I'm just having the teensiest bit of writer's block with one small section. Hopefully, it will be up very soon.
Name: Dracogirl reviewed
Chapter 3 - Newlywed on Sep 16, 2008 04:42 pm
I understand why you had to do the scence with Lucius and I think you handled it very well. Yes, I hate to EVER read about Draco or Ginny with anyone except each other, but I think it was well done and it was not gratuitous or too sicking. I really like your story and will be sticking with you till the end, especially Draco is coming soon-thanks for that.
Author's Response: You are so sweet! Thanks!
Name: darkloveangel reviewed
Chapter 3 - Newlywed on Sep 16, 2008 03:46 pm
i really like the idea you've used here with Lucius and Ginny. and i am loving this story so much!
Author's Response: Thanks! after the previous review I was sooo bummed out! I am working to get chap 4 up quickly so I can keep you all interested!rnrnMuch love to ALL of you reviewers (both positive and negative) rn rn-G
Name: Silent_Reader reviewed
Chapter 3 - Newlywed on Sep 16, 2008 03:36 pm
Ummmmmmmm... I wishd I had followed your notes and skipped the part about Lucius. I was terribly disappointed. I don't think I could continue reading it. I was hoping they didn't have sex. Silly me, what was I thinking. The story is absolutely wonderful except for this tiny detail of them having sex. And will continue to have sex as long as their married. I can't see how Draco could want her after his Father had her. YUCK! sorry that was uncall for. It hurts to see Ginny with him. WHY!!! I took this hard, sorry.:( Good luck with the story.
Author's Response: Sorry that you won't be finishing this. Maybe in the future after a few more chapters you'll be able to come back. There are many, many stories that mention both Draco and Ginny having other partners, which I also dislike, as the characters tend to be tacky or shallow. In that sense, I agree with you, but I assure all of you that this story won't be that way. This story will definitely evolve as the D/G relationship grows so that their relationship makes sense. Again, sorry that you are disappointed but I thank you for the feedback.
Name: shaded reviewed
Chapter 2 - Anything but a White Wedding on Sep 16, 2008 02:16 pm
Yay, I guessed correctly. Although poor Ginny, for having to go through with such a marriage to save her family. :(
Author's Response: One would hope that they feel guilty...
Name: bee245 reviewed
Chapter 3 - Newlywed on Sep 16, 2008 01:19 pm
GO GINNY!
i think i like draco in this story.
not that i don't like him in others, just that he seems real in this one.
....not that he's not real in others....
do you understand what i mean?
lol probably not....
that's ok :)
update soon please!
bee245
Author's Response: In later chapters, he'll be very real. I sorta based his reactions on my husband in several key areas.
Name: blackmagicwoman reviewed
Chapter 3 - Newlywed on Sep 16, 2008 12:24 pm
That was very well written. I know its not nice to read, Ginny getting hit and foursed that way, but you handled it very well. I actually quite like the Ginny/Lucius dynamic it gives Ginny/Draco relationship more significance :)
Author's Response: I am so glad to hear the response to this chapter. It was quite intense to write, and I was worried that it would turn off many readers. Your feedback is very, very appreciated.
Name: Iliana_r reviewed
Chapter 3 - Newlywed on Sep 16, 2008 12:18 pm
Even if I REALLY don't like the idea of her with Lucius, I think it was a necessary evil we had to passs trough in order to picture their relationship. As it goes it is very wel orchestrated so I eagerly wait for the next chapter. It's very good to read.
Author's Response: Thanks for letting me know that I got the desired effect. I really appreciate the response. Best. -G
Name: Lynnamae reviewed
Chapter 3 - Newlywed on Sep 16, 2008 12:13 pm
WOW. This chapter was great as usual. I can't wait for Draco :)
Author's Response: I love the "as usual", since we're only 3 chapters along. It makes me up my standards before I post, which is part of the reason for the delay. I really hope to wow everyone with this fic all the way through. Thanks so much for your review.