Name: doc_3 reviewed
Chapter 3 - Newlywed on Sep 16, 2008 11:28 am
Although this is certainly hard to read in that Lucius is so distasteful, you've done an excellent job with this. I look forward to more!
Author's Response: I had a hard time making Lucius so very mean, as I really like him usually. But then again, it's fun to make him really nasty. Thank you for the feedback!
Name: ChicOnaBroom reviewed
Chapter 3 - Newlywed on Sep 16, 2008 10:27 am
You’re right; I think this was definitely necessary to the story. It would just be unbelievable to not include Lucius being an absolute disgusting jerk…that’s just who he is after all. But, ughhhh! I feel so bad for Ginny. She’s so strong though. I just love how you portray her. Oh, when Draco walked in!! My heart started beating so fast reading that. I could just imagine that ever since the incident in which he and Ginny made love (even though you haven’t actually confirmed this…but I think we know…) he’s been thinking about it over and over.. and to walk in and see her as HIS FATHER’S WIFE! Oh my God, just…crazy! I love this story. I cannot wait until the next chapter. I will try and wait patiently, but just know that everyday when I get online I’ll be hoping to see that lovely email telling me you’ve updated. Until, next time…..
-Tara
Author's Response: Cool that you said "your heart was beating fast". I was really working on intensity, and your feedback tells me that it came through. Thank you! for taking the time to write the review.
Name: caps reviewed
Chapter 3 - Newlywed on Sep 16, 2008 09:29 am
This story is very interesting. Although not all the facts apply I am getting a slight Oedipus Rex vibe from it however.- Is there any truth to my instinct?
Cheers!
Author's Response: Didn't think of it that way while writing, but.... well yes. :)
Name: BIQxoxBOHICA reviewed
Chapter 3 - Newlywed on Sep 16, 2008 09:07 am
Yay Draco!
Author's Response: Yummy Draco! :)
Name: Faerybox reviewed
Chapter 3 - Newlywed on Sep 16, 2008 05:06 am
Very interesting how its all turning out. I wonder if Narcissa was supressed the same way Ginny has been. Cant wait to see some more Draco, please update soon :D
Author's Response: Good question, and it will be addressed. Draco's coming up next.
Name: 0630938 reviewed
Chapter 3 - Newlywed on Sep 16, 2008 04:06 am
Sick.
Author's Response: :)
Name: LovesFantasy reviewed
Chapter 3 - Newlywed on Sep 16, 2008 03:47 am
I understand why you went here (meaning the scene with Lucius). I can see how this could potentially enhance the overall story. Of course, I’m guessing about the outcome… At any rate, I think you did this as tastefully as you could - it being Lucius and all.
I thought that her clothing being picked out for her was a very good, slightly subtle kind of way to show just how little freedom she has now. Also, Draco’s appearance at dinner was an interesting introduction… betrayal, huh?? Wonder why that might be… lol!! I have a guess!!
Anyway, long story slightly shorter – I’m really, really enjoying this so far! Your story is truly delightful.
Author's Response: Thanks. There is a little bit of predictableness (is that a word?) coming up, but I tried to give it some depth. Thanks so much for the feedback.
Name: Ananyamous reviewed
Chapter 2 - Anything but a White Wedding on Sep 13, 2008 06:41 am
Ahhh! I didn't expect her to marry Lucius!
Author's Response: I'm glad that this surprised people. Thanks for sending the feedback! :)
Name: Hajiyeh reviewed
Chapter 2 - Anything but a White Wedding on Sep 13, 2008 06:38 am
This is so new :D
I've been reading HP fics for years and never came across something like this. Good luck & I hope you update soon ^_^
Author's Response: I'll probably post about one per week. While much is already written, it needs soak time to iron out the rough patches. Thank you for letting me know that it's unique. That was definitely my goal. :)
Name: babyangel reviewed
Chapter 2 - Anything but a White Wedding on Sep 12, 2008 01:16 am
oh God, i knew it. Lucius!!! poor Ginny . =( but i love the story. well, whoever that guy was, at least he made Ginny happy. Good job!
Name: 0630938 reviewed
Chapter 2 - Anything but a White Wedding on Sep 11, 2008 06:57 am
WTF! Ohh my god ohhh my god! You are brilliant, but sooo evil.
This better stay good!
Author's Response: I think this was my favorite review thus far. :) rnI just wrote a twelve page chapter that I guarantee you will love, but that comes up much later in the story.
Name: princessswan reviewed
Chapter 2 - Anything but a White Wedding on Sep 10, 2008 01:34 pm
WHATTTTTT?? She marries LUCIUS?? o___oll I was totally expecting it to be Draco or something. But anyway, I am dying to know if that muggle was Draco.. I hope it was !! Anyway, love the story.. please update again soon! :)
Name: Pipperstorms reviewed
Chapter 2 - Anything but a White Wedding on Sep 10, 2008 10:20 am
ick. I don't like that man. And even though you aren't going to answer, I am going o assume that it was Draco. It makes me feel better, even if it's only pretend.
Name: celeste1104 reviewed
Chapter 2 - Anything but a White Wedding on Sep 10, 2008 07:03 am
I thought she was going to be married to Draco, not Lucius! Oh man... this doesnt bode well...
Author's Response: No, it doesn't. Hope you stick with it because it will be well worth the wait.
Name: peppermint reviewed
Chapter 2 - Anything but a White Wedding on Sep 10, 2008 01:48 am
O' shoot, that was goignt o be first question! Ok, but do we get to see or any Draco/Ginny interaction?
well the Lucius ang Ginny pairing was certainly a twist I wasn't expecting! Your story is pretty interesting and well-written!
Please Update a.s.a.p
Name: sweetpop reviewed
Chapter 2 - Anything but a White Wedding on Sep 09, 2008 11:56 pm
O_o!!! I wasn't expecting that!! A definite twist that was pretty shocking but a fresh idea :)
Name: adorame06 reviewed
Chapter 2 - Anything but a White Wedding on Sep 09, 2008 05:21 pm
Oh my I was not expecting that! Oh I can't wait for the next chapter!!
Name: ryonaidane reviewed
Chapter 2 - Anything but a White Wedding on Sep 09, 2008 04:00 pm
more more more. please! i do hope it was Draco in that Muggle Pub!
Name: Grneyedminx reviewed
Chapter 2 - Anything but a White Wedding on Sep 09, 2008 03:47 pm
Interesting idea. Looking forward to where you're going with this!
Name: Dracogirl reviewed
Chapter 1 - Facing the Consequences on Sep 09, 2008 03:38 pm
OMG!!!! This is so good. The whole being married to Lucius thing-too ewww for words. He (Ginny's muggle lover) knows who she is, so does she eventually find out who he is too? The story is intense and well written. I must admit I'm a little (alot) afraid for Ginny when Lucius finds out she's not a virgin anymore. This is Draco and Ginny in the end, right?
Author's Response: Thank you. :) BTW - it is very, very D/G. Be patient. It's coming.
Name: dobbysrevenge reviewed
Chapter 2 - Anything but a White Wedding on Sep 09, 2008 03:05 pm
oh. my. god. This is great. I am so shocked. Finally a marriage contract story with the makings of a good plot. I can't wait to read more!
Author's Response: Hi!
rnThanks for the review... sorry I was slow to respond. I do hope I don't disappoint with the plot. It does keep moving. I try to write what I'd like to read... Thanks so much for the feedback!!!
-G
Name: dobbysrevenge reviewed
Chapter 2 - Anything but a White Wedding on Sep 09, 2008 03:04 pm
oh. my. god. This is great. I am so shocked. Finally a marriage contract story with the makings of a good plot. I can't wait to read more!
Author's Response: Thank you! The feedback is so very important so I know that I've hit my mark. I think you'll like what's coming.
Name: bee245 reviewed
Chapter 2 - Anything but a White Wedding on Sep 09, 2008 02:56 pm
lol yeah i was thinking about the whole muggle thing, what with the whole "i wonder how he knew my name was ginny" :P
and i actually really really like that she didn't get married to draco. it's a nice and refreshing twist :D
please update soon!
bee245
Author's Response: You can thank my beta for that addition/clarification. Thank goodness for betas... :)
Name: malvia reviewed
Chapter 2 - Anything but a White Wedding on Sep 09, 2008 02:37 pm
Maybe I'm just thinking too much but did they, meaning the 'muggle' and Ginny actually introduce themselves to each other? I know it could have happened somewhere between the lines, but the idea of the 'muggle' knowing who she was beforehand is kinda intriguing. I found it distrubing that she became Mrs. Lucius Malfoy.... *cringe*
Author's Response: His identity is a mystery. It will be explained later but, yes, he knows who she is.
Name: Aireanhuefar reviewed
Chapter 2 - Anything but a White Wedding on Sep 09, 2008 01:33 pm
wow... since this is a D/G site, i know it will eventually end up that way... but this is a whole new angle.... nice!! thanks!
Author's Response: I am a dedicated D/G shipper, so do not fear.