Deliciously evil Dream team. I like it, I came across the fic by chance and I truly hope you continue!
I didn't mean my review to just sound like I don't like this fic. I was trying to say that I think you started too harshly, especially since canon has the "trio" as the good guys, so it's what the audience is initially expecting. To just suddenly turn them evil without easing the audience into it is, to me, unrealistic.
I'm trying to give you feedback here.
Author's Response: Thank you.
There's just a bit too much hating of the trio here. Fred calling Hermione a mudblood? Not realistic. You focused so much on the hate in this chapter, it doesn't really leave me very interested in reading on.
Author's Response: I am sorry that this story is not to your taste.
i like it so far and would like to read more of it...i think it has the potential of getting very interesting :)
Author's Response: Thank you. The next chapter should be in soon!
HAHA I love it! I'm not sure why I'm enjoying all the hate for the Dream Team, but I definitely am! You should definitely continue! I want to see how Draco figures in and I can't wait to see who goes to the *Dark Side*
Author's Response: You'll be surprised. Stay tuned, and thank you.
I LOVE IT!!! Please update! More trio bashing! I love that... :)
Author's Response: The next update is coming soon. And I love to Trio bash! Thanks.
Can't wait for the next chapter. TO me it didn't seem like they were out of character just that the perception shifted. I mean now the author isn't looking at the trio with wide eyes and admiration. THere are more povs to how they can be perceived and I hate their self righteousness. Can't wait for the next chapter. Hope it;s longer and I also hope I get to see Draco.
Author's Response: Thank you. I needed to hear that. Sorry, but Draco won't come up yet, because when he comes into play the story really picks up, so I have to get the background in. But prepare yourself.
I think that this story is definatly worth going on with. It's really interestimg and can't wait to read more!
Author's Response: Thank you! The next chapter should be up soon.
Really great start! I love an evil ginny fic. Looking forward to seeing where this goes.
Author's Response: Thanks! YAY EVIL GINNY!
this is defenitly worth you continueing or at lest i think it is. i think it has a good start of a very intersting story and thoguh to me your charters are a bit ooc its not horribley so for your frist fic i think this was real good and alot better then alot of frist fics i have read^_^
Author's Response: Sorry if its too OOC for you. I hope you still enjoy the story though. Thank you for your review.
Yay! Hermione bashing!
Definitely continue it, just with slight longer chapters :D
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I hate Hermione, and it will show. The longer chapters are coming, hang in there for me.
Great start. Can't wait to read more!
Author's Response: Thank you so much! Stay tuned.
continue!! i love fics that hate the dream team! see! i'm smiling! *^_______^* big smile!
Author's Response: You'll really hate them after this. Thanks!
HAHA I really like your story. I can't get the mental image of a perplexed Golden Trio trying to figure out what Ginny and the twins were laughing at! I really hope you continue this story, I'm looking forward to reading more.
Author's Response: I know, its one of my favorite parts. Stay tuned for the second chapter.
Please continue. This story sounds great.
Author's Response: Thanks. The second chapter will be in soon.
I'm loving this story already :)
Author's Response: Thank you! Stay tuned for the next installment.
You've set the bar pretty high and the tone very serious, but on the good side it looks as if you have given yourself a lot of potential material to work with. I would like to continue further and learn why the "dream team" is now so reviled and just what happens to send Ginny over the edge and into the arms of our dearest Draco. On the other side of this, you could also run into potential blocks along the way in terms of wrapping the story up. Overall though I think it has potential and I really enjoy reading a cynical Ginny, it's refreshing.
Author's Response: I'll try to keep what you said in mind. I have the whole story planned out, with just a few final details to iron over. I think you'll like where its going. Thanks!
XD FRED AND GEORGE!!
I like your story. It's definitely new to see almost EVERYONE get annoyed by the do-good trio.
keep writing :D
love.
Author's Response: Fred and George will surprise you in this story. They aren't just joksters! Thanks and stay tuned.
Love it!!! Please write more, Love that no one likes the trio love that the twins married twins, and cant really wait to see where this is going, Please write more, I promise to review, Just dont stop now for a first effort this is really good! (some of the best of the new stuff out )
thanks
Author's Response: Thank you SOOOOOOOOOOO much! I promise to write more now that I know I made a good start. You won't believe what the Trio will do in chapter 2!
it sounds really good. i think u should continue it. its a breath of fresh air to have everyone dislike the dream team :P xxxx update soon pls
Author's Response: Thank you! Be looking for the second chapter soon, a surprise awaits!
I really like the story. You should continue. I am really curious as to what will happen in the rest of the story. I really like the Dream team bashing, Especially hermoine. lolz
Author's Response: I hate Hermione, and it will show in the story. Tell what you think of her after the second chapter.
I think you should continue. Next time, though, I think you should make the chapters longer. It seems interesting, so far.
Author's Response: I do plan on longer chapters, I just wanted to see if anyone thought the story was worth continuing before going all out. Thank you. I think you love the second chapter!