Reviews For June Fifth
Name: oxymoron8 reviewed June Fifth on Nov 14, 2008 07:09 am
Interesting. I really liked it. I'm glad that Gin didn't give into her family. I really hope that they are more. I'm a tad confused as to the end when towards the middle she visited the Manor. Is she just remembering what she saw over time? Happy writing.

Author's Response: Thank you, I appreciate that! Yes, I like how she turned out to be stubborn. Yes, actually, she's flashing back to June fifth when she's actually in kitchen at night.
Name: Volatilis reviewed June Fifth on Nov 14, 2008 06:40 am
Very interesting! Well written, I can't wait to see more of you!

Author's Response: Thank you very much!
Name: Kalira reviewed June Fifth on Nov 14, 2008 06:40 am
Lovely! Though I'm a bit confused as to how Hermione was watching Draco and Ginny at the end of the story.

Author's Response: Oh, it's been mentioned to me, but I kind of meant to make it confusing. When Hermione is speaking about June fifth and visiting DG, that is the flashback. The present is Hermione stumbling around Grimmauld Place and watching DG in the room.
Name: uschic07 reviewed June Fifth on Nov 14, 2008 05:52 am
good chapter, i can't wait to read more!!

Author's Response: Thank you for the review, I really appreciate it!
Name: Hiddenangel reviewed June Fifth on Nov 14, 2008 05:12 am
Please tell me theres going to be more, I absoloutely loved it!!

What do the phrases in french mean?
Name: Hiddenangel reviewed June Fifth on Nov 14, 2008 05:12 am
Please tell me theres going to be more, I absoloutely loved it!!

What do the phrases in french mean?

Author's Response: No, sorry, not to this story! Thank you! The first phrase is Draco telling her, "I'll be in our room," and the second is "It's getting cold."
Name: penfold reviewed June Fifth on Nov 14, 2008 04:05 am
Aww, this is very sweet! It's sad that the Weasleys are freaking out so bad and that they obviously had to go marry (and make a child) in secret, but I'm glad that Hermione can at least see that they're legitimate. Hopefully she can slowly sway some others that way?

Please update soon! :)

Author's Response: Thanks! Yeah, I like to think that Hermione's a person who would do that.
Name: Enigmatic Eel reviewed June Fifth on Nov 14, 2008 01:00 am
Oh, I really like this. I like how you've treated the conflict between Ginny and her family.

I'm curious, though, what did Ron call her over the phone? Or do we find that out later?

Author's Response: Thank you! I always thought that it would be too out of character for her family to just accept Draco, and I worked hard to preserve that hostility. I didn't have any specific things in mind, so you can just imagine what you want. This is a oneshot, so you can interpret it however!
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