Beautiful. I love that theyre snarky but they're not so caught up in it that they can't have a real conversation.
LOVE the closing line, that was awesome.
Author's Response: Thank you very much! I laugh everytime I read that line; it's great that you enjoy it, too! =D
Oooh, I love the banter. I think you've nailed the characterizations here, too. Ginny's fiery and strong and Draco is snarky and sexy. You really need to update this!
Author's Response: I'm really glad you liked that. It's what I was aiming for in this chapter, to set the base for their character interactions, so it's nice to see that it was obvious to the reader's eyes! And I truly am working on the next chapter, it's just taking a lot longer than I expected!
I really like this. Your writing style is lovely and flowing and a pleasure to read. I also like Ginny and Draco all grown up and independant stories so this seem right up my alley! lol!
I think your characterizations are brilliant too, Draco more than Ginny, however, I think we'll get more of a grasp on your Ginny as we get more backstory; why she went to America ect.
:)
Can't wait for an update!
Tasha.
Author's Response: Wow, so many compliments! Thank you so much! I'm glad you are really enjoying the story, even with what little is there! I'll be sure to update soon. =]
Hey! Great chapter! ^_^
I'm glad that the D/G aspect of things came into play here. I enjoyed their interactions very well, and I found myself rooting for Ginny to be able to hold her own against Draco. He sounds like a total prat, which is good, lol. The bigger they are the harder they fall! >:D
I love the thought of Draco giving "icy cackles" lol. I like that he checked out her butt and I like that Ginny called his logo tacky. Hahahaha.
My only nitpick is this: if Ginny has been posing as a Muggle and the company she works for is Muggle as well (and the same is true of Draco's), how is it that their product is potions? Why would a Muggle company market potions to Muggles? Know what I mean? I was kind of confused by that.
But anyway, other than that, just lovely. I'm glad that you're updating frequently! Can't wait for the next chatper! ^_^
Author's Response: Thank you very much! I'm glad you enjoyed the squabbles between the two! And aghhh, you caught my only "nitpick" spot on. I was worried about using that word! But I was debating over other synonyms that would convey the mixtures I was trying to use, and that ended up being the word. Hopefully the future chapters will clear up the context of it a bit more! Thanks for the awesome feedback! =]
Very nice!
I love the bickering, it was exactly how I image Draco and Ginny.
I'm excited for more!
:D
Author's Response: I'm glad you liked the bickering, I worked to try and make it look as effortless as possible, haha. Thanks for another great review! =]