I really enjoyed this! Please continue writing!
I love Backbone!Ginny and SecretlyCaring!Draco. It's so sweet. I get butterflies.
Wow, this sounds like it's going to be great! Hopefully in the next chapter Draco will have a more pronounced role?
Author's Response: Thanks for your review! And we will definitly get to see a lot more of Draco in future chapters ... :)
By the way, I like how you introduced Ginny and Draco's relationship abruptly through her and Harry's talk. The fact that she was very annoyed that Draco, instead of Ron, caught the brunt of the joke, was a good way to show, subtly, that she cares for Draco. (I'm writing this since I saw that another viewer didn't like the 'lack of foreshadowing'.)
Author's Response: Thank you! Everyone has different preferences for how stories are written, and I'm glad you enjoyed mine! :)
Lol, brilliant! I like how you made it seem that the 'soulful eyes' at the start were Draco's, but they turn out to be Harry's. I like the style of writing. I'll be keeping an eye out for updates. :)
Author's Response: Thanks very much! :)
i love it!! anytime pansy and harry get together it's fabulous. i like the start of this. can't wait to see how it pans out!!
Author's Response: Thank you! I think Pansy and Harry together are pretty fabulous as well ... ;)
hi, the first chapter is very intriguing!
keep up and pls update soon...
Author's Response: Thanks! :)
Oh this is cute =]
I like it.
I would enjoy some background information on the DG relationship but I'm sure you've got plans and what not.
Author's Response: Thank you - stay tuned!
Foofaraw!
This looks like it's going to be so much fun! I fresh twist... I can't wait!
Author's Response: Such a fabulous word ... :P Hope you enjoy reading as much as I'm enjoying writing it!
Intriguing! I was caught totally surprised by the twist at the end of this chapter. Looking forward to more!
Author's Response: Thank you! :)
LOL, that was pretty good. You have a penchant for writing snarky and catty D/G banter. *smiles self-indulgently at private joke*
Seriously though, I noticed in this story and the other one that you're really great at writing D/G dialogue. Definitely something that can make or break a story. Great job.
My only criticism is that you could have foreshadowed the nature of Ginny and Draco's relationship a bit because it was sort of abrupt to find out through Harry during their dialogue at the end.
I'm sure you intended for it to be that way, and it was a nice twist, but it was underplayed. I think it would have been nice to include some hinting at the beginning, nothing big, maybe just the flutter of butterflies in her stomach at seeing him, or her noticing how hot he is, etc, so that it doesn't come as such a shock at the end to realize they're together. Cause right now it's just like "Huh?" as opposed to "OMMYGOSH!"
Know what I mean?
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Meh. Ignore me.
Great writing! Add more soon. :D
Author's Response: I apologize for the lack of forshadowing ... I admit, one of my downfalls as a writer is that I tend to forget the fact that my readers don't have the insight I have into my stories - I leave them floundering sometimes! :P That said, there shall be lots about their relationship in future chapters - enjoy! :)
I'm confused. Is Ginny already in a relationship with Draco, or isHary trying to convince her to enter into one? The chapter is nicely written, though. I look forward to reading more!
Author's Response: Ginny is most definitly in a relationship with Draco, and there will be lots more explaining in future chapters ... stay tuned! :)