Name: shaded reviewed Chapter 2 on Jan 26, 2009 01:02 pm
Hehe, that's brilliant! I like how you tread the fine line between making Draco caring and OOC. The way he demanded that Pansy tell him what was wrong was totally Draco and the hesitant asking of Ginny's assistance quite in character. Hehe, the image of Draco stalking after a kitten whilst cursing it under his breath was hilarious.

I hope that there'll be a new chapter up soon! I'm really enjoying this story.

Author's Response: Thank you, I work hard to try and keep Draco in character ... it's one of my pet peeves when he isn't. I'm glad it's working so far! :)
Name: GoldenFawkes reviewed Chapter 2 on Jan 26, 2009 02:51 am
Aww! I want to see the kitty! And the evening in the greenhouse, if you don't mind. =D

Author's Response: Ah yes ... the evening in the greenhouse ... that would be quite fun to write ;) Thanks for your review!
Name: AudsMalfoy reviewed Chapter 2 on Jan 25, 2009 07:12 pm
Aww
It's very cute.
:D

Author's Response: I'm glad you're enjoying it!
Name: Kalira reviewed Chapter 2 on Jan 25, 2009 06:16 pm
I love it! Especially the last paragraph. That part was really funny :)

Author's Response: Thank you! :)
Name: bee245 reviewed Chapter 2 on Jan 25, 2009 05:24 pm
nice background info :D this sounds really interesting!
from the summary I thought you were talking about Draco's eyes, but it was a pleasant surprise to see that you weren't :)

update soon please! :)



bee245

Author's Response: I'm glad you're enjoying it! I probably scared some people when they thought I was describing Draco's eyes as soulful ... not exactly the adjective I would use for that steely gaze :P
Name: erinem reviewed Chapter 2 on Jan 25, 2009 04:35 pm
I love this chapter. Simple, yet very well written. I like the writing style a lot, and the last paragraph is perfect! Can't wait for more.

Author's Response: Thank you very much! I won't lie ... the last paragraph was my favorite to write :P :)
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