Name: Incognito reviewed
Hazelnut Chocolate Brownies on Apr 06, 2010 05:31 pm
You just had to throw a curb ball, didn't you?
*clasps hands together* So, is Serena gonna die? Oh, I'm terrible. Send me out to sea and all that rot. Seriously, I don't want the whelp to die, but she sure as hell better do what her mother says from now on. No more, ‘Daddy will do what I tell him’ Princess Complex she has going on.
*snaps* Yes, I know she’s six, Ann! I’m allowed to get angry with fictional characters. *simmers*
I just have this feeling that when Draco finds them, he is still going to blame Ginny for Serena being kidnapped. Maybe you should have it so that Ginny is able to convince Warrington to return Serena or somehow returns the girl herself, and then Ginny is recaptured and tortured!
Tortured Ginny! She's bound to get more attention than the sprout afterwards, no? Take that, Draco! Take that tortured Ginny home and tell her that she is JUST as important. *throws hands up in the air in frustration*
Okay, I am getting worked up. I should go put on a cuppa.
Author's Response: Leave Serena alone. *rolls eyes* Am I going to have to defend a SIX year old FICTIONAL character from you now? As for what Draco will do, if and when he finds them, well, you'll have to wait and see like everyone else. No special treatment for you. The next chapter is actually pretty much done so hopefully you won't have to wait too long. Now, go have some tea.
Name: Flipinpenname reviewed
Hazelnut Chocolate Brownies on Apr 06, 2010 03:50 pm
alright, legit, lets update this story pretty dang quickly. thank you.
Author's Response: Haha, I'll try.
Name: dancingonstars reviewed
Hazelnut Chocolate Brownies on Apr 06, 2010 03:50 pm
oh no poor ginny and serena. warrington better let them go before he realizes what draco's capable of. and i cant believe he had to kidnap them on her birthday, give the girl a break. great chapter. can't wait for the next one.
Author's Response: I'm of the cruel sort. Well, Warrington is cruel.
Name: Akt5us reviewed
Hazelnut Chocolate Brownies on Apr 06, 2010 02:54 pm
Oh my. That seems very well planned on Warrington's part. I can't wait to see what Draco ends up doing!
Author's Response: He's had a lot of time to think about it. Thanks for reviewing.
Name: marinamermaid reviewed
Hazelnut Chocolate Brownies on Apr 06, 2010 01:11 pm
Oh My God!!! You're brilliant for updating but not so brilliant for leaving it there! I loved it but am on my knees begging you for more, pretty please XXX
Author's Response: I will try and get it up as soon as possible. You can stand now. :)
Name: oxymoron8 reviewed
Hazelnut Chocolate Brownies on Apr 06, 2010 08:22 am
Grrr... I think that Warrington should be worried. It may be sad to say but this is probably just the thing to open up Draco's eyes to what she means to him. I really hope that they find her /them before anything horrid happens. Glad that Luna is alright, as well as the baby. Cannot wait to see what happens next, great writing as usual.
Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing. Yes, Warrington should be scared, not sure if he is though.
Name: Incognito reviewed
Lemon Meringue on Apr 06, 2010 08:12 am
I knew Ginny would break first! Draco and Ginny should have a vacation alone. Leave the kid behind. Lol. I should never ever have children. I'm so not a forgiving soul. No, I better put a tomb-bomb in this uterus so no child is suffered my mothering 'skills'.
Author's Response: Lol. Oh, Lia, I love you.
Name: Incognito reviewed
Passion Fruit Tart on Apr 06, 2010 08:08 am
Good for Ginny finally stepping up and telling Draco that she's her child too. I hope Ginny can fix some of Serena's spoilt ways.
Draco also seems to want more than sex, but he is too stubborn to admit it--and so is Ginny. Who will break first? Ginny, I think.
Author's Response: I think you already know the answer.
Name: Incognito reviewed
Homemade Strawberry Ice Cream on Apr 06, 2010 08:06 am
Ginny fell into the sex trap. I am disappointed in her...Argh, this sounds like something you'd say to me.
Stop writing about my life, Ann! Lol
Author's Response: She didn't have sex with him, unless I'm missing something. It was just a kiss. A KISS!
Name: ReverseBeauty reviewed
Hazelnut Chocolate Brownies on Apr 06, 2010 08:06 am
The whole kidnapping thing :c
Author's Response: Okay. That's good to know. I was worried for a second.
Name: Incognito reviewed
Red Velvet Cake on Apr 06, 2010 08:05 am
“But you stopped dating Mother because I asked you to.” Serena huffed. “I don’t see how this is any different.”--Manipulative little...She's six, Lia. She's six. I know. Sighs.
“This is what happens when she gets everything she wants.” Lucius stared at the doors that Serena had slammed shut. He was not happy with her behavior in the slightest, especially not in front of guests. “You can’t spoil her.”--Yes, thank you, Lucius!
I am not in a forgiving mood right now. *sulks*
Author's Response: I'm sorry about your mood. (Now you have to deal with my short responses)
Name: Incognito reviewed
Homemade Fudge on Apr 06, 2010 08:03 am
This is why I don't want kids, especially a spoilt child. Blergh. And Draco over-reacts. Badly. Also reminds me of someone. Argh. To live your life entirely for your child is stupid. It's like living through your child, like those ridiculous mothers who enter their children in pageants or send them to commercial/tv/movie auditions.
“She is the most important person in my life. She always will be,” Draco said. “Will you be able to be in a relationship where you always come in second?”
The funny thing is, is that when she's grown up and has a boyfriend or husband of her own, he will come in second, and he will need a new first.
Ann, this story is pissing me off in its parallel to MY world! Stop it! Lol!
“She’s my daughter too, Draco, and I love her. But one day she will grow up and go off on her own. And who will I be left with? It may sound selfish of me, especially considering the situation we’re in now, but it’s true. When she’s off at Hogwarts, when she gets married, where will you be Draco? Will you be left all alone?”
Yes yes yes! God, I love you.
Ginny opened the door. “Remember what I said, Draco. She’ll grow up. You can’t stop her from doing so. You won’t be able to put your life on hold because you have a daughter, Draco. And I’m not just talking about me. I’m talking about when you find someone you truly love.”
Ann, did you write this for me? Lol
Author's Response: I did write it for you, in advance. I wrote it so that when your read it, you would get irrationally angry.
Name: Incognito reviewed
Almond Croissants on Apr 06, 2010 08:02 am
Oh, Luna. Dun dun dun. I love how Ron is not oblivious--for once.
I'm sorry for such short, rubbish reviews, but I am at work (naughty girl). I do promise to properly review this lovely story and give concrit once it is finally complete. For now, you have to make due with cheeky comments every chapter. ^_~
Author's Response: Now that I know what you sound like, things like naughty girl make me giggle. Hehe. I HATE HATE HATE your cheeky reviews. By hate, I mean love. :)
Name: Incognito reviewed
Chocolate Chip Scones on Apr 06, 2010 08:00 am
The 'monster' scene with George, little Fred, Serena, and Gin was adorable. George and his son are so cute!
I like the idea of Fred being Serena's 'little brother'.
Author's Response: I should bring him back.
Name: Incognito reviewed
Strawberry Cheesecake on Apr 06, 2010 07:59 am
I know I should be annoyed by Serena's interruption, but I am not. I am annoyed with Draco's inability to say 'no' to the child. Reminds me of someone I know...
Author's Response: This is where you begin to see parallels to your life. I was channeling some other worldly powers and predicting your future.
Name: Incognito reviewed
Strawberry and Cream Tarts on Apr 06, 2010 07:59 am
Molly, you degenerate hussy! Oh, it was Lucius, wasn't it? No, probably not since he is younger than Molly but...c'mon, who was it?
Lol, I love Lucius and Ginny's talks. The broom analogy was priceless. (Oh, and I have total empathy for Ginny--I'd feel the same).
"I’d settle for a sister at this point," Haha, this chapter is awesome! I love how Serena coyly asks Ginny to pop another baby out. HA!
Good good. This is getting better. I'd like more smut though. ^_~
Author's Response: It was not Lucius. You'll never find out who. Yay, Lucius love.
Name: Incognito reviewed
Almond Biscuits Dipped in Chocolate on Apr 06, 2010 07:57 am
You gave me smut. I am happy now. Thank you. ^_^
Author's Response: Glad to be of service, at work no less.
Name: Incognito reviewed
Chocolate Eclair on Apr 06, 2010 07:56 am
"Wench"--Ah, to children and their journey through the evolution of profanity. ^_~
This was a very teasing chapter. There was too much flirting going on and not enough kissing! You better make up for that in the next chapter.
Author's Response: Well, I make up for the not kissing in the next chapter.
Name: devilzluv reviewed
Hazelnut Chocolate Brownies on Apr 06, 2010 07:56 am
i swear this chapter felt shorter than the rest. I thought the threat of warrington was something of the distant past. To bring him in like this, on Ginny's birthday no less, was cruel. Me likey :)
Ughh but I wanna know what happens... now!
Author's Response: It was a bit short but I don't think I would call it the shortest. It might be. I didn't check. Lol. Yes, it was cruel. Thanks for reviewing.
Name: dgforever1991 reviewed
Hazelnut Chocolate Brownies on Apr 06, 2010 03:51 am
I can't believe she got kidnapped on her birthday and when her best friend has just given birth :'(
Great chapter though, but really short :(
Please please please please can u update really quickly, because I really love this fict and have been following it all the way through and I always want to know what happens next :)
x
Author's Response: I know. I'm awful. I will try and update quickly.
Name: bluelover reviewed
Hazelnut Chocolate Brownies on Apr 05, 2010 11:54 pm
Darn it...everything was going so well! I seriously had to rack my brain to remember who Warrington was...
I'm hoping this problem will help Draco realize what he needs in his life...
Great chapter! I'm not part of the few you've mentioned but I might contemplate it if you leave us hanging for too long...have pity on our poor hearts...LOL
Thanks for the update and I know you know by now how much I look forward to reading the rest of the story (^_^)
Author's Response: I have a lot of sympathy for my readers because I definitely know what it feels like to be left hanging. So I will try my best not to make you wait this long for the next update. I sort of wanted everyone to put Warrington out of their mind so that when this happened it would be a total shock. I'm happy to see it worked. Thanks for reviewing.
Name: Kalira reviewed
Hazelnut Chocolate Brownies on Apr 05, 2010 11:10 pm
I'm holding on the belief that you won't do anything too terrible to them before Draco finds them and that eventually Warrington will get his comeuppance.
right?
Author's Response: Er, right? (Thanks for the review)
Name: Nutmeg44 reviewed
Hazelnut Chocolate Brownies on Apr 05, 2010 10:04 pm
I won't kill you but you're killing me. The updates take forever and its one of the best stories out right now. Well at least this unfortunate act will cause Draco to realize what he has and what he wants. The Godmother and Goddaughter have the same birthday, that's so cute. The Draco jealousy fit over Michael Corner as the ex is so cute. I loved the banter between GInny and Michael, it was so flirty and cute. I love this chapter and I love this story. I can't wait for the next update.
Author's Response: I'm sorry. You're right, this will sort of put things in perspective for Draco. I will do my very best not to take long with the next chapter.
Name: sparkling reviewed
Hazelnut Chocolate Brownies on Apr 05, 2010 09:27 pm
I so hate cliff hangers. Okay you have a point, I will not Harm you! but if you take to long I just might reconsider!!!!!!!. great chapter by the way.....
Author's Response: Heh, I'll try not to take too long then.
Name: chocolover reviewed
Homemade Strawberry Ice Cream on Apr 05, 2010 09:22 pm
Aahh! No, you can't end it there!
What a great chapter. I can't wait for the next one!!