Reviews For Buttercup
Name: choravenclaw reviewed Prologue on Jan 31, 2010 05:27 pm
=S
my french lessons are goin to start this week.
i'm nervous and excited about it.

hehe
Wha do you need to read?
a huge, classic literature book or just a text from one of our books?

Author's Response: Actually, I just realized I only have to study for French and read my Sociology text. My Wordsworth poems can stay until tomorrow because I don't have that class until Tuesday. I know I will be working on Buttercup so you don't have to worry about that. I just don't know when I'll finish the chapter. I'm already 2,000 words in.
Name: choravenclaw reviewed Prologue on Jan 31, 2010 05:22 pm
Oh no!
Another mean author to have me going nuts?
I swear if i ever leave D/G behind is because it sent me to a crazy people insitution where i have no access to the internet!
=SS


Send over all your homework!
I have nother week before classes start and absolutely nothing to do!
Send over your homework, i'll do that and you just worry about the fic!
^;^
Please say yes!

kisses

Author's Response: LOL. I wish. It's reading so I need to know what happens. Plus I have to study for my French quiz.
Name: pakhi reviewed Passion Fruit Tart on Jan 31, 2010 12:05 pm
hey..great going..please update soon :)

Author's Response: Thank you! I'll try and update as quick as possible.
Name: unseensorrows reviewed Passion Fruit Tart on Jan 30, 2010 10:32 pm
UPDATE!
YAY!
loved it!
the tension between them is VERY amusing!

Author's Response: Tension is the best part.
Name: moliosi reviewed Passion Fruit Tart on Jan 30, 2010 10:09 pm
Thanks for the update, I've really enjoyed this story so far. I'm glad that Ginny is finally making her opinion about Serena's upbringing known. Good for her! Draco better decide what he really wants soon.

Author's Response: This was the point that Ginny needed to get to. She had to rid herself of the fear that Draco would take Serena away from her. So, yes, it's high time she did that. Thanks for the review! Draco will make his decision before the end.
Name: choravenclaw reviewed Prologue on Jan 30, 2010 01:53 pm
hehe
Thanks!
=)
You're getting mean!
Something or nothing to happen?
WOW!
That really left me with a wondering imagination...
i'm just about going crazy with so many ideas going through my head as to what can and cannot happen!

=S
Going insane!!!
=OOO

When will you be updating next?
please don't tell me it will take another month or so!
*pouts lips and bats eyelashes*


kisses

Author's Response: I never said I was nice :) Don't worry, I'm working on the next chapter right now. I want to say I'll complete it tonight and send it off to my beta, but I probably won't. I have a ton of homework to do. And homework trumps fanfiction, although I wish it didn't. It'll be soon though. Two weeks maximum.
Name: Akt5us reviewed Passion Fruit Tart on Jan 29, 2010 08:38 pm
I really like this chapter and I'm glad the Draco and Ginny are getting closer together with Serena too! I can't wait to read more!

Author's Response: Glad you enjoyed it. :)
Name: HarrysMiOne reviewed Passion Fruit Tart on Jan 29, 2010 12:05 pm
aughhhhh! i was soo not ready for that chapter to end! it was soo good and i hope you update again soon!

Author's Response: I'll try and get the new chapter finished soon. I won't make it another month.
Name: Flipinpenname reviewed Passion Fruit Tart on Jan 29, 2010 11:18 am
danggg. uhm. update soon. because i want to know what happens. haha.

Author's Response: I'll try my best. :)
Name: choravenclaw reviewed Passion Fruit Tart on Jan 29, 2010 12:44 am
She joined Luna on her bed with a heavy sigh. “I do love him. I don’t know how I ended up falling in love with someone who doesn’t love me.”

I'm so glad she finally admitted!
i was worried it would have to be forced out of them...with one admitting it's already a huge step in the right direction!
=D


I loved the Hermione/Gin/Luna interaction and the way they reacted to Draco!

I can't believe Ginny is so obviously in love with him!
I'm so glad about this!
^;^


He stared at her small suitcase. "Are you sure you brought enough clothing?"
"The things required for an island vacation are rather miniscule," Ginny said, an imitation of Draco's smirk appearing on her lips when he glared at her.
"Are you planning on doing that all weekend?" snapped Draco.
"I don't know what you're talking about," Ginny said innocently. "I'm not doing anything."

OOOOOHHH!!!
Sje's teasing and flirting shamelessly!
And he's already really vexed!
This is going to be a killer!
i wonder if they'll make it through the next day without kissing???
hmmm....
I sure hope not, i can't wait for the moment when Draco snaps, especially if it's after Serena is asleep!
I'M SO EXCITED!!!



"I will raise my daughter the way I see fit," Draco said stoically.
"She's my daughter too," Ginny argued, standing to her feet. "I may not have been here for the first six years of her life, and that’s not by my own choosing, either. But I certainly plan on being in it as long as I live. And you, Draco Malfoy, will have to get used to this fact. I'm tired of walking on eggshells around you. I didn't purposely forfeit my right to be a parent. It was done to me."
Draco opened his mouth to reply but was cut off by Serena's shout. "Mother, I'm ready."

I'm glad they are having this discussion/fight right now.
I don't expect the exact same results as last time they had this argument, but i sure as hell expect them to have some sort of explosive reaction...wjether it will be akiss, a slap or running out and having him go after her i'm not sure yet, but i know you'll do it right!
=)


"You didn't kidnap me," Ginny said with a smile. "I came here."
"Not for—" His mouth snapped shut instantly.
"Not for what?" Ginny stood, suspicion on her face. She had an inkling of what he was about to say. "Not for what, Draco?"

AAAAAAWWWWW!!!
He was gonna say not for US, or ME!
AAAWWW!!!
he's so cute trying to fight it!
=)
No wonder she's in love...she'll be drowing in it soon!
because she's just waaaaay over her head.


"I suppose you have no urges to shag me then?" asked Draco after a moment of silence.
"What?"
"The last time you played in water and talked about your brother, we shagged and conceived Serena." Draco raised an eyebrow. "Having any of those urges?"

Ginny wishes to say:"Oh! Thank merlin! I thought you'd never ask!"Then through herself at him and hug her arms and legs around him while maddly kissing him and pushing him to the bed so she can straddle him.


Ginny couldn't help but to laugh. "No, I can't say I am."
"Liar," Draco murmured, his eyes flashing. "I can read you like a book, Ginevra. Don't forget it."
Suddenly uncomfortable, Ginny said, "I better go get dressed."
"Don't mind me," Draco replied with a grin.
"You really know how to change subjects," Ginny said, shaking her head. She pointed to the door. "Go before your daughter starts to think wild thoughts about what's going on up here."
"She's my daughter now?" Draco's tone was playful.
Ginny tossed a makeup brush at him. "Get out."

OOOOHHH!!!
I loved their little banter!
=DD
I'm glad Ginny was sad and looked like she was about to cry.
it would have been horrible for them to fight at this moment.
Especialy because Serena would feel guilty
At least this way the air around them gets lighter.




I'm so glad you finally found the time to update!
I was wondering if i should owl ou and bug you about thischapter yesterday.
I'm sure glad i didn't have to!
^;^
please tell me now that holiday madness is over you'll have a lot more time to write and i'll post the next chapter sooner!
I can't wait to see a kiss scene in this gorgeous island!
^;~

Thank you so much for this!


kisses

Author's Response: Lol, your comments can be quite hilarious. They definitely needed to hash out their issues with Serena's upbringing. It'll come up in the future. In any case, yes, the vacation is not over. There is still plenty of time for something or nothing to happen. Hehe.
Name: Nutmeg44 reviewed Passion Fruit Tart on Jan 28, 2010 09:42 pm
oh ginny and draco. i feel like they are 2 bumper cars. trying to move together but keep bumping into each other. love the chapter though. i cant wait for them to stop being so stubborn and just get 2gether properly anf stop letting a 5 yr old dictate the grownup aspects of their life. cant wait for the update.

Author's Response: Well, when the night is up, the bumper cars always stick together. :)
Name: Jack Tamara reviewed Passion Fruit Tart on Jan 28, 2010 08:57 pm
AHHHHHHH! I was really excited when I saw you update this fic! I really, really love it! And I'm loving all this family business. Sometimes, I'm annoyed at Serena, because she seems quite immature and spoiler, but sometimes, I really adore her too, like when she's with Ginny and you can really see how much she wants to just do mom things with her. Anyways, I'm glad that there's more of this vacation. HOpefully, in the next chapter, the Draco and Ginny will get together and create more babies? Haha, jk, but I love how sexually suggestive Draco is. Also, I was wondering, what did Draco mean to say when he was like, "Not for--". I know GInny gets it, but I was kind of confused on that part. Other than that, this was great, and please update soon!

XOXO, JT

Author's Response: I know a lot of people are annoyed with Serena. It really wasn't my intention for that happen. She's just a six year old whose very possessive about her parents, especially her father. But don't worry, by the end, you'll all fall in love with Serena again. She's definitely trying to make up for lost time with her mother. I know some people have guessed what he was going to say. I'll give you a hint. It has to do with his feelings towards Ginny, and he almost slipped up and said something he didn't want her to know. It'll come up in the next chapter, don't worry. :)
Name: GoldenFawkes reviewed Passion Fruit Tart on Jan 28, 2010 08:49 pm
Hooray for a new chapter!

Author's Response: Cheers!
Name: oxymoron8 reviewed Passion Fruit Tart on Jan 28, 2010 08:20 pm
Great chapter. Hope that you had a wonderful holiday as well and the transition from break to school went easily enough. I really hope that they communicate some on their vacation and get a better understanding of the other. Perhaps a frank discussion with Serena is needed for her to come to terms with D and G's relationship. Happy writing.

P.S. Around how many chapters are left?

Author's Response: Communication is the key. As far as Serena and their relationship, I'm keeping quiet because you have a way of guessing what will happen. I refuse to give you any hints...none. I would say about 4-6 chapters. The ending is definitely in sight. I don't want to drag this out too much.
Name: hp42 reviewed Passion Fruit Tart on Jan 28, 2010 08:04 pm
Great chapter. I actually tried to press 'previous' to go to the next chapter. Needless to say, it didn't work. :P

Author's Response: LOL. Yes, that wouldn't work. But I'll do my best to get the next chapter out soon.
Name: cindy reviewed Homemade Strawberry Ice Cream on Jan 07, 2010 08:12 am
wow man..nice chapter..totally loved it..happy new year and do update soon!

Author's Response: Happy New Year to you too. Thanks for the review!
Name: Cissi418 reviewed Homemade Strawberry Ice Cream on Jan 01, 2010 10:34 am
Please, oh, please finish the story!! I'm going to the kitchen for something sweet.

Author's Response: I promise to finish the story. The new chapter should be up soon.
Name: Cissi418 reviewed Chocolate Eclair on Jan 01, 2010 08:06 am
I am so enjoying this series, imagine a Lucius that's human!

Author's Response: I love Lucius's character. I also happen to love Jason Isaacs too. So I didn't want to make him evil.
Name: Cissi418 reviewed German Chocolate Cake with Fudge Icing on Jan 01, 2010 06:15 am
Wow! A mini Malfoy, I bet her grandfather's very proud of her antics!! Please continue.

Author's Response: Lucius is so very proud.
Name: The_Real_Weaslette reviewed Homemade Strawberry Ice Cream on Dec 26, 2009 10:39 pm
Oh, it is THE cutest story ever! I love how you named the chapters all sweet things- very clever. Pansy, as expected, is wondertastic. I think the Pansy/Ron thing has grown on me over the many, many, MANY stories. Oh, but the kiss in this chapter did annoy me a bit. As much as I love D/G, when Draco acts like that I can't stand when Ginny gives in. If it were me he'd be in hell I tell you, HELL.
Can not WAIT for hols to be over so you can update. Love it. :)

Author's Response: Ginny had a bit of a weak moment. Actually, I suppose I should say I had a bit of a weak moment. I'm not immune to making fluffy things happen unfortunately. And as far as Draco being in hell, well, he's taking Ginny to a tropical island in which she will be wearing very little clothing. Don't worry, I'm sure he'll experience hell. Thanks for the review!
Name: Dark__Angel reviewed Homemade Strawberry Ice Cream on Dec 22, 2009 04:23 am
very nice please fiish

Author's Response: I will. Don't worry. :)
Name: chineserose reviewed Homemade Strawberry Ice Cream on Dec 18, 2009 10:32 pm
Lovely. Since when would they be allowed to have a simple relationship :) Though Draco doesnt seem to want to respect Ginny's 'boundaries', not that Ginny seems to enforce those boundaries very much ;)
more please! :DD

Author's Response: Draco and Ginny are a very complicated couple, and I like to portray them that way, except in maybe some of my one-shots. And that's just because I don't have enough time to put them complexity of their relationship. I am trying to finish the next chapter before the years end. But I believe the Cabal usually goes on holiday. So even if I do finish it you probably won't see it until after the holidays. But I will try my best.
Name: chineserose reviewed Chocolate Muffin on Dec 18, 2009 04:41 am
i am rereading this, and it's still as wonderfully written as it was the first time around. I love that there isn't instant chemistry between the two, and that there are more realistic emotions than some other stories. kudos!
p.s. love all the cake references. How hardworking Ginny must be! My mum runs a very small, but fairly busy sweets and savories catering business, and she's flat out most of the time!

Author's Response: I really have no experience with running a bakery. So, I'm glad that it's somewhat accurate...kind of. I'm happy that you liked it as much as you liked it the first time around. I would have probably been just a little disappointed if you didn't. Lol. Thanks for the review.
Name: choravenclaw reviewed Prologue on Dec 15, 2009 02:04 pm
i'll owl it through here again, but i'm gonna have to re-write it because it has completely being wiped from here[seeing as the owls don't keep records like e-mails]
it's kinda big so i'm gonna use a part that was previously written and then just keep going!
;)
you should be recieving it in an hour.
^;~

kisses
Name: choravenclaw reviewed Prologue on Dec 14, 2009 05:28 pm
Oh no, don't stop!
You're the only one i've seen using!
And i really like it!
=D

Really?
That's strange!
I sent you an e-mail!
I'll just re-send it when i get home then!
^;^

kisses

Author's Response: Maybe you should try messaging it to me because I still haven't received it.
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