Name: bee245 reviewed Chapter 1 on Apr 22, 2010 09:15 pm
Very beautiful. I lovelove the 'perfect metaphor' line. I love how you didn't just focus on stereotypical things like his appearance but also the WAY he does things...

Lol you just made all lovesick over a fictional character :D. Congratulations.

Name: dristi reviewed Chapter 1 on Feb 27, 2009 07:46 am
hi, very intense but also sad...

keep up!
Name: kymom reviewed Chapter 1 on Feb 26, 2009 07:11 am
WOW! That was wonderful. Ginny has a very grown up voice there. Thank you
Name: CCC reviewed Chapter 1 on Feb 25, 2009 04:27 pm
The switch from all the things she likes to the one line "and I don't like you" is very powerful. I love how you set the line on it's own. It was like a gong ringing. I'm impressed.

Author's Response: Thanks for the high praise. I'm glad that line worked so well.
Name: Bronte44 reviewed Chapter 1 on Feb 25, 2009 02:34 pm
Very beautiful! Great imagery. I can see her wishing and waiting. I agree with whoever said they'd like to see a letter from Draco's perspective after they meet.

Author's Response: Thanks for the review. Glad you liked it.
Name: gidge_8 reviewed Chapter 1 on Feb 25, 2009 11:06 am
I do love this. It's so bittersweet. Very nicely written.

Author's Response: Thank you so much.
Name: diary2me reviewed Chapter 1 on Feb 25, 2009 10:58 am
Interesting, I must say. In a way, she is waiting for everything else we read about the two of them to just happen. I would like to see another letter, from his perspective, in about 5 years, after he has noticed her on the street... But that is just me wishing...

Author's Response: I have to say, I never thought about doing a letter from his perspective. I might have to play around with that a bit. Thanks for the idea.
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