Name: Desertisle reviewed
Chapter 1 - Admit the Problem on Jan 12, 2016 02:26 pm
Such a great, refreshing story. A joy to read. Kudos to you!
Name: choravenclaw reviewed
Chapter 1 - Admit the Problem on Aug 06, 2009 01:37 pm
I like the idea of a smut cookie! I'll see what I can do. LOL!
YAY!
You got me happy from the start!
=D
I know He's such a baby!
When i started reading this i thought like, maybe he's gonna get hit by a curse and become a baby or something and omehow Ginny is the one who must care for him. Then i read he was chubby so i thought: a chubby baby Draco telling Ginny to "Tie" whenever she did something he didn't like.
I know my imagination is on the loose!
;)
But i'm glad he's not SUCH a baby and that he has feelings for her, other than bad ones.
This is going great and I'm really enjoying it!
=DD
i know what you mean by letting it soak, is just i'm a read-freak, when i start reading omething i never want it to stop.
That's why i love fanfics so much, i try to beg to the great authors to keep writing and to write more or, more likely, i ask them to make the story naughtier, i just love Draco (and Blaise) hitting on Ginny and making her blush, these teasing and stuff really make my day brighter!
As to the BTW (which by the way i dunno what it means) : You're right, you're chapters are always decent sized!
=D
kisses
Author's Response: oh your responses are wonderful! The baby idea is a hoot! I hardly ever start reading a story before at least 5 chapters are posted also. Hate waiting too. :D
Name: starry_laa reviewed
Chapter 1 - Admit the Problem on Jul 26, 2009 04:30 am
I thought it was wonderful! And I think the serious tone is a great impetus for the story
Author's Response: Thanks so much for the feedback! Best wishes! -G
Name: Licentia poetica reviewed
Chapter 1 - Admit the Problem on Apr 28, 2009 04:24 am
*snort*
I'm truly enjoying the idea of an out-of-shape Draco having to deal with the loss of his candy and pastries and your description of yogurt is priceless! This is a refreshing take on the disparity of wealth and 'class' between the two; thanks!
Author's Response: Yes... somehow, I could just picture him with the yogurt and a really funny expression. Poor thing doesn't quite have a clue. Makes him rather sweet, I think. :) Thanks so much for the feedback. - G
Name: MK Richie reviewed
Chapter 1 - Admit the Problem on Apr 08, 2009 01:49 pm
Aww, I love Edwina! She really cares about Malfoy, and I like the fact that she knows how to sorta boss him around when he gets out of hand.
Very different characterization of Draco! I like seeing him out of his element a little bit, giving him some realistic flaws! It's a bit refreshing to read a story where the author isn't constantly gushing about how attractive he is! I am very interested, and I'm off the read the second chapter.
And oh yeah, did i mention that after reading this I went to get into shape for summer ASAP! =]
Author's Response: So glad you enjoy Edwina. She has a wonderful scene at the end BTW, possibly the sweetest scene I've ever written. Hope you keep up with the workouts for summer! *grins* -G
Name: Dracogirl reviewed
Chapter 1 - Admit the Problem on Apr 07, 2009 09:31 am
A Draco that is obviously insecure and lacks self-confidence? And to add to it he's pudgy? This is such an original and innovative concept. It seems very promising and I look forward to more.
Author's Response: Hard to believe, isn't it, since I do love our blond egomaniac. I was thinking, if we go back to JKR's universe, he is a bit insecure, hence why he hides behind being a bully, so surprisingly, he was easy to write this way. Thanks soo much for the feedback!!! :) -G
Name: IluvCaptainJack reviewed
Chapter 1 - Admit the Problem on Apr 04, 2009 01:22 pm
very cute! i can't wait to read the next chapters
Author's Response: So glad you enjoyed! Just a cute idea that popped up one day! More coming soon!
Name: ronlover reviewed
Chapter 1 - Admit the Problem on Apr 03, 2009 07:29 pm
Sounds like its going to be interesting. Update soon. :D
Author's Response: Thanks! Next chap is on its way. I do think it will be interesting. And I just wrote up a wonderful epilogue. :)
Name: mchen reviewed
Chapter 1 - Admit the Problem on Apr 02, 2009 06:17 pm
Oooh, great start -- and lovely ending to the chapter, just like a soap opera! I'm not loving the idea of fat!Draco, but it's such an unusual premise, I'm willing to go with it. For now -- we have to get hot!Draco, or at least glimpses of him, soon, I say! ;)
Author's Response: He's got a ways to go. Just know that his torment will be rather amusing. :) Thanks!!!!
Name: twiddlekinks reviewed
Chapter 1 - Admit the Problem on Apr 01, 2009 08:17 pm
hahahaha What a funky idea, but quite a clever one. Am really looking forward to seeing where this story leads. :)
Author's Response: Thank you! I love seeing the "haha's" in the reviews. Poor Draco... we're all laughing at him.
Name: ExquisiteBeauty reviewed
Chapter 1 - Admit the Problem on Apr 01, 2009 08:05 pm
Very original! So far, so good.
.... but Draco WILL get back into shape, right? Right? Because a pudgy Draco makes me sad. Haahh.
Author's Response: LOL! Hmmmm... should I give it away??? Nah. I'll keep you guessing. :D Thanks so much for the feedback!!! - G
Name: CCC reviewed
Chapter 1 - Admit the Problem on Apr 01, 2009 02:09 pm
What a cute idea for a fic. Normally Draco is fit from the beginning. I think it will be fun to watch him regain his confidence.
Author's Response: Thank you!!! The idea all started from that thought... that all fics have him quiet sexy from the beginning, and it evolved from there. I promise lots of fun, although Draco won't think so. :)
Name: Amanda Mancini reviewed
Chapter 1 - Admit the Problem on Apr 01, 2009 03:13 am
This could be amazing!!!
Author's Response: It just might be. The next couple of chapters are quite fun, so I hope I live up to your expectations! Thanks so much!
Name: Indiainksky reviewed
Chapter 1 - Admit the Problem on Mar 31, 2009 08:55 pm
*gasp* a pudgy Malfoy? never! just kidding--I love it and I can't wait for Ginny to whip Draco into shape ;).
Author's Response: LOL! Yes, our dear Draco doesn't quite have a clue yet on what's going to hit him. :D
Name: carnivorousmouse reviewed
Chapter 1 - Admit the Problem on Mar 31, 2009 05:49 pm
hahahahahahaha
i love it :D
Author's Response: I love seeing that I made you laugh! Thanks for letting me know!!!
Name: LunaLoves reviewed
Chapter 1 - Admit the Problem on Mar 31, 2009 04:56 pm
Awesome! Finally a Draco who isn't an Adonis and a Ginny with a backbone
Author's Response: Thanks!!! I agree, I've been reading more stories where Ginny is a helpless wimp and it's been driving me nuts! And I like the idea of Draco being a bit more vulnerable, but in a fun way. :)
Name: moliosi reviewed
Chapter 1 - Admit the Problem on Mar 31, 2009 04:46 pm
very cute! and something different since Draco is normally quite fit. :)
Author's Response: Yes, I was looking for a way to make him different. Not sure how this came to mind, but the idea just ran away with me. Thanks!!!
Name: ZSF reviewed
Chapter 1 - Admit the Problem on Mar 31, 2009 04:04 pm
Oh, poor Draco. This is certainly very original, it's very rare that we see Draco without his snide, confident demeanor. I think it's wonderful. Can't wait to see where it goes next. Good job. :)
Author's Response: Thank you! And yes, poor Draco has no idea what he's in for.
Name: shaded reviewed
Chapter 1 - Admit the Problem on Mar 31, 2009 01:47 pm
I'm really liking this story. It's interesting to see Draco not being drop-dead-gorgeous man he usually is in fanfics. Well, D/G fanfics at least. I *love* Edwina. She's great. I like how she was taken aback by Ginny's determined response.
Hehe, I wonder what Draco's reaction will be to Ginny being his trainer.
I'm looking forward to the next chapter. The impatient, rather spoiled Draco against a determined Ginny -should be fun!
Author's Response: Yes, I was starting to think of how Ginny was described very differently, yet Draco was always very much the same and the idea of him letting himself go just came to me. He became very, very fun to write.
Thanks for the lovely feedback.
G
Name: albinopeacockwithfreckles reviewed
Chapter 1 - Admit the Problem on Mar 31, 2009 01:04 pm
Dun dun dun! :-) Nice twist that I haven't seen before! Can't wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response: So happy you like it! Thanks!!!!
Name: doc_3 reviewed
Chapter 1 - Admit the Problem on Mar 31, 2009 11:57 am
Hysterical. I love it when Malfoy is not perfect!
Author's Response: Thank you! It's so easy to laugh at his misery in this story. I'm so glad you enjoy it so far.
Name: GoldenFawkes reviewed
Chapter 1 - Admit the Problem on Mar 31, 2009 11:48 am
Haha. I have a feeling this is going to be painful.
Author's Response: Oh yeah! I almost feel bad for him, but I had too much fun laughing at his misery. Hope you all do too.
:)
Name: wcoast_girl reviewed
Chapter 1 - Admit the Problem on Mar 31, 2009 10:50 am
Oh its great! Such a completely unique idea. Hee hee - I can't wait to read more.
Author's Response: Thank you! I love being unique! Glad it gave you a smile and I'm sure future chapters will too. :)
Name: jcap1526 reviewed
Chapter 1 - Admit the Problem on Mar 31, 2009 09:04 am
An overweight Draco...love it! Go Ginny! Can't wait to see what happens next.
Author's Response: Much to come. I almost feel sorry for him... almost. No, not really. lol. Thanks so much for the feedback!
Name: dancingonstars reviewed
Chapter 1 - Admit the Problem on Mar 31, 2009 08:53 am
i really like this. i cant believe draco let himself go but id love to see how ginny whips him into shape. this is a really good beginning.
Author's Response: Ginny is a bit based on a real life kick boxing instructor I had, who was tiny and could push anybody to do anything. I think you'll like her a lot. Thank you so much for telling me you like it so far.