Name: Jack Tamara reviewed
Chapter 4 - Be Prepared on Jan 19, 2010 09:18 pm
"It might be time for us to adjust our exercise plan, anyway.”
Hahaha, Ginny is so funny!
And
"“It's a simple matter of balance,” she explained. “Calories in must be less than calories expended. You can have the treat, but we'll have to increase your activity. I think you are ready for that now, anyway.”
Suddenly, his triumph didn't seem quite as satisfying as it did a few moments ago.
“Don't pout, Draco. It's not that bad. We'll meet tomorrow morning. I think it's time for you to start jogging.”
And when did he give her permission to call him by his first name?"
My goodness. I haven't reviewed the earlier three chapters, but i just want you to know that you have me in stitches. really. oh, this is just way too good. i love that ginny outsmarts draco so much. :)
XOXO, JT
Author's Response: Glad that the story makes you laugh. I had a great time writing it. :)
Name: Shyla reviewed
Chapter 4 - Be Prepared on Jun 25, 2009 04:56 pm
Great Chapter. I love this story and how you projected a totally different Draco. :) I can't wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response: Thank you so much. He is so fun here. I wish I could say how I came up with him like this... but ... I have no idea. :) Thanks for reading, and thank you so much for the feedback.
Name: suzymaholic reviewed
Chapter 4 - Be Prepared on Jun 24, 2009 06:15 pm
Hee! I love this story! Grateful for the update :D
Author's Response: Thank you! Hopefully next will be up soon. So glad you are enjoying it!!! and thanks so much for letting me know!!!
Name: Dracogirl reviewed
Chapter 4 - Be Prepared on Jun 21, 2009 06:16 pm
Have I told you how much I love Draco in this story? He's so 'human' and endearing, not gorgeous and perfect (although I do love 'Sex God' Draco, too). Edwina, Narcissa and of course Ginny are doing there best to take care Draco.
There interaction is perfect, still very professional- even though Draco likes looking at Ginny's arse. The attraction is slowly building. Thank you for the update.
Author's Response: I sort of think of Draco as a grumpy, cuddly teddy bear in this fic. He needs his girls to look after him. :D
Thanks so much for the feedback. It means a great deal to me.
-G
Name: jingsquared reviewed
Chapter 4 - Be Prepared on Jun 20, 2009 06:27 am
I've really enjoyed this novel approach to the usual D/G story and look forward to seeing how future chapters unfold.
My favourite bits are:
Draco not being the perfect 'sex god'!
Draco and Ginny starting their relationship on a professional footing
Narcissa's involvement in the 'conspiracy'
Keep up the good work and I look forward to reading more!
Author's Response: Thank you! I do try to be original and I really appreciate your feedback. Actually, I think the story was inspired by me reading one too many stories where Draco was too perfect. I also love Narcissa, and find it amusing that I can make her so influential without even making an appearance. LOL
Name: starry_laa reviewed
Chapter 4 - Be Prepared on Jun 19, 2009 10:04 pm
I really like this. It's such an original concept. And Domineering!Ginny is kind of funny!
Author's Response: Thank you! Ginny is actually based on a real person... my kickboxing instructor.
Name: Rosalie reviewed
Chapter 4 - Be Prepared on Jun 19, 2009 04:36 am
I have to say that I love reading this story! I love chubby, childish, scared of Ginny, Draco. It's so funny to read a story about their relationship and dieting. And it's particularily fun to read about Draco struggling with maintaining his proper weight instead of it being a girl, who are quite notorious for obsessing over it. I feel viciously pleased. Keep up the good work!
Author's Response: Thank you! Draco is so sweet in this one. I don't know how it came to me to write him like this, but its hard not to love him, even as the author. The women in his life are looking out for him, despite his resistance. :)
Name: GoldenFawkes reviewed
Chapter 4 - Be Prepared on Jun 18, 2009 10:12 pm
Yay! An update!
Ginny wiping that frosting off of Draco's lips... Mmmm...
Author's Response: The fact that it was pink made me chuckle while I was writing. LOL He truly is keeping me amused in this story.
Name: PrincessWhizbee reviewed
Chapter 4 - Be Prepared on Jun 18, 2009 07:44 pm
Thanks for the update! This is a fun story. :)
Author's Response: Thank you so much! It means a lot to know that you have as much fun reading it as I do writing. Definitely makes it worth my effort! Best wishes!!! - G
Name: hp42 reviewed
Chapter 4 - Be Prepared on Jun 18, 2009 06:13 pm
Aww, I love it! I was trying to read this chapter slowly - to make it last. Update soon, per favore?
I love how Draco is afraid of Ginny by the way. :)
Author's Response: I will try. Unfortunatley, I have a tendency to be outdoors too much in summer. But for you, I will work on it tomorrow (rainy day) :)