Name: choravenclaw reviewed The Fury of Tears on Jul 06, 2009 09:51 am
OH MY GOD!!!
I cryed, i honestly to God cryed!
I'm still teary eyed.
That was P E R F E C T ! ! !
I LOVED THIS CHAPTER SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO MUCH!!!
It's simply perfection!
Please don't cut this scene short, let it flow all the way don't just go on the next chapter cutting scnees and saying something happened over a week later.
Keep going from here, show Scorpius and Lily and PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE show Draco ang Ginny, don't cut anything short, show EVERYTHING!!!
IT'S PERFECT! there's no better word, really!

kisses

Author's Response: Wow, thank you so much! I'm really really glad you liked it. Trust me, there's no cutting after this (okay, maybe once) but this is when the whole rest of the story starts to move very fast, so it should have everything afterwards. I'm so glad you liked it! ;) More to come soon.
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