Name: girlMalfoy reviewed
Chapter 20 on Jul 06, 2009 04:07 am
Now I imagine your plot as some sort of circus contortionist, performing tricks for our reading pleasure ;)
For some reason, I really liked this chapter. Finally, everything's moving again and we're "up to speed" as it were. Even though we're still in the past - are we? - there is Ginny/Draco interaction! (Albeit limited).
Cedward and the Volturi are more like a necessary evil at this point - ugh - but I've begun to grudgingly respect Cedward for rescuing Draco. There, I've said it, now sue me.
Hey! Where did Nick go?!
Name: MdnHntrss04 reviewed
Chapter 20 on Jul 05, 2009 09:31 pm
Right now, Anise... I kind of love you. A few weeks ago, I was ready to find you and torture you (I was thinking of an NC-17 Harry Potter/The Mummy crossover that I ran into a couple of weeks ago) for writing a Twilight crossover, but the presence of "Nick" in multiple chapters makes up for it.
I'm so happy you've finished a story! It's been awhile since you came out with one of your short, hilarious stories, and I'm looking forward to reading it. (In case you hadn't guessed, I'm voting for posting sooner rather than later).
Also, as a side note, I've never been into comics, but I have a copy of the first Sandman comic sitting on my desktop right now, ready to read. Thank you for bringing the Endless into my life.
And now I need to stop before I get sappy. I'm looking forward to the next chapter!
Name: Flighty Temptress reviewed
Chapter 20 on Jul 05, 2009 07:08 pm
'Shhh, said Nick. Tall, dark, and noseless is starting up again.' Lol! I laughed so hard at that one! Hilarious!
Name: holly black reviewed
Chapter 20 on Jul 05, 2009 05:23 pm
sadly yes this is all that keeps me sane right now but i do have good news me being in forks is only one week away yay love the chapter totally didnt see it coming and i cant wait for the next one.
Name: girlMalfoy reviewed
Chapter 19 on Jul 02, 2009 02:36 pm
Anise, you're in denial about the length of the story. :P
I'll try to write around my headache. Another lovely chapter and thank Merlin for some explanations! I'm glad to see Nick, even if he is utterly maddening with his lack of answers and looking forward to more revelations in the next chapter. I miss D/G already. :
Name: chineserose reviewed
Chapter 19 on Jun 28, 2009 01:36 am
Ooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooh!!! I want more!! i want to know what happened!!
lovely work here :) I'm seeing some parallels between this story and some of your other works =P but i love it all the same. xx
Name: chineserose reviewed
Chapter 8 on Jun 27, 2009 09:57 pm
ooooh Exciiitiiiiiiiiing!! i love your fics :) Lovely writing, as always. loving it so far.
Haha 'the cold ones' sounds almost twilighty...
oh well. Going to read more!
Name: holly black reviewed
Chapter 19 on Jun 24, 2009 08:33 pm
sorry i haven't wrote in a bit but im on a road trip and when i get internet your story is the only thing that keeps me sane but this is the kinda of road trip you enjoy this is the kind where you move far far away all the way to a small town that reminds me of froks like it smaller im so depressed but this story keeps me happy so yay you
Name: holly black reviewed
Chapter 19 on Jun 24, 2009 08:32 pm
sorry i haven't wrote in a bit but im on a road trip and when i get internet your story is the only thing that keeps me sane but this is the kinda of road trip you enjoy this is the kind where you move far far away all the way to a small town that reminds me of froks like it smaller im so depressed but this story keeps me happy so yay you
Name: Musette reviewed
Chapter 13 on Jun 24, 2009 07:04 am
this is really good, but...
did
you
really
incorporate
twilight?!
T.T
I mean, I love twilight, don't get me wrong. But it's just kinda funny, seeing it here
Name: Dracogirl reviewed
Chapter 19 on Jun 22, 2009 03:01 pm
An interesting chapter. I'm glad we're getting some background information on what happened with that summer, the deal Draco made and how Cedric figures out in all this.
Nick is.....kind of creepy in a amusing and enchanting way. I look forward to learning more answers to my many, many questions. Update soon
Name: MemoriesToLast reviewed
Chapter 19 on Jun 22, 2009 12:53 pm
A fabulous two chapters to come back from Wales to! Finally - some answers! And most importantly of all... Nick! Ahh, how I do love that character, I got the biggest silly grin on my face when he appeared.
“Nobody can hide anything from me, from the heights of the heaven to the depths of the sea to Krispy Kreme’s top secret Devil’s Food donut recipe.
I did cackle so!!
As ever, you write desperate!Draco beautifully, I can't wait for the next update!
MTL
Name: Flighty Temptress reviewed
Chapter 19 on Jun 22, 2009 08:28 am
Some background info. That's good. We can finally start to understand what's going on and why.
I think Nick may be my favourite character! He's just so absolutely hilarious! I really like the way he goes off all random and nonsensical!
Anyway... really good and I can't wait until the next chapter to see what happens next. How it's all going to work out.
Name: girlMalfoy reviewed
Chapter 18 on Jun 20, 2009 07:46 pm
Why indeed, Ginny. That's the question we all want answered.
*evil laughter* Draco is no match for Ginny when she puts her mind to something. Yay for revelations! :D
Name: VioletJersey reviewed
Chapter 18 on Jun 19, 2009 03:07 am
It's amazing how you can make such hard-core fucking (sorry for the crudeness) so intimate. Hmm, I wonder what Ginny would uncover from Malfoy's past -- and yes, Cedric makes a grand appearance yet again! I'm truly excited about this...
As for helping you w/ your plot, I'm humbled that such a great writer like yourself, would even listen to anything I say! I have a few more questions that I'd love to ask you so pls YM if you're online (my apologies for all the offline messages as well since I'm presumed you were online at the time).
Name: Flighty Temptress reviewed
Chapter 18 on Jun 18, 2009 07:51 pm
Amazing chapter! Not too twisty this time... we get more emotions and... well... ;) It was great and I enjoyed reading it. Now I just can't wait 'til you update and we get the rest of the story!! I'm really anxious to figure out what all is going on; the bargain and Cedric and all the mysterious stuff you've thrown at us. Don't be a stranger!!
Name: Dracogirl reviewed
Chapter 17 on Jun 18, 2009 10:25 am
I feel quite torn about this chapter. I feel bad for Ginny because she's hurting so much because Draco won't tell her how he really feel. But at the same time, I think he's doing it to keep Ginny safe.
Two points I picked up on-1)She glared at him. “What’s the one question you’re not going to answer now, Draco?” He sighed quietly. “Whether I care about you or not.” >If he really didn't care for her, wouldn't he not have to use his
being an Occlumens to tell her his 'true' feelings. 2)Also at the end she said-“I take it back, Draco,” “I do hate you.” Pain flashed across Draco’s face, but it was gone so quickly that she wasn’t even sure she’d seen it at all. “Good,” he said. “You’re better off that way.” >Again if he didn't care why would it hurt him if she hated him???
Oh and please no comeuppance for Draco!
Name: girlMalfoy reviewed
Chapter 17 on Jun 17, 2009 06:10 pm
Look, we all learned Napping spells the very first summer of Junior Death Eater camp, all right? The worst you could call it is a not-terribly-nice Dark spell.”
That line reminded me that this was supposed to be a crack fic before the plot ran away with Anise.
Why is Draco so adamant about denying his feelings? Would it put them in more danger if he agreed? Since his main goal is to keep both of them alive, I'd have to say yes. Does that mean Cedward didn't give Ginny the whole truth when he gave her that spiel about "love can save him"? And how are they under the city and yet the vampires haven't come out to say hello? I guess because they're Muggle vampires, Draco can evade them better?
I loved your ramblings. Unfortunately, they're about the only semblance of crack this fic has left. There's too much angst, and Junior Death Eater Camp isn't enough to dispel the feeling of impending gloom and doom.
The writing is as stupendous as always, and even if people end up dying I'll still read it because, frankly, I'd rather have you make me cry than some two-bit knock-off trying to make me laugh. b29; I wish you speedy updates.
Name: SansMarine reviewed
Chapter 17 on Jun 17, 2009 11:49 am
Fantastic, I'm starting to see some character variation--which is awesome!! I love your portrayal of our lovely couple, but it's nice to see further development from the personalities you have established in your numerous fics. I hope it continues! I really enjoy your phrasing--you have a gift!!
I hope the plot continues to steadily build without tripping itself up; I can't wait to see how you tie in Twilight mythology and themes with Draco and Ginny's world.
Name: Enchanted reviewed
Chapter 17 on Jun 17, 2009 06:39 am
You've fooled me and reeled me in for the last time. :-P
I will read this story and any other story you claim to be short or otherwise when I see it listed as completed on the story page.
No doubt I think you're a wonderful and talented writer, but I emotionally invest myself in your stories only to have them drag on into an emotional plot quagmire.
Thank you for your stories I do enjoy them very much, but I'll just wait for this one to be complete. Thanks Enchanted
Name: MemoriesToLast reviewed
Chapter 17 on Jun 16, 2009 01:27 pm
Another good chapter in which Draco is annoyingly aloof and Ginny emotional, I can't wait till the next twist is revealed!! Honestly, when the saying "circles within circles" was invented, they'd been reading one of your fics! I did enjoy the skit with Nick, I eagerly await his next appearance!
MTL
Name: holly black reviewed
Chapter 16 on Jun 16, 2009 05:22 am
wow sucks to be draco no more lies lol sorry it took so long to update ive been traveling
Name: Jordanza reviewed
Chapter 16 on Jun 16, 2009 02:04 am
ahhahahahha shes so EVIL!!! can't wait for more!!!
Name: holly black reviewed
Chapter 15 on Jun 15, 2009 06:56 pm
seriously harry potter twilight star wars and the beatles i think you looked up my true loves and started writing love you
Name: Dracogirl reviewed
Chapter 16 on Jun 12, 2009 07:59 pm
I loved that this chapter was ALL Draco/Ginny interaction. Some interesting things in this chapter. Draco remaining so cold about his feelings, or rather lack of feelings, for Ginny. Her Gryff spirit making her want to stay and fight for him.
Now that he has the 'Cuffs of Truth' on the next chapter should be interesting, especially since Ginny has to tell the truth also.