Name: quirky_vixen reviewed Chapter 1 on Sep 17, 2009 08:54 am
Wow! you are terrific writer :)
I loved Roger....
It's wonderful how you brought seemingly forgotten scenes from the series like Frank Bryce's murder back in focus...
I absolutely loved your Draco and your scene descriptions are superb!
Keep up the good work.......something tells me I am gonna be addicted to this story in the future but please update soon ok?

Author's Response: Thank you so much for your sweet review :) Your compliments and feedback are invaluable. I'm sorry about the lack of updates. I did have a second chapter written long ago, however, I just wasn't happy with it. After much revision, what you're reading now is what I am truly proud of. My motto is quality over quantity, however, I deff. will be working on improving my update speed. Thanks again for reviewing love! :)
Name: quirky_vixen reviewed Chapter 1 on Jul 18, 2009 06:04 am
Very,very interesting! I like the way that you are writing it like a book, especially the ending to each chapter and Draco seems convincing so far and I totally agree when you say that some vital scenes are missing that should be written about .
Keep up the good work, and I am most definitely looking forward to an update :)

Author's Response: Thanks so much for reviewing...haha, yes, I just decided that everyone needed a little bit more of classic-JK Rowling writing style in their life ;D
Name: hedwig reviewed Chapter 1 on Jul 15, 2009 11:40 pm
Hi!
Thank you for this beautiful first chapter. I think you have captured Rowlings style magnificently and I'd be very happy to keep on reading!

Author's Response: Wow! Thank you so much :) I really tried to emulate J.K Rowling's style here. Haha, yes, I'll get onto that second chapter right away!
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