Name: b1elliot reviewed Part Two on Jan 29, 2014 08:38 am
Good chapter. The varied time frames makes this story all the more interesting.

Author's Response: I was afraid all the POVs and settings would make the story seem too choppy or confusing, but I'm glad you think this format works! :D
Name: SeverelySnaped reviewed Part Two on Oct 18, 2009 03:25 am
The picnic was awesome :D "Does she eat all your food?"

Author's Response: Thank you. :)
Name: DracoGinnyLover reviewed Part Two on Oct 07, 2009 07:13 am
So far this is a really good story! I can't wait to see what Luna is up to. Good Luck! :)

Author's Response: Thanks! :D
Name: ish reviewed Part Two on Oct 06, 2009 05:20 pm
Hey! I really love your writing style! :) I also love how you've created realistic occurances in time before the HP series really began. It's also nice to think Ginny had a crush before she met Harry, looking forward to more updates! :)

Author's Response: Thank you very much! :D
Name: CCC reviewed Part Two on Oct 06, 2009 04:52 pm
The Malfoys attracted the attention of the people around them in the same way that a flame attracts moths. The acquaintance of one with the other burned just the same; she, of course, knew from experience.

I love this line. It's one of the best lines I've ever read. This is such a unique idea for a fic. I can't wait to read more.

Author's Response: Thank you! That is one of my favorite lines. :)
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