Name: caughtinmyownworld reviewed
Part Three on Aug 06, 2014 09:07 am
Ngaaaww. Poor bubba
Author's Response: They're both in a pretty awful state at this point. :( Thanks for reviewing!
Name: b1elliot reviewed
Part Three on Jan 29, 2014 08:42 pm
Wow such a powerful chapter. Love the kiss, it deserved an award.
Author's Response: Thanks so much! Glad you liked it! :D
Name: wandap1016 reviewed
Part Three on Oct 09, 2009 09:29 am
Wow this is such a great story. I love how it’s all coming together through the memories Luna is collecting. I can’t wait to read more, please update soon :- )
Author's Response: Thanks so much! :D
Name: ish reviewed
Part Three on Oct 08, 2009 04:00 pm
Another really great chapter! :) I've fallen in love with this story!
Just one small correction....
October 22, 1997
Pansy still remembered the unfortunate conversation she had overheard at the beginning of seventh year a few months later as she walked down the same corridor, with Draco by her side.
If the confrontational kiss took place in May, than it would have been in Pansy's sixth year not her seventh.
Other than that it was lovely! Looking forward to more soon! :)
Author's Response: Gah! How could I do that? Haha. I'll fix it as soon as the editing option is available again. I think the time line confused me. :) Thanks for pointing that out, and for the review!
Author's Response: Oh! I see what I did there. There should probably be a comma before "at." She didn't overhear the conversation at the beginning of seventh year, she remembered hearing at the beginning of seventh year. But now I see that that's not very clear, so I'll change it when I can. Thanks again!
Name: Hiddenangel reviewed
Part Three on Oct 08, 2009 10:44 am
this is great, very intriguing, can't wait to see what happens next.
Author's Response: I'm glad you think so. :)
Name: DracoGinnyLover reviewed
Part Three on Oct 08, 2009 10:29 am
Bravo! This was a wonderful chapter. It was about time for them to show the other there feelings. Good Luck with the next chapter! :)
Author's Response: It only took them, what, several years? Haha. Thank you very much!