I love the style of writing. So often I find that writers can only keep up the level of cheeky narrative for only so long, but you managed it masterfully and led into the main story with a great anticipatory ending. :)
Author's Response:Guess I answered your second review first, huh? Whoops.
Well, anyway, thanks for this one too!
what a nice refreshing voice and plot. please update.
Author's Response: Thank you! This fic is only a twoshot and already completed. I'm attempting to load the second chapter right this instance, so it shouldn't be too long before it goes up.
I really liked this story in the challenge. I found it to be very original and followed scuba's prompt brilliantly. I, personally, found both yours and Robyn's to be the most creative fics.
I love Ginny as Ms. Resentful and Draco as the spoiled brat: "Draco loved cheese more than anything else in the world; and being a selfish, uncaring brat, that extended to people as well." -- Heheh
The formatting is a little wonky. You might want to look into tweaking it as it is a tad distracting from your lovely tale that you are weaving.
Other than that, this is a refreshing non-clichéd piece (not too many serf-Master pieces out there that I know of).
Well done. Now bring it home.
~Lia
Author's Response:Oooh, thank you.
I had so much fun being the narrator in this; the introductory chapter especially just flew out, and I even giggled as I wrote it. :)
Thanks for the note. I have since edited that.
Thanks! One reason for that is, I think, because no one wants to make their fics totally AU - they want to change events in the storyline, not use the characters to make a new storyline altogether. And Master-serf fics would generally have to be more AU than people prefer to write. That's my on-the-spot theory, anyway.
Next chapter's submitted, so I shall indeed be "bringing it home" soon. ;)